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Published: 2005-03-12 05:46:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 41; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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i submitted these lips before, but i felt like they didnt really add much to my gallery, so i decided to try something new. this is really horrible, so dont feel bad if you tear it apart whilst criticizing. i'll get a new one in here as soon as i have time to edit it further.Related content
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I like this sar. I agree with smill on pretty much everything. nice work!
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The lips make me think of rocky horror picture show, even though I haven't seen the whole movie.
What I like is that the first lips are small, then medium, then large, and they make a diagonal line tht sort of pops out, and the diagonal like they make across the picture is heading in a similar directions to the diagonals of the music staff lines ( did i get the correct term there?) but that they don't go along the exact diagonal of the music, theyre just a little bit off and that makes them pop out more, like the lips are coming out of the picture.
You want this ripped apart? okey dokey, I rip if you want to be torn up. The effect u did on the music sheet is cool, but I think you should have sent it thru being made plain black and white before adding the lips, or you at least gotta do something else to take away the random lines of color that pop up at the edges, because they look alright towards the middle but at the very very outer edge the purple and the yellow rainbowy lines on the bottom just get too too bright, and I don't know how you'd go about trying to fix that other than by going to greyscale, or sepia, I'm not sure. Also, I love your random inversions, but I think it would be cool to see them forming a bit of a diagonal in their arrangement, if you get what I mean by that, unless of course you're trying to use the inversions to highlight certain words or notes in the song.
there, i praised and tore, slightly anyway! But overall I really really like this, the lips look awesome especially added over this and having such intense color.
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ohh yeah, more things that i forgot to add. i, too, like the rocky horrorness of the lips. and the random inversions are supposed to be random once again. it seems like they should probably follow a similar pattern like the lips, but i thought to myself, hey, while the lips should be in a line because generally people sing the same words during a song, the harmonies are different hence the different sizes. but the music itself contains many different elements so i figured maybe not randomness, but differentiation amongst portions of music would be important.
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ohh, well, now that you put it that way, i like your thought out reason for having it different better than my random diagonal fetish for having it not. dude i love your explanations almost as much as your pictures, haha!
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for some reason the rainbow thing just appeared. i couldnt go back and fix it without damaging the entire piece. im still trying to figure out what to do about it. i might just re-do the entire thing because i really like the concept and i want it to come out right
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hey, did it do that when you were saving it? sometimes JPEGs do that, im not sure how you can get around it.
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its an interesting concept wad. i like it but, yeah change it a little. lol good work
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