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Published: 2006-01-28 10:01:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2997; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 338
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page 2 of my scrapped fan comic.characters are beamer, polaris, and rodeo (all my own)
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Once again, great work on the general details (yes I say that a lot, but you deserve it and you know it 
I especially like the perspective relations here, especially in the last panel. Beamer (well I think it's him I'm not all too familiar with your characters) being up front like this, while Polaris and Rodeo stand back and seem a little trouble really shows composition work here. He seems so happy to be on Cybertron while it seems the others are a little reluctant, as if something isn't right. ^^
Nice work once again!
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O.O thank you! and really... this is pretty much exactly how the story is supposed to be at this point. ^^ i'm glad i've managed to convey that! thank you thank you!
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Well then, you know you did a good job! The best way to know you're on the right track with a comic is that you can pretty much tell the story without narration or the speach bubbles
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Looks like they's having a good ol' time. X3
Rodeo reminds me of Energon strongarm for some reason. o.o I want more info on him. X3
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he's the group pilot. rodeo is a autobot scientist with a bit of a wild side. he was created on earth by perceptor and has a bit of an obsession with what the humans refer to as the old west and john wayne. so he tries to emulate the speach patterns and mannerisms from that time period and often it hides his true talents and abilities from those who don't know him.
his alt mode is a beat up looking old pick-up and he is armed with two energon pistols and an energon lasso (one of his own inventions).
i really should post a bio and some more shots of him around. no one really knows much about him.
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Ooooh. He might get along with Boondocker then. 
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i don't think i've seen any pics of him (have i?) at least i don't remember him as well. got any links for me?
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I don't think I've put him on dA. XD
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I think that's the only version I have of him that's online. o.o He actually started as Sturgis, a biker-based TF with a motorcycle mode with a southern accent...and that just didn't work right. XD So I took out the accent, gave it and the mannerisms to Boondocker here. Though they do both kinna act like the Duke Boys on occaision.
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Polaris~
You are so sexy~!
Darting here and there~
Throwing hammers everywhere~
(sung to the Lola... she was a showgirl, tune)
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Hey! I know that smiling bot on the left side!
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Pretty good work. Except this is the same idea prowler used for his Movie comic!
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Pretty good work. Except this is the same idea prowler used for his Movie comic!
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*chuckle* i promise you this is far different from prowler's comic. shumworld was doing something similar with a large number of fancharacters though. prowler's comic mainly features his redesigns of existing g1 characters. ^_^ that and i've been on and off this project for a good year and a half.
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hey dude so long as ya had fun.
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Youuu.... Need to go work for Hasbro. Ever since Dreamwave died the boxart has sucked (Cybertron, anyone?) and... I'd love to see Beamer boxart. Seriously. XD
Another good page! I just... wish I knew what they were saying. ;x;
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heh. i never really really plotted out the dialogue... i mean, i had a basic story but i never decided on the exact dialogue. the first couple pages are pretty much rodeo thinking about the good ol' days back on cybertron when beamer and polaris correct him and make fun of him because of the fact that he's never actually been there. XD
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