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(Yes, har har har you have my homework.)

This is from the portfolio and therefore is copyrighted as citizen me, (C) Laura Dickson, and not author me. (But I welcome all fan works if anyone feels inspired so long as there's credit.) I understand that screenwriting format is a pain but I'm posting this to get feedback on the content. You can just do normal comments or pick and choose from the survey I have below.

Thanks,
Ann

*leaves an offering of tissues, hot tea, and shock blankets*

SURVEY
1. Was there a moment when you felt lost in the storyline? If so where?
2. On a scale of 1-10 (1 being low and 10 being high) where would you rank the pacing? (Too slow, too fast, or just right?)
3. Which are your favorite moments and why?
4. Are there additions you'd like to see?
5. Is there anything that needs to be left out?
6. On a scale of 1-10 where do you place your emotional response? (1 being not affected and 10 being "ANNIE YOU OWE ME A TISSUE AND A HUG!")
7. When reading the story which do you invasion it as: an animation or a live action movie?
8. What genres do you see in this?
9. Additional comments.

Description
(Yes, har har har you have my homework.)

This is from the portfolio and therefore is copyrighted as citizen me, (C) Laura Dickson, and not author me. (But I welcome all fan works if anyone feels inspired so long as there's credit.) I understand that screenwriting format is a pain but I'm posting this to get feedback on the content. You can just do normal comments or pick and choose from the survey I have below.

Thanks,
Ann

*leaves an offering of tissues, hot tea, and shock blankets*

SURVEY
1. Was there a moment when you felt lost in the storyline? If so where?
2. On a scale of 1-10 (1 being low and 10 being high) where would you rank the pacing? (Too slow, too fast, or just right?)
3. Which are your favorite moments and why?
4. Are there additions you'd like to see?
5. Is there anything that needs to be left out?
6. On a scale of 1-10 where do you place your emotional response? (1 being not affected and 10 being "ANNIE YOU OWE ME A TISSUE AND A HUG!")
7. When reading the story which do you invasion it as: an animation or a live action movie?
8. What genres do you see in this?
9. Additional comments.