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Published: 2013-02-26 15:25:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 4
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PainPain is a illusion
Created simply by the mind to combat
Fear
But when you have a fear of pain
thats when it all goes
Whack
And reality creeps out the back
door
Because if pains an illusion
created only to combat fear
then why are you still there
And i am still
Here
if pains an illusion
then i hold no delusion
towards your intrusion
you should be gone
not right here in front of my
turning sweet honey
into something
ugly
because if words are a loaded gun
you'd be blown to bits
by the words
i aim to kill you with
but if pains only a illusion
created to combat fear
then it needs to get the heck outta here
pain isn't an illusion
because pain on the outside is fake
but pain on the inside
that's real
they say shake it off
but what if i can't
pain is more than just physical threats
pain is deeper than that
see if pains an illusion
i wouldn't be here
and you wouldn't be there
we'd both be gone
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Comments: 4
CrumbledWings [2013-02-26 15:59:18 +0000 UTC]
hmmm i kinda like it. Your word choice is surprising at best and the sentencing is really strange, but the poem has a relevant and good theme and a flow that i liked
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whitewolves14 In reply to CrumbledWings [2013-02-27 01:59:56 +0000 UTC]
Thx...? Ya I did on the actual da interface so it didn't turn out like I wanted it
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whitewolves14 In reply to whitewolves14 [2013-02-27 02:03:01 +0000 UTC]
And I misses a word... I shall reupload it better!
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