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Commission forHere is a story they wrote to go along with this commission. This is THEIRS, not mine :3
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The Sea Weasel and the Furry Dragon.
It was the middle of the day on an island seemingly uninhabited by life-forms other than trees. Theo the buizel swam towards this very island to try and find something to eat before continuing. The violent wind from earlier had yanked him into the air and had him fall into the sea a good while later, and he was now starving after long swim. He soon got close to the island and began to slow down, giving his body some rest.
“Oh man… I hope there’s something I can eat here… I could down anything if it would stop my belly from rumbling…” Theo said as he got out of the water and onto the sun-bathed sand that caused his paws to feel a bit hot. He looked around but couldn’t see far into the trees. He then smelled the air to see if there was any trace of a berry or other creature. He caught a strange smell of a living creature after a short while and got confused. It didn’t smell like any other pokémon he had seen before, and he had seen a lot of different pokémon. More careful now, he wandered into the forest in hopes of finding some kind of food since there was something here.
As he wandered deeper and deeper into the ever-thicker woods he began seeing signs that there indeed was something here. Markings after the creature’s feet or paws were marked in the earth and small pieces of fur were stuck in various bushes or sharp objects. Theo looked at the trails and sighed almost in relief. Whatever had passed through here had been quite small, smaller than his size at least. Feeling braver now, he pressed on into the woods to find the creature, and get a good meal.
Meanwhile, a small black shape was seen near a spring in the middle of the island. It looked like a black, furry dragon hatchling and it was currently trying to catch a berry floating in the water. Without success, it sighed and walked away with its head drooping.
Not long after, Theo came to the same spring where the smell was stronger than before. He looked around for the anything out of the ordinary and spotted an Oran berry floating in the water. He leapt into the water and grabbed the berry, gobbling it up in a matter of seconds. He then sighed happily and patted his a bit fuller belly, deciding to stay in the water for a bit and closed his eyes to take a nap.
An hour later, Theo woke up and, yawning, got out of the water and shook most of the water out of his fur. He felt his stomach grumble again and he sighed. “Urgh, an Oran berry is not enough huh?” he said to himself and walked into the forest again to try and find something to eat. ‘Perhaps that creature would be willing to serve as a meal…’ he thought and began tracking the creature again.
After searching for quite some time, Theo still couldn’t find the creature. Sighing, he decided to head to the beach to try and catch some fish that he could eat instead. After reaching the beach, he jumped into the ocean and with his speed; he was easily able to catch so much fish so that he could survive for days. After leaving the fish beneath a rock to keep them hidden, he decided to find some Oran berries to go with the fish and walked back into the forest.
However, the smell of fish had attracted the black dragon who easily found the fish Theo had hidden and began feasting on them, almost crying of joy that he had finally found food. However, he didn’t notice that Theo had come back from his search. The buizel jumped at the sight of the strange creature that was eating his food but managed to stay quiet and carefully sneaked up on him, careful not to make a sound. The dragon didn’t notice Theo or his smell since he was too busy gobbling up the fish to notice him.
“Why, hello there. Mind telling me why you are eating my food?” Theo asked, grinning. The dragon yelped, shocked and scared as he turned around. “O-Oh… These were yours?” he asked, shaking a bit. Theo sighed and nodded. “Yes. Fish doesn’t magically appear beneath rocks, now does it?” he said, raising a brow. “No, I guess not….” The dragon answered, gulping nervously. “Well, I guess you might be able to repay me for the fish…” Theo said with a grin on his face.
The dragon looked up at the buizel. Why didn’t he like the sound of this? Theo grinned wider and began inspecting the dragon. He was smaller than the buizel, small enough to go down without that much trouble. “Now, what’s your name?” Theo asked as he positioned himself in front of the dragon. “U-Um… I’m G-Gorthy.” He answered, noticing the size difference between them, the low rumbling of the pokémon’s gut and his grin. He began trying to move away but bumped into the rock behind him and gasped. “Well, my name is Theo, and it’s now time for you to repay me.” Theo said, moving closer to Gorthy as he licked his lips. Gorthy shuddered as he saw Theo lick his lips. He was completely sure of what the buizel was going to do to him and he tried to think of a way to escape.
“No use trying to escape.” Theo said, lunging forward with his maw open as he grabbed Gorthy’s shoulders and engulfed his head. Gorthy’s eyes went wide and he began flailing around, but to no avail in the pokémon’s iron grip. Theo began gulping in more of the dragons head, having slight troubles with the horns. However, after a short time he managed to gulp them down as well, Gorthy’s head now going down his throat.
The dragon was still struggling and sometimes managed to land an ineffective kick on the buizel, who seemed to not even notice it as he savored the taste of his dragon snack. Gorthy’s shoulders soon entered the hungry pokémon’s maw and he knew that it was hopeless to try anything at this point. The muscles around were too strong and the buizel had an iron grip on him, preventing him from moving too much. He just went limp and shuddered as he imagined what it would feel like to be eaten and digested by a predator larger than he is.
Theo felt his prey go limp and chuckled, swiftly taking in more of the dragon just in case he would try to escape again. After a few minutes, Theo had managed to swallow down Gorthy who was now curled up in his stomach, sobbing quietly at his bad luck. Theo poked his much rounder belly and heard the sobs. He sighed contently and decided to toy around with his prey for a bit before he revealed a little secret. “Well, you got the fish but I got you. Fair trade, right?” he said, grinning. “Yeah, this is oh so fair! I ate maybe two of your fish and you eat me whole!” Gorthy exclaimed in reply, beginning to struggle wildly again. “Oh shut it. You’re not going to die so calm down already.” Theo said, laughing. Gorthy suddenly stopped moving, unsure if he had heard right. When his brain had worked out what the pokémon had said he became even more pissed off. “I AM IN A STOMACH! Of course I’ll die if I’m in here! This is where food is digested!” he shouted, throwing an even larger tantrum in the stomach, making Theo fall over. “Yes, but if I get you out fast enough the acids won’t build up, which equals no death.” he said, sighing as he got up again. Gorthy was still fuming with anger over being toyed with to this extent. “Then why did you eat me in the first place if you’re not going to kill me!?” He exclaimed and threw his head against the stomach walls, making it bulge quite a bit. “I did it to punish you for taking my food. Also, you have quite the nice taste.” Theo replied, chuckling as he rubbed his belly. Gorthy Just growled and laid down to rest. “You better have told me the truth about the non-fatal part.” He said, grumbling. “I promise. “ Theo said, burping which made his stomach vibrate.
An hour or so later…
Theo had gotten Gorthy out of his body and wiped some saliva off his mouth. “See, no lies anywhere.” He said, smiling at the dragon. “Well, I guess you aren’t like the other predators I have seen who trick their “food”…” Gorthy replied, shaking off the worst off the saliva and various fluids from his fur. “Well, I am not usually like that.” Theo said, smirking. “But I don’t trick them into believing they will be safe only to digest them.” He assured, patting the dragons head. Gorthy purred a bit against his will from the patting. “So, I guess you will leave soon?” he asked, sighing. “I’m afraid so. I have friends to get back to so I’ll quickly gobble up the fish and be on my way.” Theo said, sighing as well. Gorthy’s head drooped a bit. Even though Theo had eaten him, he was the first creature he had ever talked to and not been attacked by. “Will you come back? It gets very lonely here and I can’t swim…” he asked, looking a bit sadly at Theo. “I don’t know, maybe.” Theo replied, beginning to chew on the fish. “I hope you do…” Gorthy said, sighing.
Later, Gorthy looked sadly as Theo swam off towards land on the other side of the sea. He then sat down and watched as the pokémon disappeared. “I really hope you keep your promise…” he said, looking at a small amulet he had made in all haste. Theo stopped for a bit and looked at the second amulet Gorthy had made and given to him. “I’ll try to come back…” he said and continued his journey to find a way back to his friends.
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Had a good bit of fun drawing this one up, especially with the accompanying story. It's been a while since I've done any Poké-vore, and I had forgotten how fun it was. Hope to do more business with them in the future~
Don't like vore? Don't Look! Simple as that~
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Comments: 14
poppy4526 [2015-05-03 20:07:26 +0000 UTC]
the sea dragon (i think because i see a fish skeleton)
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totally-honest [2013-08-13 23:18:08 +0000 UTC]
I never understood this whole fetish for wanting to be swallowed alive.
doesnt seem very pleasurable...or socially normal for that matter.
I mean if you go out and buy a giant python and climb down its throat I doubt you'll be having a fun time.
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Etsoree In reply to totally-honest [2013-08-13 23:33:11 +0000 UTC]
Vore in a nutshell for people would be able to feel a calm sense of comfort. Possibly loving tight, enclosed, warm places, though the wetness of a stomach interior is strange to enjoy. For the predator itself would be the feeling of having a good, large meal, and the possible willing prey in it would be closer to that of a regular meal since food cannot talk back, so it's obviously willing.
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Nyphr [2013-08-13 22:34:06 +0000 UTC]
Damn, I'm gonna have to come back to this... read the story. Looks amazing. The inside of the belly, I mean.
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awesomeZero [2013-08-13 19:59:30 +0000 UTC]
to answer the question most would probably say yes
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Zirion-Goatz [2013-08-13 19:28:03 +0000 UTC]
O_O I'm speechless... This is just AWESOME!!! I'll be damned if I don't commission you again ASAP xD
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WildTheory In reply to Zirion-Goatz [2013-08-13 19:28:46 +0000 UTC]
glad you like it x3 I'll have it on FA as soon as it's back up.
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Zirion-Goatz In reply to WildTheory [2013-08-13 19:38:30 +0000 UTC]
Ok I hope I got Theo right in the story xP
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Zirion-Goatz In reply to WildTheory [2013-08-13 20:18:34 +0000 UTC]
Phew ^^'
Well, I look forward to commissioning you again!
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