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Published: 2009-05-18 14:42:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 624; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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COmission forthis is hers and her friends team ..... I admit that i drew them a bit ..... well not so evilish as I intended on but well ... It looks good :3 I hope you girls like it.
Creds:
Lavvi ©
Meg ©
Echo ©
Art © (AKA ME!)
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Comments: 34
Lineart: Clean, well done
Eyes: Amazing and simple
Poses: Original, they fit the characters
Shading: Between simple and complex
Background: Basic, good techniques
Lineart
It can be difficult to say much about lineart, unless it's absolutely terrible... this came out well, it has clean, thin lines.
Eyes
Another category it can be difficult to critique, in all honesty. But, since there are three characters, it's easier... I'll critique them now. Haha.
They all look gorgeous, you used different styles in all three of them. The eye patch detail is good as well.
Poses
I must say, Meg looks very simple, innocent. I'll bet she's not so much... anyway, the proportions look real, good job. Her wings look awesome; how do you draw them so well? Echo has a sort of badass appeal to her, and she seems to remind me of Terra for some reason. Lavvi's goofy expression leads me to believe that she's the leader of the group, even though she's possibly the most, uh, immature? That's not the word I want to use, maybe fun? Hehe.
Shading
You do some decent soft shading, Tess. The pants on Lavvi look great, almost like something from an anime. The little highlights on Echo's wings look great, keep up! Everything looks natural, there's nothing that looks off to me.
Background
Your background is short, sweet, and to the point, as is my critique of it: It makes the characters stand out. It makes things look awesome.
Never give up, let your dreams fly~
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lol my character is Bad ass, like the way you described her there
Ummm as for Lavender...hate to put you down but she's actualy the most mature of them and mine is the most immature 
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Oh darn... so I was off. Sue me 
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It's hard to believe these three are evil with the expressions you've given them. Cute, Sexy, or maybe even a little dorky but not evil.
One of the things that really sets this particular piece of is that you have this lines going down to the characters, literally drawing our eyes into the characters instead of having our vision float around them. These splatter designs in the background also set it off in a way that makes me think, "what is that? what does it mean?" It also helps pop the vision back to the foreground with the blue lines.
All in all I'd have to say this really works with what you have going on here and it is a pleasant stray from your normal style. Well done.
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This is amazing i luv how meg came out she looks so adorable
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that looks so awsome!!
the lil brown girl in the middle looks like one of my chara
GOOD JOB!!
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thank you but one thing .... I really don't care wheter your character looks Like meg or vice versa o.o
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o.o but...i didnt mean it in a bad way. or do you mean that you just don't care what i say at all?
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no no don't take it like that. I meant that I really don't want to hear if your character look like any of mine/or a friends ... It really dosen't make me any happy it more hurts, even if you don't imply it's theft so does it hurt. And No I didn't mean I didn't care. I Listen to everyone o.o
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so it hurts u that your and your other friends chara's look like other?
aww why? i think it's cool :3
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It hurts because Some peopl Imply that they've stolen ideas and such ... but yuo're nice though.
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NAAHH XDDD i would never think that you stole my idea's
i wouldn't really mind tho 0.0
n yeah i no some people get like that to
no worries
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Like I said to Megan on MSN...that name is so wannabe-badass, which makes it a WADass.
But this picture rocks.
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Strat? Thats a nice nickname for me heheh
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well xD I was lazy to write down you're full name xD
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that's so awesome ^_^
I sometimes forget who knows who on DA
deems like the world just shrunk some more here xD
once again impress pic, done very well
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Awesome picture ^^ looks amzing cool characters 
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Awesome work as always 
Though I will say Lav's expression is a little out of character... I can see her pulling that face if was having a really good day (unlike myself...)
The best here is deffinitely Megan, though, she is majourly adorable as she has always been.
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If you want I can change her SMile into a Slight Frown so it's more like her? and thank you >w<
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I you want to, I mean I'm fine as is...
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Good work Tessan!!!!
You are so good, wish I was that good xD
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You. Are. A. Mind. Reader.
Thats EXACTLY how I always imaged Megs height compared to the others!
Eeee! I love the coloring! 8D
Lavvi looks mischievously evil...Eiko looks like she's come up with a brilliant plan, and Meg looks like.....uh.............PIZZA!
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hehe noo I'm not a mind reader I just studied your art and the Reference I was given and tried to draw her in the lenght I thought She'd be xD I got the impression that she'd be shorter than the Average sonic girl. xd
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Yeah, I'm shorter then the avarage human girl....seriously, all the other girls I meet are taller then me, and I'm 5'2" ;o;
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I dunno how tall I am in inches and feet D: I'm the hortest outta my friends ... but some are shorter than me I guess i'm... average D: I like Shorties >w< More awesome!
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Yes 8D Being short IS awesome....you can zip away from your enemies >8D
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Holly freakin crap!!! :faints:
I love how they all look, i dunno where to start...*pickes self up*
Ok umm well since Eiko belongs to me i shall start with her 
Megan looks really adorable and so very megan like with the angelic expression ^_^
And as for lavvie she looks really cheeky and thats a first for her, i really like that
Well done and thank you very much for this
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