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Description
oc character based off the doom monster created in a WAD.Name: Balragoth
Aliment: Evil Neutral (eventually changes to chaotic neutral)
Creature Type: Demon - Archon of Hell
Age: 245 (equivalent of a 29 year old human)
Gender: Male
Height: 7 feet and two inches
Weight: 450 lbs (mainly muscle and some fat)
CE Large outsider (chaotic, demon, evil, extraplanar)
Init +11; Senses darkvision 60 ft., low-light vision, true seeing; Perception: good
Aura type:
Aura flaming body, unholy aura
Defense
thick rough skin, fire proof, and poison proof, Resist acid 10
Hp: 2000 out of 10,000
Offense
Speed: 8 out of 10
Melee: flaming claws, bite, maw, kick, punch, shred with claws, horn attack
He has powerful demonic powers and psychical attack moves that can easily kill a human with one blow.
Poison Smog: Balragoth has has the ability to breathe out dangerous toxic smog against its foes. If the victims is caught in the smog, he or she will suffocate to death while the smog burns their skin and their lungs from the inside out.
Baleful Rage: He a lot smarter then the average demon, and does not normally used this move unless he was out of options, but in rare occasions he will go into a state of pure rage where he brutally rend their victims apart, with only their maw, claws, and feet talons. Because he does not have the pathological need to torture, there no use for it unless his enemy really pisses him off.
Triple Fireballs: Balragoth can shot three fire balls at a time, but rapidly doing for excessive time drains his demonic energy. He can control the movement of the fireball were ever he pleases.
Black Star: A very deadly move that allows Balragoth to combine all of its unholy powers to created a large black ball of green fire to shoot at their foes. What worse for the victim, that it is guided by the user so the chance of the victim missing the attack is low. As a result, the victim will be reduced to nothing more then a pile of burnt flesh. However there is a down side to this, if he not careful while using this attack, Balragoth will lose some stamina and hurt itself in the processes.
Firestorm: He can releases waves of flames that can easily incinerated his foes, however that moves takes a toll on his health because it takes soo much power, the more he uses it, the more it harms him.
Weakness and flaws:
Balragoth can easily lose stamina if he uses his fire ball in a fast excessive rate. He more likely to avoid a battle then face it head on, especially if he in his weakest state, however he willing to take on a challenge against anyone who dumb enough to fight him or someone with the same power stats as he has. When he at his weakest state, other demons in the Earth plain can sense his weakness, and will target him. He prefers to work alone, he never got along with any other the demons and he never will. He hates the water its one of his weaknesses, in which case he cannot swim. He has to avoid places with very powerful holy items which can weaken his demonic powers. His arrogance, get him into a lot trouble, and has a couple of bad addictions.
story:
Demons exist for one reason, to destroy. Where their more lawful counterparts, the devils of Hell, seek to twist mortal minds and values to remake and reshape them into reflections of their own evil, demons seek only to maim, ruin, and feed. They recruit mortal life only if such cohorts speed along the eventual destruction of hope and goodness. Balragoth was once a great and powerful achron demon, who was respected and feared by many. However his reputation fell short after losing a battle against a well known demon hunter. He never heard the end of it from his demonic brother, so he killed them out of rage and left the demon world, in hopes to find to find the demon hunter and kill him. He has not given up his demonic ways and he willing to cause torment and destruction where ever he goes, normally on any the poor victims he sees or encounter him. However the race of mankind, seems to changed his perception on human slowly by day by day. He still hates humans with a fiery passion, but seeing some of them made him curious of their strange ways.
If has to take advantage of a poor soul he will..if he has to destroyed entire village and bring forth evil to the lands, he will. He searches for the legendary demon hunter that defeated him last time, and he won't stop initll he finally dead, evne if he has to burn the whole place down just to find him!
Balragoth is an assassin, a murderer, and a sadist, yet his mellow personality allows him to have full control of his actions and usually he not the first to start a fight . With no need to eat (although he relish the flavor of animal and human meat), he can wait for a little while. He does not take much pride of killing but prefers to ripped anyone apart when no one is looking, if has to he will do it in front of others to freak them out. He never stays in one place, and he will move on to the next town in search of demon hunters to kill. He uses his human form to get around places. Balragoth was actually happy when he left the demon realm, this gave him the chance to clear his thoughts, he may never returned to his hellish realm but at least he will have his revenge.
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Comments: 21
GnarledContradiction In reply to winddragon24 [2013-07-26 03:08:22 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! ^_^
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HellraptorStudios [2013-07-03 12:20:00 +0000 UTC]
really nice, i see the Darksiders influences. Thats game is such a good inspiration
Great work
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winddragon24 In reply to HellraptorStudios [2013-07-26 02:54:30 +0000 UTC]
yup, I just love the art of Darksiders
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HellraptorStudios In reply to winddragon24 [2013-07-27 09:52:09 +0000 UTC]
its a amazing world.
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GodOfFknWar In reply to winddragon24 [2013-07-27 07:33:14 +0000 UTC]
I love the way he looks!
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TrenchCloakFigure [2013-06-18 03:29:22 +0000 UTC]
This looks EPIC. And kudos for the excellent story too.
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winddragon24 In reply to TrenchCloakFigure [2013-06-20 14:31:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm was thinking of making him Evil neutral or chaotic neutral since he not on the demon horde's side, but does not want to be on the humans side either. He eventually meets one of the humans that will travel with him. I'm thinking it should be an orphaned young male.
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TrenchCloakFigure In reply to winddragon24 [2013-07-17 17:10:50 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, sounds good. He reminds me of a character called Bun Bun from the Sluggy Freelance web comic.
I recommend it to you so you can try to advance Balragoth further. MAKE HIM THE KING OF BAD ASSES.
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winddragon24 In reply to TrenchCloakFigure [2013-07-17 21:38:00 +0000 UTC]
Isn't Bum Bun a rabbit? I did not expect that... thanks anyway...
Balragoth will have a young boy to company him, its funny cause the kid is almost always optimistic, he does not know that his positive talking is really driving the demon's nerves over the edge, he trying to suppressed every ounces of his demonic ways not to torched that boy. But the demon needed him because the boy is pretty good tracker, their relationship is kinda like cranky the old man and the up beat happy boyscout from the movie UP. The demon has to tolerate with him, but perhaps maybe on their j ornery their friendship will grow stronger.
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is-kill [2013-06-16 01:02:49 +0000 UTC]
I like how he's looking menacingly over his shoulder. (And I extend the praise for his story to this deviation as well. :3)
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winddragon24 In reply to is-kill [2013-06-16 01:10:29 +0000 UTC]
I wanted him to be evil but not completely, he is somewhat of an anti-hero, because he does saves lives without realizing it.
example: he kill a infamous criminal/murderer that pissed him off, but unintentionally saved the lives of other, because he did not know that criminal was planning to go on another killing spree.
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is-kill In reply to winddragon24 [2013-06-16 01:15:35 +0000 UTC]
Hooray for unintentional acts of goodness!
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winddragon24 In reply to is-kill [2013-06-16 01:26:00 +0000 UTC]
I know right? Ironically its consider one of his flaws but he does not know that yet, however I that may become an advantage later on, since he won't be traveling alone much longer, one human will try to tag along.
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