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Published: 2014-07-09 04:10:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 530; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 0
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Journal doll trade withProbably not what you were expecting, but I sketched this pose and really liked it and just decided to go with it
so I'll just throw this at you then
enjoy!
Her half:
Pete (c) Peteosaurus
Kemmy (c) aobas
Art (c) Wickerish
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Comments: 15
anatiidae [2014-07-09 18:32:03 +0000 UTC]
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Wow, this is very eye-catching! I really like your choice of red tones; I find they bring out the colours of the characters nicely. Your lineart is very clean and the dithering on the darker brown of the above character's front legs helps to give a transitioning look from one fur colour into another. The playful poses are very cute as well! I like the touch of highlight along the lineart as well, as they don't add so much of a highlight that it takes away from the image. Lovely work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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To further improve this piece, I would suggest colouring the outlines as an experiment :3 I love the way the bold black outline stands out here, but I think it may look nice to try colouring them. Sometimes it can really help to bring out the colours of the characters :3 Up to you, of course!
Lovely work! Keep it up!
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Wickerish In reply to anatiidae [2014-07-09 23:02:51 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much, seriously ;;o;;
I get what you're saying. I only recently started coloring the lineart inside the pixel and leaving the outlines black; I used to just leave all the lines the same color, but it definitely takes away from the art. I'll try out changing the whole lineart in the future
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anatiidae In reply to Wickerish [2014-07-09 23:10:54 +0000 UTC]
you can only add to it ^_^ And thank you for the lovely reply! I love when people appreciate my critiques.
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Wickerish In reply to anatiidae [2014-07-10 15:22:19 +0000 UTC]
i agree!
you're quite welcome, I definitely appreciate the critique!
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K0suke [2014-07-09 19:22:12 +0000 UTC]
AAA I LOVE THE POSES AND EVERYTHING SASHA THANK YOUUU <333
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Wickerish In reply to K0suke [2014-07-10 14:11:57 +0000 UTC]
YAY I'M GLAD YOU LIKE IT ;;U;;
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Wickerish In reply to castaginer [2014-07-09 15:13:53 +0000 UTC]
YAY I'M THRILLED YOU LIEK IT
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castaginer In reply to Wickerish [2014-07-09 17:39:22 +0000 UTC]
is it ok if i use it on my page?
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JayIsSoda [2014-07-09 04:14:01 +0000 UTC]
//gaspssss
Those pixels omg
This is awesome!!! My favorite parts are the expressions <3
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