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A picture of my fantroll, Raniaa Siriaa, with her lususUpdated version of her intro:
A young troll is standing in her GAMING ROOM. She is wearing a FAINT SMILE. That SMILE is starting to BOTHER you. Let's just get this introduction over with, okay?
Your name is RANIAA SIRIAA. You live at the top of a TALL TOWER on an EVEN TALLER MOUNTAIN. You like all sorts of video games and role playing, especially of the EXTREME sort. You also like to read troll fantasy novels, and you wish to be like one of those HUMAN-SLAYING, DRAGON RESCUING PRINCESSES that are so often featured in these stories. Unfortunately, you can't be one, because humans don't exist and you are the wrong blood color anyway.
You actually don't have much respect for the social order based on the hemospectrum, because your best friend was culled when you were little because of it, so you go out of your way to make friends with those lower-blooded than you. your blood color is actually a bit lighter than average, but not excessively so and in any case highbloods can get away with that more easily. You are a BORDERLINE PYROMANIAC. Okay, BORDERLINE IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT. But setting things on fire lets out all that stress that would normally be spent killing people. You also like the pretty colors.
You are actually much nicer than most of the other trolls, but you are pretty antisocial, and don't talk much. Your personality is pretty LAID-BACK and CAREFREE, although you are SOMEWHAT CYNICAL and often wonder how other people don't see the irony in life.
Your lusus has given you your fascination and love for ASTRONOMY, being a star dragon and all, and someday you would like to FLY UP THERE with her and see the sky up close.
Your trolltag is constellationFlame, Aand sometimes Rroaarr speech caan sound aa bit like aa Grrowl,
Blood Color: Sky blue (slightly lower than vriska)
Constellation: Draco
Lusus: Star Dragon
Strife Specibus: Trumpkind (a kind of medieval flamethrower cannon bazooka thingy.)
Land: The Land of Fireworks and Scales
Class: Princess (highly active) Heir
Aspect: Dragons (or something. not sure if this is allowed) Drake
Age: 7 sweeps
Fetch Modus: Matchbox
This picture took me forever, but i'm really pleased with it. Too bad my Ipod camera's so crappy.
Other notes: I'm not sure if heir is male-only, but i'm sticking with that until further notice. Her hair isn't naturally streaked, she dyed it.
so... yeah. stuff.
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Comments: 27
Whynothideinthere [2012-10-09 20:21:00 +0000 UTC]
The extra AA s are a bit much, humans don't exist in the troll universe, the dragon is a bit to similar to a canon lusus, the Trollhandle has to be ACTG format, there is no troll dye, and there is no Drake Aspect. I have no idea what a Drake hero would even do. So, needs some work. Otherwise, great troll, Lily!
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Whynothideinthere [2012-10-09 20:50:27 +0000 UTC]
Humans don't exist: that' why it specifically mentions "humans aren't real"
I have sort of a headcanon where in troll mythology, humans are about the equivalent of trolls in human mythology, with a few tweaks of course.
There isn't any troll dye? where in canon does it say that?
And once again, non-canon aspect I made up because it's cool and somewhat logical.
also, i changed her handle, just haven't updated it here (It's constellationCorsucation) and actually I tried out the quirk on pesterchum and it's pretty cool, and not hard to understand.
and you misspelled my name (Lilly)
also, I know that dragon lusus is overused and similar to canon, but I can't really drop her entire theme just because of that.
Once again, thanks for the reviews!
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Whynothideinthere In reply to WildFireTheWarrior [2012-10-09 21:06:33 +0000 UTC]
OOOOOOOH sorry Oops! I knew it would be wrong when I typed Lily! Never mind about the dye (Our mutual friend Sydney says a lot of things non-canon). I'm glad that you like my reviews! Sorry if they're a bit harsh. I get that from Syd.
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Twillyane [2012-09-04 17:11:18 +0000 UTC]
I can see that you are already talking to Batterwitch about the issue of your choice of lusus, here's my recommendation to the matter
Yes, star dragon sound a bit out there, but let's look at the canon trolls shall we? Well, at least one specific canon troll: Aradia.
This is my absolute favourite thing to do with fantroll lusi: mix two creatures! Because I agree with you: it would be a pity to change her lusus completely when you've already themed her on the dragon, so here's what you do (if you follow my recommendation of course, not trying to force you, haha) you take the dragon lusus and mix her with another creature entirely. I'd recommend something small and less intimidating than the dragon so you get some sort of balance to it.
Either way, it looks like you've received a lot of other reviews as well, so I'll leave it to that, unless you have something specific you want more reviewing on
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adorableBatterwitch [2012-09-03 22:00:03 +0000 UTC]
K,im here from my fantroll review group,so lets get started.
I dont see too much wrong so im just going to point some things out.
- WAAAAAY too colourful,the clothing plus the hair is too colourful for a troll ( unless they are into fashion ) The jacket may be to much,and pleaaaaaaase,colourful hair isnt right for every troll.
- Star Dragon....that...no.Thats just.....kindof stupid acually.Maybe just,tone it down a little.
So all thats really wrong with her is that she needs to be toned down quite a bit.
Other wise shes nice.
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to adorableBatterwitch [2012-09-03 23:23:04 +0000 UTC]
I did what I could with the markers, but In reality she would be toned down a little.
as for the colors, she dresses like that because it's her way of disregarding authority without getting culled for it. actually, I just made that dumb excuse up but i'm sticking to it.
and star dragon does sound pretty stupid, but I was trying to find a way to make a dragon lusus more original. Any ideas for alternate names?
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adorableBatterwitch In reply to WildFireTheWarrior [2012-09-03 23:32:44 +0000 UTC]
Hmm,maybe you could just try and find a better design then dragon type lusus...?
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to adorableBatterwitch [2012-09-03 23:35:11 +0000 UTC]
I... guess? She's got this whole dragon theme going, so I can't get rid of the dragon, but this is really the only plausible design I could think of
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Tokyomewmew45 [2012-09-02 16:44:23 +0000 UTC]
shoot man. just when i was starting to like your idea of a princess class of god tier, Hussie's tumblr says all god tier classes and aspects have to be one syllable... T.T and i was thinking of a Guardian of Hope... sorry dude, cannon rules are not to be broken... [link]
exact excerpt:
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halcyonrags asked:
Are all God Tier titles made of monosyllabic components?
Yes. Class and aspect, one syllable, always. This is a rule.
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...shit man...
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Tokyomewmew45 [2012-09-02 20:53:45 +0000 UTC]
Quick! Think of an acceptable synonym for princess! I think drake can replace dragons...
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Tokyomewmew45 In reply to WildFireTheWarrior [2012-09-02 21:43:44 +0000 UTC]
Queen? I don't know if that would be good, because queen and princess are two different things.Hier is essentially the same thing as a princess. They both ascend from one position to a point of power. Drake is good.
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Tokyomewmew45 [2012-09-02 22:04:07 +0000 UTC]
No, nat queen. and since apparently knight isn't gender-specific, Heir porbably isn't either.
So heir of drake? that might work out
Or possibly... DAME OF FLAME
no jk
hmm...
do you think that paint might be an acceptable substitute for creation?
and guardian... hmm..
maybe just guard?
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Tokyomewmew45 In reply to WildFireTheWarrior [2012-09-02 23:03:13 +0000 UTC]
Hier of drake has a nice ring to it, actually. I like it.
Paint sjust sounds wierd... paint is a manmade object, every other aspect is from nature. perhaps source?
I also was wondering if maybe we could create our own fansession! Each of us can make 6 trolls. So far i have A female indigo blood, a male yellowblood, a male rustblood(blood color not finalized), A female tealblood, and A female tyrianblood. you could make trolls of all the blood colors left, but leave one. We also need ONE mutantblood. And i want to stay like the original 12 trolls, so Raniaa should be the only one with color streaks. I want us to have 6 males and 6 females. Once i've finalized my 12 trolls, i will post them. Do you have any ideas? Tell me 5 of your best fantroll ideas, only 5 because i think Raniaa is a solidified choice for one of the characters, as well as Tirafi.
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Tokyomewmew45 [2012-09-02 23:32:51 +0000 UTC]
Maybe, I also have another friend wh kind of has his troll with mine (not moirails, because alreadt taken and anyway that would probably end badly), so maybe each have 4?
if he wants to
's fantroll is [link] and his information is [link]
after this, 'm going to ask him if I can drag him into this
also, i have decided to make raniaa's culled mutant blooded friend a character too. (still culled, but eventually brought back to life through dreamself/prototyping shenanigans) It actually works out to be at least acceptably canon! (color is bright red-orange by the way)
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Tokyomewmew45 In reply to WildFireTheWarrior [2012-09-03 01:19:14 +0000 UTC]
okay that sounds good. now to figure out which two trolls to scrap...
The revival thing sounds a bit complex... If you feel you beed to hang on to this idea, then the whole session would kind of be thrown off by the lack of a 12th player for a while We shouldn't reuse the same blood color twice. Limebloods are all dead so that's impossible. And making two mutantbloods is just a bit much...
I think Raniaa would be better off prototyping with her lusus, just like everyone else.
But you still didn't answer my question. Can i please have some info on the other fantrolls you want to include? Like bios and stuff?
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Tokyomewmew45 [2012-09-03 02:08:04 +0000 UTC]
Her dream-self has been alive since she died, so she's there from the moment they enter the medium. also, her lusus's ashes (pheonix lusus btw) were prototyped, and it is able to finish up the process for her. (the reason she gets a server player in the first place is because someone's (most likely raniaa's) dream self was awake too and was able to tell her.
so there's raniaa & dead girl...,
there's possibly snobby fish princess, who isn't very well developed yet, apart from the only reason she has "friends" is that she's a seadweller and therefore rich and popular.
I'm not too sure about her, because she'd be a whiny useless idiot the whole time.
there's also a more favorable gold-blood with a 3-tailed labrador lusus.
she's pretty nice but can sometimes be a HUGE B*TCH (get it? ) and has an interest in clothes design, especially literally killer neckwear. somewhat telekenetic, and for some reason good at generating electric shocks (tied into aspect, probably maid of spark or something similar) Kanina is a possiblr name for her. based on the constellation canis major
other possible ideas: beartroll, pegasus troll
is it a problem that they're all female?
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Tokyomewmew45 In reply to WildFireTheWarrior [2012-09-03 12:52:38 +0000 UTC]
Can she be dead like Aradia was dead? As in dead, but still existing as a kind of ghost-thing?
Snobby fish princess should have purple blood, because we already have an hieress.
I like the yellow blood. Perhaps you could switch her to a male? A gender switch seems like it would not be Detrimental to her character design.
i think we all should make 2 males and 2 females, just to keep the genders equal.
Beartroll sounds good, but pegasus is something we should scratch. I think we have enough mythical creatures with Raniaa's lusus, Multi-tailed dog lusus, and Phoenix lusus.
But remember, since you want your friend to be involved, you will have to scrap one of those characters, because we all can make only 4 fantrolls each now. Unless he wants his fantroll to be the only one of his to be involved. Also, even if he is, he'll need a different blood color, because Raniaa already has filled in the spot for a Cerulean blood.
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Tokyomewmew45 [2012-09-03 15:19:44 +0000 UTC]
I know, they're basically all based on constellations.
and i don't want dead girl to resemble aradia too much :\ Maybe her dreamself can use trollian? that would scare the crap out of everyone.
by the way, what color lowbloods are left? I kind of imagine beartroll being a lowblood for some reason. beartroll can be a he, and also possibly a hero of space (unless you've already got another one).
The multi-tailed dog is more a joke than mythical. do you know how strong labrador's tails are? Now imagine 3 of them. and it would kind of screw her design up to make her male, not least because that would ruin half the jokes, bit I guess it could be possible. I'd rather not though
i think that we could technically chassify his blood as light indigo, which would put him between equius and vriska. that might work.
If we're already having a heiress, then that kind of negate's fish princess's whole better-than-you complex
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Tokyomewmew45 [2012-08-19 20:33:10 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering if Raniaa would like a moiraileigance with my fantroll, Tirafi. Tirafi is a calm, intelligent girl. This is her bio, that i have just made up, and may be changed. 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Your name is TIRAFI RELKER. You live in a DOLLHOUSE-LIKE HIVE with many empty rooms and locked doors. You spend most of your time in only two of these rooms. The first of these rooms is your RESPITEBLOCK, which is adorned in FANCIFUL AND FRILLY ITEMS and your collection of BALL JOINTED DOLLS, many of which you made yourself. While many would say such dolls are only for NEWLY HATCHED WRIGGLERS, you love them, and care for them like a lusus would to their grub.
The second of these rooms is your TEA ROOM, where you enjoy hosting CIVILIZED TEA PARTIES for your many LOVELY GUESTS, most of which are BALL JOINTED DOLLS. Occasionally, your lusus will join you for tea, but usually will end up making a mess because ostriches CANNOT HOLD TEACUPS.
You are are very CALM and COLLECTED, as should be expected from a RESPECTABLE, MIDDLE CLASS TEALBLOOD. You know your place in life, and do your best to show it, as you are an avid follower of the HEMOSPECTRUM. You wish for all to ACT ACCORDING TO THEIR BLOOD CASTE, and try your best to CALMLY CORRECT those who do not.
Your Trolltag is SpectralAdversary, and you tend to speaI< in a
Blood Color: teal, only a smidgeon higher up on the scale than Terezi, but not NEARLY enough to be even Slightly considered cerulean blooded.
Lusus: Ostrich
Strife Specibus: Marrionette's control (allows her to attach puppeteer strings to enemies, controlling them. she can make them walk off cliff, or knock themselves out, but she can only control one enemy at a time, making her vulnerable to ambush attacks.)
Fetch Modus: weaving. The item she wants to select is at the end of a small, slightly twisty tunnel. She has to push a thread trough to the end of it without touching the walls of the tunnel to retrieve the item she wants. The walls of the tunnel are lined with the captcha cards of other items(the more recently she captchalogued them, the closer to the beggining of the tunnel it is. older items are in the walls near the end of the tunnel) in her sylladex. The part of the wall the thread accidentally touches will be lined with the captcha card of another item, which will be the one she takes out. The only way to get what she want out of her syladex is to either make her way through the maze of tunnels without touching the walls (similar to the scary maze game) or dump the entirety of her sylladex out and take what she wants, which is far too messy for her tastes.
Land: Land of Dollhouses and Miniatures
Class: maid
Aspect: Heart
Age: 7 Solar Sweeps
She, being a very calm girl, and very concerned with people acting properly, could calm Raniaa's Pyromaniac urges. But it also would be a very funny relationship, what with Tirafi caring very deeply about people acting according to their blood caste, and Raniaa not giving a crap what the hemospectrum says. I can just see it now:
Raniaa would be visiting Tirafi's hive, reluctantly having tea with her. Then Tirafi would calmly lecture her "Setting
And Tirafi would sigh, and calmly ask her if she wanted milk with her tea, knowing she can't ever change Raniaa's mind, no matter how hard she tries.
I think they would make the best moirails!
WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Tokyomewmew45 [2012-08-19 21:26:12 +0000 UTC]
Why not? That would be fun, With one of them being uptight and serious all the time and the other one being loose and relaxed. I would imagine that Tirafi would be an OCD neat freak, while Raniaa can't see the floor of her room
also, do you think a matchbox fetch modus would be cool for Raniaa?
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Tokyomewmew45 In reply to WildFireTheWarrior [2012-08-19 22:15:20 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Moirails! And yes, Tirafi is a neat freak, but also she sort of isn't. Her respiteblock has shelves on almost every wall for her dolls to sit on. And her Doll Workshop has doll parts scattered all over the desks, tables, and shelves, and the drawers are full of her drawn out plans for new dolls. Glass eyes roll around on tables, unpainted doll heads lay next to paints and paintbrushes used for face-ups, body parts for various sized dolls are strewn about the tables, lumps of clay for scupting are sealed in bags to keep moist and kneadable, crack filler and sheets of sandpaper lie near the clay, broken parts fill the trashcan, various sized doll wigs are on mini wig holders or are cut up and ready to be modified to fit a new head. She has an old, foot peddle-powered sewing machine in the opposite side of the room, where she makes the clothing and shoes for the dolls. Rolls of fabric like in a fabric store line the walls on this side of the room, and many more are in storage in the various closets of her hive. Small fabric swatches and sewing patterns are everywhere. Various spools of thread fill an entire shelf. Sometimes she'll step on needles on the ground. That room is one she doesn't let many people into, however. she doesn't like it that much, and isn't too proud of how messy it is.
also that sounds like a great fetch modus! go for it!
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Tokyomewmew45 [2012-08-19 22:21:14 +0000 UTC]
cool! Heh, she reminds me of Rarity
What do the dolls look like? Baby dolls looking like grubs would be so cute!
I think I'm going to go do some pixel art now.
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Tokyomewmew45 In reply to WildFireTheWarrior [2012-08-20 00:12:38 +0000 UTC]
no, they are ball jointed, victorian style dolls. google search it.
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to Tokyomewmew45 [2012-08-20 01:16:42 +0000 UTC]
oh. they at least look like trolls, right?
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DarkeonWarlord [2012-08-16 20:29:05 +0000 UTC]
Draw Nepeta and Tezeri. My friend is a fanboy of both. its purrfect. H3H3
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WildFireTheWarrior In reply to DarkeonWarlord [2012-08-16 21:14:30 +0000 UTC]
already did
[link]
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