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Published: 2019-01-29 08:21:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 2023; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 2
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Welp, we are nearly through the end of the prologue! Gang's all here, and heading to Sandgem! One page to go!~

Overall, liking this page a was a iffy for me but there are definately panels I really like even now and I'm actually excited to work on page 5, as its going to be quite a little project! However I'm excited!

Also hope to make little sketches for Severance rather than just these pages! SO stay tuned for that as well as for more streams from my end to maybe kick myself into gear a little more!

I know I've been moving at the rate of a old tortosie to get these pages done, (I swear im the D Gray Man of Nuzlockes.) But I do plan on making a better schedule that I will be following as close as I can. Cause I don't want to be like.... an old woman by the time I finish this, so its time to pick up the pace!! But rest assured I do have a schedule in order to help me make this comic actually post more consistent. That's my new years resolution; get Severance on a regular schedule! The fact i at least got this done on the first month of the year is a good start, and I hope I can use my plan to regenerate some buffer and maybe even get onto the schedule I shoulda done long ago!

 Hope yall enjoyed the page!

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WintersPheonix In reply to ??? [2021-01-01 06:16:40 +0000 UTC]

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Pcaara In reply to ??? [2020-12-31 20:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Also I knew something was up!!! Gosh, not vulcan's luungsss 🥺

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WintersPheonix In reply to Pcaara [2021-01-01 06:18:57 +0000 UTC]

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Cozycosmicat [2020-11-02 07:50:42 +0000 UTC]

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WintersPheonix In reply to Cozycosmicat [2020-11-02 17:06:54 +0000 UTC]

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Velink [2019-06-01 17:23:33 +0000 UTC]

The backstory gonna be dank serious and dark!

I don't think I am ready for complete exposition anytime soon!

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WintersPheonix In reply to Velink [2019-06-01 17:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Well I guess we will have to see~
But boi you may not be excited but I AM~

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Velink In reply to WintersPheonix [2019-06-02 03:51:29 +0000 UTC]

hoo boy, I will need to brace myself for that

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WintersPheonix In reply to Velink [2019-06-02 08:10:13 +0000 UTC]

: )

I hope it is up to expectations~

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Carameja [2019-05-26 14:44:35 +0000 UTC]

This got dark real fast!

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WintersPheonix In reply to Carameja [2019-05-26 20:06:00 +0000 UTC]

hello darkness my old friend

Yeah these things happen oh boi

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Pcaara [2019-05-04 03:06:04 +0000 UTC]

oh the narrative tidbits get JUICIER PAGE BY PAGE   

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WintersPheonix In reply to Pcaara [2019-05-04 20:54:55 +0000 UTC]

: ) Im glad

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Dingopox [2019-04-19 16:14:27 +0000 UTC]

Back again, the story gets deeper! Oops, missing the Next link!

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WintersPheonix In reply to Dingopox [2019-04-19 17:46:42 +0000 UTC]

I knew I missed something~ Thanks for letting me know! And yasss.... we getting deeper~

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spacesriot [2019-02-10 01:12:30 +0000 UTC]

HOW COME I JUST READ THIS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
THIS IS GONNA BE WILD I CANT WAIT TO LEARN ALL THE LORE N SHIT DUDE
KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WintersPheonix In reply to spacesriot [2019-02-10 01:31:22 +0000 UTC]

OMG THANK! IM HOPING MY COMPUTERS FIXED CAUSE OMG I WANNA GET STARTED ON PG 5!

I lve your comic too btw!!

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ganonboars [2019-02-01 17:27:05 +0000 UTC]

hyper boy nolan,,,,,,, i love he

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WintersPheonix In reply to ganonboars [2019-02-01 20:21:30 +0000 UTC]

im a glad ;v;/

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Sanctell [2019-01-31 06:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Lots of mystery opening up here, and MC's name still eludes us!

Although, I think I see a tell on one of the characters but I won't know for sure unless we see it again 🤔

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WintersPheonix In reply to Sanctell [2019-02-01 01:32:42 +0000 UTC]

Mc's name drop is around the corner! We should know it soon! (thank goodness)

Oh? Im curious about that tell? I'd love to hear a theory or something if you have any~

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Sanctell In reply to WintersPheonix [2019-02-02 00:55:37 +0000 UTC]

I think Lucas covers his mouth when he's being dishonest. He might be doing it this one time because he's laughing and body language isn't a precise thing, but if I see a similar situation then I guess I'll know that about his character.

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WintersPheonix In reply to Sanctell [2019-02-02 02:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm you are getting somewhere for sure, cant say what tho

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CyanideKris [2019-01-31 01:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, it's getting mysterious...
Also hah, everyone is like, dark colors, neutral expressions and then there's Nolan in bright orange xD

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WintersPheonix In reply to CyanideKris [2019-02-01 01:34:02 +0000 UTC]

yes it is~
Omg yeah, one of these things is not like the other. XD

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WildfireWhim [2019-01-29 23:47:53 +0000 UTC]

:0!!!! what's goin on with these kids!!??!

also I really like the glitch effect on the text at the bottom of the page! Is "but then I'd be lying" in reference to the last thing that Vulcan said or smth different? in general? 

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WintersPheonix In reply to WildfireWhim [2019-01-30 00:11:37 +0000 UTC]

who can say uwu

Thanks! Gosh that was hand drawn so im so glad! (That last panel was an annoying one!) But as for what the source of it is........ uwu who knows.

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EraOfThirteen [2019-01-29 23:19:57 +0000 UTC]

oh my im really curious about everything in this nuz! what happened to these childrennnn

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WintersPheonix In reply to EraOfThirteen [2019-01-30 00:09:00 +0000 UTC]

Who can say?

But thanks man!

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the-real-fairy-amy [2019-01-29 22:21:22 +0000 UTC]

OWO

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WintersPheonix In reply to the-real-fairy-amy [2019-01-30 00:09:08 +0000 UTC]

UWU

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silverbreeze42 [2019-01-29 21:14:01 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,,,,,, so much mystery,,,,, im yelling,,,,,,,,i cant wait to learn more about EVERYONE

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WintersPheonix In reply to silverbreeze42 [2019-01-30 00:09:26 +0000 UTC]

AAAA IM GLAD! I HAVE plans

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Kage-Bushi [2019-01-29 20:42:01 +0000 UTC]

One thing I don't get is why Pokemon are taking, is it to show what they are saying or communicate?

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WintersPheonix In reply to Kage-Bushi [2019-01-29 20:53:47 +0000 UTC]

talking you mean?
Oh there's a reason for that

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Kage-Bushi In reply to WintersPheonix [2019-01-29 21:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah!
I mean, if they were talking like pokemons but not showing what they are doing, it would be hard to guess.

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WintersPheonix In reply to Kage-Bushi [2019-01-30 00:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeeep~

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Kage-Bushi In reply to WintersPheonix [2019-01-30 10:59:43 +0000 UTC]

I just answered myself XD

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WintersPheonix In reply to Kage-Bushi [2019-01-30 20:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Well no, your depiction isnt right but I'll be explaining what's going on with pokemon talking very soon

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Kage-Bushi In reply to WintersPheonix [2019-01-30 23:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh oki

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Leafmonch [2019-01-29 16:35:47 +0000 UTC]

Whatever is going on with your plot I am EXTREMELY intrigued. There is enough about the backstory trickled out in each page to both sate me and make me soooooooo curious it hurts. That's the good shit. 

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WintersPheonix In reply to Leafmonch [2019-01-29 20:40:20 +0000 UTC]

I have plans but thanks soooo much!
I'm really glad things are trickling in and I cannot wait to show the plot of this thing!
I hope to make the intro a slow burn into the main concept and I'm excited to actually get it going!

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Aozora210 [2019-01-29 16:26:53 +0000 UTC]

HI LUCAS IS GOOD. I REALLY LOVE HOW YOU REDESIGN HIM YEEEEHAWWWWWWW

Overall this is a good page!! I love the interaction here, between the human kids and also the Pokemon! There's a lot to unpack here, but I'll wait for the rest for more!!! Gosh I really really can't wait 8DD

I'm guessing some semblance of fire or weird weeds gas is involved but hmmmmm I'll just

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WintersPheonix In reply to Aozora210 [2019-01-29 20:43:03 +0000 UTC]

IM GLAD HE TOOK A WHILE! AND IM SO GLAD YOU LIKE THIS DESIGN!

I'm glad you like the interactions and yeah there's a t o n to unpack, 
but we are slowly getting into the main themes. I really can't wait for pg 5 so I hope you enjoy!

HMMMMMMMMMMM we will see

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novamallow [2019-01-29 11:30:55 +0000 UTC]

If you see a fork in the trails of blood, take it

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WintersPheonix In reply to novamallow [2019-01-29 20:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

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TwistedEerie [2019-01-29 08:33:57 +0000 UTC]

YEE FOCKIN HAW IT HERE BABY, SHOW ME THE WEED    

DIALOGUE IS ON POINT BETWEEN CHARACTERS AS USUAL and haha bless this mess of characters theyre all such good children and i lov e them all very much, even in these 4 pages they have great synergy and really do feel like old friends, and boi youre leaping with improvement between pages and its so satisfying to see

I fockin love Lucas and so good to see this trio, plus still mad respect for his design cos I dont have the balls or the arms to make such a detailed character in a comic hgjfkd

fave panel is of course the flashback one, im a sucker for them + I like it when theyre more blurred/in a slightly different style than the normal comic style n shet

anyway ive rambled enough, very cool Kanye


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WintersPheonix In reply to TwistedEerie [2019-01-29 20:50:42 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Thank you ma dude! They are weird ass children but they are MY CHILDREN!
Omg thanks so much tho its great to see the kiddos all interacting!
(Yeah Lucas's design was hell to make)
Yeee those were lineless and I died!

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TwistedEerie In reply to WintersPheonix [2019-01-30 13:38:37 +0000 UTC]

i fockin love them all so much i'd give them my blood

b o i at least you have the balls to do LINELESS ID RATHER DRINK A BEEHIVE

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WintersPheonix In reply to TwistedEerie [2019-01-30 20:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Lineless is relaxing thank you very much XD 

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