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WhiteWing1 — Sisters of the Stars
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Published: 2011-10-28 05:49:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 839; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 27
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I told you guys I would draw Summer Star again lol. This Summer Star (left) and Winter Moon (right) they are sister unicorns. Star is showing Winter the beauty of the night, Winter has just come into her powers.Summer Star's ability is to see into the future while gazing into the night sky.
Winter Moon's ability is to call upon the power of moonlight to heal
I've decided that I like these two so much that they will appear in my comic later in the story. XD Can't wait!!. They are soo much fun to draw lol. The role they will play will be a surprise! But it will be important!! I also have another surprise in store!
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This is too too sweet! Sister ponies looking out for each other! With one glance of this picture, I instantly knew there was a story and personalities that went with it :]
Ways to improve: I love the stairs within their bodies, there is much to see and quite a lot a beauty within it, but there is still something missing. It all falls in line with personal taste, but I really love value and depth. It's a bit more difficult, but you can still add shadow and value without taking away the main focus which is the stairs inside them. It's a whole different kind of creature of a technique to add shadowing( trust me, i know cus I STILL can't figure it out myself! 
Their bodies are adorable and very pony like. Super cool how you made them look feminine even though they are horses. I love it, but there is still an awkward spot among the lineart: the younger sister's back left leg is a bit too large and the angle isn't quite right. Also, the heels on the back legs for both ponies are a bit too high, although cartoon pony-style might be like that, my personal taste calls for lower heels :]
That's all! Super duper duper cute picture! PLEASE keep making more!
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Thank you so much for your critique. I did this one late last year, and since then I have learned to properly shade and have done a better job with my art. The hooves have always been an issue in this style, I tend to make them look too stiff. I plan on recoloring this one in the near future to see how much I have improved over the months. Thank you again, it has really helped
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You are so welcome 
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The background is brilliant. As far as critique goes there are a few niggles with the anatomy and I would probably have take a closer colour for the line art to make it less harsh but that's personal taste.
Given your aiming at MLP:FiM style I would have a look at some images of Princesses Celestia and Luna in the same poses more than horse skeletons and musculature. If you look at Princess Celestia's stomach vs Summer Star's you can see that the line should be straighter and possibly lower as it is on Winter Moon's. Similarly Winter Moon's neck could do with a slight curve as Summer Star has.
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Thank you for the critque XD I'll make a note of what you said and work on those improvements! I appreciate your thought and anlyzation of my work, I really appreciate it!
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This is so gorgeous!! I love the style it's drawn in :3
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Thank you! I'm have a few more I'm fixen to upload in ths same style. I really appreciate your comment! XD
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No problem! Looking forward to your upcoming uploads
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Thank you! I appreciate the applause. lol I'm really glad you like it. 
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