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Description                                   Pain
                          Pain is a illusion
                 Created simply by the mind to combat
                                 Fear
                    But when you have a fear of pain
                        thats when it all goes
                                 Whack
                     And reality creeps out the back
                                 door
                        Because if pains an illusion
                        created only to combat fear
                        then why are you still there
                              And i am still
                                  Here
                            if pains an illusion
                          then i hold no delusion
                           towards your intrusion
                             you should be gone
                        not right here in front of my
                             turning sweet honey
                              into something
                                  ugly
                      because if words are a loaded gun
                           you'd be blown to bits
                             by the words
                         i aim to kill you with
                        but if pains only a illusion
                          created to combat fear
                   then it needs to get the heck outta here
                          pain isn't an illusion
                     because pain on the outside is fake
                          but pain on the inside
                               that's real
                          they say shake it off
                           but what if i can't
                   pain is more than just physical threats
                        pain is deeper than that
                        see if pains an illusion
                           i wouldn't be here
                         and you wouldn't be there

                            we'd both be gone

                         
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Comments: 4

CrumbledWings [2013-02-26 15:59:18 +0000 UTC]

hmmm i kinda like it. Your word choice is surprising at best and the sentencing is really strange, but the poem has a relevant and good theme and a flow that i liked

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whitewolves14 In reply to CrumbledWings [2013-02-27 01:59:56 +0000 UTC]

Thx...? Ya I did on the actual da interface so it didn't turn out like I wanted it

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whitewolves14 In reply to whitewolves14 [2013-02-27 02:03:01 +0000 UTC]

And I misses a word... I shall reupload it better!

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maham007 [2013-02-26 15:29:55 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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whitewolves14 In reply to maham007 [2013-02-26 15:31:01 +0000 UTC]

...?

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