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Published: 2010-06-09 20:36:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 876; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 33
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A small play with photo's and airbrush.Related content
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That's a pretty good piece that I've rarely seen before. It has a nice impact with a good idea even though I think you could've worked a bit more on it to make it more realistic.
The lighting is pretty good on the center and has the feeling of another world that you don't know where it leads to. But the contrast is too strong with the rest of the background which is way too dark. I think you should add more gas around the black parts of the picture.
Also the starfield is nice and easy, but in my opinion it's too flat and you can't really see it. I suggest, like I tell most people, to use a soft brush and randomly click in the background and always change the size of the brush to make it random. Then add a really soft outer glow to it.
The text has a pretty good message and helps emphasise the theme of the picture, but I think it could use a better font and also "no one" is spelt in two words lol
For the rest I would consider maybe adding a color or two more since I noticed you add a soft orange/brown on the middle left part of the image but it still feels a bit monotone.
Great job overall though, most people see the "portal to another universe" immediately. I hope I could help! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you for your detailled critique. It helps me a lot to know what to improve and how to improve.
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You're welcome for the critique. That's what it's for and I sure hope it will! 
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It looks great!
might I just say "TO THE ANOMALY!!!"
lol Futurama... XD
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