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Published: 2002-08-08 02:12:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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delectable or nothing beats an end stopped silenceAll girls are pretty when they walk
though i'd rather watch them crawl
And I can't say I mind the ones with skirts above their knees
Because I know soon I'll have their backs against the walls
I can't help but grin when we find the time to talk
at all the ways that I'll make her moan and scream
Sometimes a round out on the floor can set me free
but those moves in bed that's my American Dream
Oh theres nothing in a moonlight drive that lacks
the wind and radio can be enough for me
even though I know the ride gets better in the back
where words like love get me a guarantee
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Comments: 4
i bet you have girls lined up to hear the latest installment of such tongue-in-cheek degradation. Here, sex-fiendish poetry is at it's best. i rather like both installments, although I think you should add more...you provoked me to write my own little ditty-ode to the sex thanks
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mostly i havent liked either version of the poem, though i like this one least... both of them seem rather forced in most places. between the third and forth stanzas here it's awkward, but i actually do really like the last one. i keep meaning to talk to you in person about it, but i manage to forget every time.
i like the kind of sinister lascivious feel this could have if it didnt keep tripping me up when im trying to read it, grinning. i think this could be a really entertainingly wicked poem if you wanted to keep working on it, but as it is now it's just kind of frustrating.
~l
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It's uspposed to be offensively funny... so i guess the poem was effective. Thanks for the... comment (I guess that's what it was)
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Well um...I don't agree with the topic....but um..yeah, I like it...funny kind of....:/ Hm...oh well...It's good.
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