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Published: 2014-12-20 21:35:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1200; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 0
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Description Woooooo! It's about time I made a Tundra! xD

anyway, everything about her is based off of me. Everythiiiing

shes gonna be my second sona, my first being Cynthia 

and I'm also very proud of this pic so I'll put a critique on it 
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Comments: 29

EndieYT [2014-12-20 22:02:57 +0000 UTC]

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I got to say, this is a really interesting design. The coloring is perfect for an Icewing, and it's eyes really fits in the description described in the book, dark and shiny like a marble :3

As for the anatomy, the shaping is rather interesting, I really like how the horns were in a giant cluster, just the way I imagined it would be. As for the wings, I love it's shaping. The patterns look great too on this dragon, and the tail looks great. Same goes for the arms and legs, and dat booty ~ Welp had to do that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>

It really is starting to show, your art is getting much more better. I also like it's lighting and shading :3 Just keep it up, and you'll be a top notch artist in no time! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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dauntlesskitties [2014-12-20 21:51:19 +0000 UTC]

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this animal is an amazing piece of work! I dont know how this person could of though of such a wonderufl idea.. an oddly specie makes this animal unique. the wings are so powerful and the tail is unlike any other animal. this species is one of a kind. I love the way its body speaks and its just so fluent and vibrant. does that make since? its just so creative and unnatural. not being natural on deviantart is something you really want in my opionon. this piece of art work is very creative and I hope everyone loves it!

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InesBarbosa [2014-12-20 21:47:17 +0000 UTC]

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This is my first Critique by the way.

To start, good job! Don't feel intimidated by the Star Rate I gave you, okay? I'll explain:

Vision: I think that it's good, I agree with your choice of using light blue instead of black to draw and color this. And it's clear that it's smiling, relaxed and in overall chilling.

Originality: Since everything about it is based off of you, like you said on the description, I gave 4 starts (sorry).

Technique: You do the shadows very well, the expression and movement is very realistic and fluid, the lighting is also correct, we can understand where the light font is. Very good indeed.

Impact: Because of the light color and relaxed expression, the impact is positive (in my opinion), so naturally it doesn't make someone shocked or surprised. But that doesn't mean it's bad.

In general, I think it's amazing! As always, your art is very cute and simple. That's why I love it. Once again, this is my first Critique, so spare me please.

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ZexHex976 In reply to InesBarbosa [2014-12-20 22:46:46 +0000 UTC]

I love how this is draw! <3

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InesBarbosa In reply to ZexHex976 [2014-12-21 11:57:50 +0000 UTC]

I know!

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SyriuslySoft [2014-12-20 21:43:52 +0000 UTC]

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Okay, just seeing your first pic of Tundra brought back a ton of memories from the better times of our friendship. Such as the old days where we would hang out and RP almost every day. Since all of my watchers will see this I'm not going to go into detail about this stuff ^^ xD

As for the art: You're getting really good with your dragon anatomy. Much better than you were when we first met. If you don't believe me compare this to that Fatespeaker pic you made me in February. You're one of the few people I know that can shade pure white easily. And I just love her cute expression. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

//feeds her some bacon//

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Hollyleaf9 [2014-12-23 19:07:48 +0000 UTC]

omg its an icewiinngggg is it an ice wing like Wings of Fire???? or just an awesome ice dragon??

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wivurn In reply to Hollyleaf9 [2014-12-23 20:11:08 +0000 UTC]

IceWing from Wings of Fire!

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Hollyleaf9 In reply to wivurn [2014-12-23 21:34:59 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME      

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DrakoAlcarus [2014-12-22 23:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice job!

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Heliosanctus [2014-12-21 03:58:30 +0000 UTC]

I really do want to give you an insightful critique, but my brain isn't working right now. Please remind me sometime, but I've been staring at this tab for a while, and I've come to no conclusion other than that it's utterly adorable c:

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Xenanraptor720 [2014-12-21 02:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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fluffypufflove [2014-12-20 23:53:26 +0000 UTC]

lovely ;v;

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stArchaeopteryx [2014-12-20 22:43:22 +0000 UTC]

YAS LIVE UP TO YOUR WIKI NAME

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wivurn In reply to stArchaeopteryx [2014-12-20 22:54:30 +0000 UTC]

WE STARTED FROM THE BOTTOM NOW WE'RE HERE 

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SyriuslySoft [2014-12-20 21:38:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, beautiful.

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wivurn In reply to SyriuslySoft [2014-12-20 21:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanksssss

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SyriuslySoft In reply to wivurn [2014-12-20 21:44:24 +0000 UTC]

No prooob!

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wivurn In reply to SyriuslySoft [2014-12-20 21:45:41 +0000 UTC]

This picture does bring back memories though wow 

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SyriuslySoft In reply to wivurn [2014-12-20 21:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ;-;

Can we RP in notes??

It's about time Tundra gets some use in a RP.

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wivurn In reply to SyriuslySoft [2014-12-20 21:48:27 +0000 UTC]

Maybe later, I'm feeling lazy right now 

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SyriuslySoft In reply to wivurn [2014-12-20 21:49:13 +0000 UTC]

"I'm feeling lazy right now "
 -_-

You're always feeling lazy xD

omf can I take tundra for a few hours to spoil her with bacon and hugs?? 

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wivurn In reply to SyriuslySoft [2014-12-20 21:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Of course I'm always feeling lazy, it's in my bloooood

Sure, BUT NO FUNNY BUSINESS 

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SyriuslySoft In reply to wivurn [2014-12-20 21:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Omg I'm not doing bad stuff

//takes Tundra and starts handfeeding her bacon//

You'll need to get a treadmill for this girl after I'm done spoiling her XD

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rnoaning [2014-12-20 21:36:28 +0000 UTC]

( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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wivurn In reply to rnoaning [2014-12-20 21:37:48 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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rnoaning In reply to wivurn [2014-12-20 21:38:19 +0000 UTC]

( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)




jesus loves you cant you seeeee ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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wivurn In reply to rnoaning [2014-12-20 21:41:26 +0000 UTC]

but I'm a spawn of satan  

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rnoaning In reply to wivurn [2014-12-20 21:43:57 +0000 UTC]

idc

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