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WindSwirl β Tori no Uta (ENG) Cover
Published: 2013-05-03 20:04:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2358; Favourites: 157; Downloads: 0
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EDIT: Guys I decided to work on this again. Stay tuned!~
And if you haven't read it yet, I hope you will enjoy the story! At least 10 new pages are planned to be added, 2 are done by now. I will upload them, soon, like one/week.
You can already read them at my Patreon:Β www.patreon.com/WindSwirl
OMGOMGOMG My own manga
Some of you have seen the storyboard at my sta.sh already, right?
... I've got lots of time most recently so I decided to make a manga.
I've been thinking about this for quite a while now, actually ... for years.
But I never had enough time to get on with it ... right now I do
I'll upload pages once a week from now on, so please be patient!
I consider this the first page so next one will be out next Friday ^^
EDIT: Like mangakas ever keep their deadlines, lol.
I forgot to say, I'm mainly using stocks by screentones in this manga. If you need some for your own projects go there, their stocks are amazing!
Artwork, Characters and Story Β© by WindSwirl , me!
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This is a very nice cover! Your shading is done really well and your anatomy and folds are correct! Plus the composition looks wonderful. However, this piece lacks impact.
The reason why I say this is because despite the fact that character's position and surroundings are amazing, the title becomes distracting because it is covering part of your characters pretty little face. When drawing the cover for a manga, you must always make your character(s) the main focus in order to draw in an audience. I would say to either move the title up a little more or get rid if the black part of it and just have the words visible with the picture in the background.
Of course, these are just my personal opinions. All in all I can tell you worked really hard on this e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you so much!
I wouldn't have thought that covering her face might be a problem, but now that you're saying it, I guess you're right!
Thank you so much for taking your time for this, I will remember this for the furture and fix it, maybe
(the problem is that I added the boxes before I finnished the picture ... no good idea x.x)
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No problem!
I'm glad this was helpful~ Keep up the good work.
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I have similar tales about song birds. I suppose I should read yours to find out if "Great Minds, Think Alike."
It is nice that you are copy written. Oh boy I wish I could be just like you when I grow up. I almost there. I am glad you decided to continue working on the project. Way to go Wind Swirl.
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Oh, than you very much! I must have missed this comment for some reason, sorry ;v;
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I read the manga, and I loved it! Great job!Β Β
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Ich sag ja, du kriegst das super hin!
Ich steh ja ganz speziell auf die HΓ€nde x3 Die krieg ich nie hin D:
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Dankeee
Oh ja, HΓ€nde sind schwierig. Meistens benutz ich meine eigenen als Vorlage xD
Was ich aber weitaus grausamer finde sind FΓΌΓe. Vor allem mit Schuhen dran. DAS geht gar nicht <.<
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