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WizardRed — The Story: Chapter 18
Published: 2008-05-29 00:51:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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She was hit squarely in the head, smashing it into pieces. Eldafar stares, not believing what he just saw, seeing it in his head happen over and over. He grows cold as they turn toward him and begins to walk at him. Everything grows silent, soon the only thing he could hear was his breathing. All time seemed to cease to exist, everything felt like it was standing still. He couldn't believe it, it didn't happen, she isn't suppose to die. He looks at the headless Uriel lay on the ground, motionless as the Oni now begin to run at the frozen Eldafar. One of them quick dashes and pulls back for swing. Everything clicked, the air had a sudden, short vibration. The Oni swung, but Eldafar disappeared. All of them looked around for their missing opponent, Kabaal and Vladimira looking around as well. He suddenly appears next to the first Oni's head, swings a kick which kicks him, causing the Oni to fly back hundreds of feet. He lands, turning to the other Oni's, his eyes glowing gold with an incredibly deep hatred in his face.
Eldafar inhales and lets out a shriek, which was barely hearable over the fallen silence in his ears. One of the Oni's takes a step back, Eldafar instantly disappears again, reappearing next to another Oni, bashing it's head in with his fist. He lets out another shriek, instantly appearing next to the other Oni, his hair turns black and grey as he bashes it's head in as well. He lands and slowly gets up, large black feathery wings sprouts from his back as he turns to the stunned Kabaal and the calm Vladimira. Eldafar lets out another shriek as time continues to hold still. He instantly appears next to Kabaal and strikes him in the stomach with his fist, making Kabaal spit out lots of blood. Eldafar quickly regains his stance and swings again before Kabaal could fall back, striking many times as he falls.
Kabaal falls to the ground coughing up blood as Vladimira watches pleasurably from a distance. Eldafar picks Kabaal up by the neck, looking at him in the face with much much hatred. Distant thunder rolls.
"You killed Uri..." He said quietly, fear growing rapidly in Kabaal's face, shaking his head no. "......You killed Uri..." He said again, the man trying to find words but only able to shake his head, more thunder rolls in the distance. ".....I'll kill you..." He said quietly with intense hatred. Kabaal's fear widens as Eldafar summons energies, him trying to find words to say but unable to speak from his fear. Eldafar looks back at Uriel, making him more angry, turning back to Kabaal who looks at him, shaking and white with fear. Eldafar yells, unleashing evil energies into Kabaal, who yells in excrushiating pain, giving Eldafar much pleasure to feel his pain. Eldafar yells more, unleashing more evil energies and Kabaal yells more, Vladimira watching with much pleasure at the sight. Kabaal went quiet and still, eyes going relaxed as he slowly dies, Eldafar watching every bit of it, taking great pleasure in his death.
Kabaal's head goes limp, and Eldafar drops him, turning to Vladimira who was smiling with pleasure. She laughs and claps.
"Very good, Eldafar! Very nice!" She said to him, who began to walk towards her "You should have been on my side, you would have brought me more joy from all this hatred you have!" She said, not moving as he comes closer. Eldafar walks by Uriel's body, renewing his pains and turning towards Vladimira and stops. He stares at her with the most hate that you can imagine, anger in his soul and vengeance on mind. He shrieks and she hisses then laughs. He instantly appears next to her, pulling back his fist and swings, she leans backwards and pulls his arm, making him fall onto the ground. She laughs as he gets back up, his hatred growing ever more for her, his heart being driven by only the want to kill now. He summons red and black energies and fires the lightning at her, she only sticks out her hand in front of her, taking it full force yet remaining unaffected. He yells, unleashing more red and black lightning, her laughing and continues to take it in with ease. She suddenly disappears, shortly hearing the unsheathing of a blade and sees a red blade go right through him from behind, her pushing it all the way in until she's head and head with him.
"Tell me Eldafar..." She whispered into his ear "How does it feel to loose the one you care about? Hm?" She leans into his neck and kisses it passionetly. His anger grows more and instantly appears to her side, pulling out his blade of light and cuts at her neck, she leans a bit to avoid the attack smiling more, then counter attacking, slicing a deep cut into his stomach, making him fall back and blood spills. She laughs and stands over him, he looks over at Uriel and a tear falls from him.
"Aw, crying for her now are we? How cute..." She said leaning squatting down to him, coming closer. He looks up at her, who looks back deeply. He flashes his eyes and appears next to Uriel, standing over her body as he bleeds out, unable to heal automatically from that type of blade. She smiles looking and watching him admirably from a distance as he silently cries for her. The clouds clear and Vladimira looks up to see stars slowly appear, Eldafar continuing to cry for Uriel. Soon two moons appear on the sky, everything growing dark, only lit by the glow of the moons. Vladimira looks back at Eldafar, a large sigil appeared around him on the ground, glowing white. She looks to the moons as the same sigil appears blue on them. Her smile fades away, drawing her sword out and instantly appears next to him.
He looks at her as time seems to slow down again, he ducks as she swings, swiftly worked his way behind her and grabs the back of her neck. She freezes in place, unable to move as they float there in mid air. He begins to chant something that she couldn't understand, grabbing into his hand and and trying to pry herself out of his grip. She feels hot suddenly as his chant picks up speed. She now feels white hot pain in her entire body as she screams, he continues to hold her by the neck as she thrashes about. Images start to fill her head, slowly gaining lucidity, becoming more real as she feels the pain grow even further. Soon she can't hear him, nor see, only feel the pain and watch the images fill her head. She's now seeing what she fears most in her head, watching them come and go, gaining more speed as they go, becoming more intense. Eldafar continues his chant as if nothing is happening, Vladimira screaming the most pain her body can feel while she watches her fears pass by. Soon the pain hits climax and the images stops, making her spasm and black liquid leaks from her mouth and eyes, unable to scream. Everything around her begins to fade away slowly, the pain remaining but her unable to move. She falls limp and her grip falls from Eldafar's hand. He stops the chanting and slowly everything returned to normal, the stars disappearing and clouds returning, making it rain buckets and thunder sounds more.
Eldafar drops her body, observing the black hand mark he left on the back of her neck, the veins of her neck black as well. He pushes her over with his foot and looks at her relaxed face covered in a black substance, her eyes completely black as well. He remained emotionless as he looked at the now dead Vladimira, then over to the distant Uriel. An angel chorus begins to sing sorrow and pain from somewhere, filling Eldafar with emotions again as he walks toward the dead angel, his boots splashing on the mud. He stops near her body and looks down at it, tears filling his eyes again as he gets on his knees.
He places his hands under her slowly, careful not to damage her any further. He picks her up silently, and walks towards the empty fields of mud. After much walking, he sets her back down, observing her now dirty body and wings. He raises his head and lets out a wail of intense pain from his heart, crying more as more thunder rolls. He raises his hand as the angel chorus grows louder, an a blue flame appears upon his palm. He bends down to her.
"May you rest in piece, Uriel. Your person to not be forgotten, your love to be kept, and your soul to remain with us at all times..." He said, lowering the flame, letting it catch to her.
"May you rest in piece." He repeats getting back up again, standing back and watching the flames envelope her entire body, burning it away. The angels sing more sadly as she's being burnt away, Eldafar silently crying as she burns. The chorus slows down as her body becomes nothing, Eldafar slamming into a sit on his legs, staring at the spot where she was last and continues to cry silently. The chorus dies down, and he lowers his head, his black wings burning up and disappearing. More thunder rolls in the distance as it rains over him and his surroundings.
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Wildfire66 [2008-05-29 14:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Very good Nemi i enjoyed reading it
iam looking forward for your next story!
and good luck whereever you are going after school ^_^

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