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Published: 2020-02-21 05:23:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1907; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 4
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HOLY SMOKES THIS FEELS LIKE A LOT! Sorry this page took soo long! This sorta page was pretty ambitious, with a lot of things to do. Of course I felt like this -> . However, it was something i needed to get used to with this comic! It was just a big one to start off with... Still I hope you enjoy! I'll be taking a teensy break (like end of this week or for the rest of the month depends) from Severance but I'll be also gearing up to get done the big things planned once slow burn ends. I cannot believe I'm over halfway down ch 1 that doesnt even make any sense to me like what is this!? There's alot of stuff to do and I gotta make sure its the best it can be!!
Also thanks to everyone who nominated Severance for Extravaganza! I planto do some special EX stuff very soon!
Also thanks for reading I really do appreciate it! Yall make these long pages worth it!
Notes: Originally Shinx was part of Nolan's team. That doesn't really fit into Severance so I just went with a pride of them...... However Lilac did take down the shinx in game! (Strong bat girl~)
Luxray line was my fave in Gen 4 (made it my starter when I was a lil kid in place of my piplup) so not being able to use one in this run was a lil bit painful but... at least i got to show them here!
thanks to for helping me colour
and for reference on the one Lucas pose
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Thank youuuu!!!!!
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You are welcome!!
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i swear i only just started reading this and i'm already super attached to all the pokemon dfghjkLKJHG,,,these comics are so good though, the shading, lighting, background, poses, etc, are all amazing. amazing job on these ^^
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I'm really glad you like them all! The pokemon
are characters I want to shine a lil more, so they should get a lil
more prominent in screen time.! Im really glad you like the work tho,
I put in a ton of effort! Seriously tho, thanks for commenting and im
so so so glad you enjoy my work I can't even describe it ;v;
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aA np!!! i'm super happy that you're glad lmao?!? thank you! can't wait to see more of this comic. c:
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I cant wait to present the rest!~ Again thanks so much for brightening up my day with this comment!!
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i can't wait to see the rest!!
aa i'm so glad this brightened your day ;v; it means a lot to me that my comment matters to you!
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Ohhh first time meeting Electric types, there really is something wrong with them. D:
That was a very good and dynamic battle, and perfectly easy to follow! Loved how Lucas and Tulip work together and look out for each other!
Oh boy, I wonder if this would have ended differently if Vulcan had stuck to Tackle instead of trying to get the fire working...
Also panels like the last one are my favourite thing ever hell yea!! Three scenes in one and seamlessly fitting together, that's sooooo good!
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Yeah there's something up with them alright! I'm gad they seemed...
off though (makes the intention more clear.)
Omg thanks so much. qvq I was so worried it would be a hard
fight to follow, so its good to know it worked out well! Oh yeah,
I'm glad you like that too its pretty significant between Tala's style
and his own. (That bow isnt there for show i guess XD)
Yeah there's definately the wonder on how different the fight could've
gone, I assume better than the result we have in canon.
Thank you!!! Im starting to really like those long panels that just tell the story
as you scroll. Tho those last couple panels were my fave to do~ So im glad you liked
them too!
I'm glad the perspective of zooming in and out of different scenes was fine! (the transitions
were really worrisome for me so im glad they read well!)
Thanks for commenting, I really really appreciate it!
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aaaaa I know I said it already but this is such a good page!! the fight is so dynamic and cool, and I love how the trainers got involved too!
the shinx are very intimidating also, so nice work on that!
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Yes, I really wanted intimidating shinx fight, so it didnt seem like we were
yeeting kittens or something. Up that danger factor.
(This is why you dont go into the tall grass alone kids!)
Seriously tho Im really glad you liked this page, and gosh yeah
it was fun getting them involved but drawing it was very much screaming.
Still thanks for commenting, it means a ton to me!!
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I'm so glad aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ I love drama! Very very much~
I'm glad you liked this page~ I'm very excited to show more things in this comic~
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THE LIOS... OR SPYNX...... WHATEVER THEY R... THEY ARE ATTACKING OH GOD........ TALA IS DEAD IM CALLING THE P O LI CE
jokes aside I LOVE THIS PAGE AND ALL THE ACTION AAAA
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WHATEVER THEY B IT B DANGEROUS.
AND RIP TALA TIME TO END SEVERANCE.
IM SO GLAD!!!!! IT MAKES IT SO WORTH IT!
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i still have no brain cell bUT
I still love this page so much I know it was death but it was totally worth it, Im genuinely excited to see more pages like this in the future for your fight scenes cos OOF this iis the good food heck YEAH
this is such a good page tho and i think its one of your best if not the best so far so be proud my man <33
they may be falling but hey at least pit gets watered??
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Yeah it was a hell to finish, but I do agree that I think it was
an important step! Gotta show that danger, so naratively its worth it.
(First impressions and all.)
I'm honestly excited to show off the rest of ch 1, especially since we
are litterally on the brink of slow burn. It feels like ages but we are actually here!
Also yeah you'll be getting more fight scenes like this, lemme tell ya. You will.
But no man seriously thanks for supporting me!Like really!!
Also yes, give Pit some nice sips of water.
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YE HAW cant wait till they find the weed and always love every page u make bro so pls keep it up
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asfghjkd There's a part of me thats screaming XD But im glad you love every page!
I shall keep going! (End of slow burn is upon us )
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This way you made this battle and the end, it's all just
And Lilac is best girl
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I'm glad you liked that end panel (that was honestly my fave) and im glad you enjoyed the first major fight of severance.
Lilac is best girl no contest get out of here Tala. Lilac is best girl. (But seriously Im super happy you like Lilac!)
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I can see the effort you put in the last panel.
Tala you will shine at some point of the story, but now it's Lilac's time.
(but yeah, I'm eager to see what happen next)
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Thanks! It was ..... a lot... XD
One day Tala... one day.
(I'm glad! I can't wait to show more!!)
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Oh that last panel of showing how big the drop was and into the ocean was just >chef's kiss< nice.
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Thanks a ton Mel! It was a nutty scene to do but it was soooo fun to make!
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Fantastic page btw. The action flows really well. Love what you did with the paneling
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In all seriousness, thanks so much for the compliment. I'm glad the action flowed enough, I was worried it would seem too choppy! So im glad it turned out alright! (also thanks that panelling was murder at times but it i'm glad you like it so much!)
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//pokes lil badger kid
Rip Vulcan my poor son.
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The drama!!! The intrigue!!!! What a cool battle!!!
rip Tala and Vulcan I can’t believe the nuzlocke is over already
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THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! Much drama! Much intruige!!!
Dang, time to pack up bois, Severance is finished! Everybody go home!
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Wow this page was absolutely worth the wait!!
Man this battle was intense, the flow of the panels and transitions were top notch!! The atmosphere and colours lended well to the entire scene too, overall a fantastic page! Congrats on breaking into the double digit pages!
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Thank youuuu! Gosh I cannot believe its double digits it doesnt even seem possible!
Im so glad it was worth the wait and that everything flowed together and worked well.
(I was very worried that wouldnt be the case.) I'm glad it was to epectations of how intense I
wanted it to be! Thanks so much for the compliments and commenting, that just makes this all that
much more worth it!
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Wow! Really epic battle scene! Love the atmosphere of the scene as well!
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Thanks! It was tough but im glad it turned out good! And im glad you liked the atmosphere too!
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No problem! It looks like it was a challenging page, but you pulled it off well!
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IT certainly was qvq
I'm glad It was pulled off well~
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SO MUCH PURPLE! Yeah... yeah things got really real huh?
Haha I wish I coulda adjusted some of the panels but oh well
Lucas being able to shoot close range has to be a plus somewhere!
But ye there was a lot to this page, and im glad a lot of the action hit
their mark.
Im glad you liked the shinx designs, the alpha one was pretty fun to deal with,
and gosh just... thanks so much for commenting and complimenting this page,
gosh it means a ton!
Also thanks man! Here's to 10 more! (I would say 100 but thats.... a lot XD)
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Yooo, that's such a dramatic battle scene! I love a setup where the humans are vulnerable.
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Thank you so much!! Yeah I do too! I really wanted to establish some things and that sorta set up was really fun to introduce!
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