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Published: 2010-09-11 18:54:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 6008; Favourites: 90; Downloads: 35
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原文：
"嘿，呃……往好的方面想，你這樣變得可愛多了？"
"混帳！！"（扔筆）
"嗚哇！好危險！"
"我想你最好趕快找出原因，然後把我變回來，現在！"
"噢……好…"
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大感謝~~
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※if I have made a mistake in my English.,please tell me!
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Comments: 70
wait how did he get small? he was normal sized in the last page.
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if I have made a mistake in my English.,please tell me!<--- There are some mistakes in this. For one, you don't place a period then a comma, and second, you place a space after your punctuation. This goes for anything that has words after said punctuation. Lastly, capitalize the first letter in your sentence. But other then that, your English is awesome! (Yes I know that's grammar, not not word placement and such, but whatever!) Good job!
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Wow this is great 
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OMG POCKET SPYYYYY!!!
GIMMEGIMMEGIMMEGI- -backstabbed-
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whow that was a skip i though he was tall in the first 3 pages how did he get small or is that what your going to explain?
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In the first panel; "On another hand, you are way way more cute now." would work better as "on the other hand, you're way cuter now."
In the second panel, "woah, that's dangerous!" or "hey, that's sharp!", or some similar phrase would fit a little better, speak a little smoother.
Otherwise, it sounds fine.
Oh, and, I LOVE your Engineer
He's so adorable!
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I don't know how can I say for thank...!
thanks for youuu!!!!!!!!!!!!! :3!!!!
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His so cute tiny it makes me wanna cry. But I love how you have Engineer his one of my fav classes good to see him as a Main in a story
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Thanks for you love him! XD!
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God the spy is so cute! Make more!! If you don't I'll kill you with my bare hands!!!.........please...and thank you...
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SORRY! I'll start my work again
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What were we talking about? Did I send you the wrong message?
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No I didn't! I am a smart ass!!
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I'll but not the moment ˊWˋ
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This page has been out a month now and I just now found it? >:I
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No it's fine!
I was mostly yelling at myself.....
IT'S NORMAL.
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