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Published: 2014-10-04 21:28:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 543; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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A gift for kbafourthtime.deviantart.com . After seeing his made up journal that one his characters and once old foe Curtis and his new wife died in a plane crash. I wrote this short story where Curtis visited Ricky and asks for forgiveness five weeks before his untimely death.Ricky, Katie, Curtis, and Arachne belong to kbafourthtime.deviantart.com .
Forgiveness
Ricky is at the cemetery putting a rose on Curtis and Arachne graves after the funeral service was over. He walks to Katie along with Clara.
RICKY
Thanks for coming with me Clara and you too Katie.
CLARA
No problem.
KATIE
We're always with you (hugs him) Ricky.
CLARA
Sorry Cindy and Tom couldn't make it. They done have a terrible cold and with this cold weather I didn't want them to git sicker. Their Pa is with them helpin' them git well.
RICKY
No worries.
They start walking.
CLARA
I understand he was your enemy?
RICKY
Yeah he was. But that was only because his aunt abused him and wanted him to be tough. When I saw her doing that to him I thought I thought I did the right thing by calling the police and arrest her, but he blamed me because she was the only he had. I guess I shouldn't have done that.
CLARA
I think y'all did the right thing.
RICKY
Really?
CLARA
An Aunt is supposed to love and protect their niece or nephew. I'm certain Curtis knows deep down that he's thankful fer what you did and he probably regrets all the horrible things he done.
RICKY
Maybe you're right.
KATIE
I don't know. He's never apologized to you has he?
RICKY
Actually he did.
KATIE
What? When?
RICKY
It was five weeks ago before I found out he met someone, got married and then died in the plane crash. He came into my house one night. I was in my bed sleeping and when I woke up he was standing there. I thought he was getting revenge for getting his aunt arrested but he wasn't angry or vengeful. He was upset and depressed.
KATIE
What did he say?
Cut To
Ricky is sleeping in his bed at night five weeks ago. It's 1:00 in the morning. A shadowy figure walks and stops next to Ricky's bed. Ricky wakes up and puts his glasses on.
RICKY
Whose there?
He turns on the light and sees Curtis Leon standing there.
RICKY
CURTIS!?
CURTIS
Hello Ricky.
RICKY
How'd you get in here?
CURTIS
Your window was open.
RICKY
Now look Curtis. I don't want to any trouble. I can (picks up a baseball bat) still defend myself.
CURTIS
I'm not here to fight Ricky. I came here to talk.
Ricky is surprised. He puts down the bat.
RICKY
Okay. What do you want to talk about?
Curtis sits on the bed looking regretful and depressed.
CURTIS
This world is stupid. It's all stupid. I can't believe I was born in this hateful world.
Ricky looks puzzled.
CURTIS
For a long time I've acted like a jerk. I punched kids, call them names and harass them. I didn't want to do it and you may not believe me but I hated myself for doing it. This was because my Aunt forced me to do it. I keep telling her I don't to but she wanted me to be tough and kept abusing me until I do it. She's done that when I had to live with her as a kid and after my parents died. Every bloody day she's done that.
Tears run down his eyes. He wipes them off with his arms.
CURTIS
Then I met you. It's true that I kept punching you and then you punched me back. That was really cool. On the day you saw my Aunt abused me in public and got her arrested yes I was angry and blamed you because she was the only family I had. Then deep down I knew that I should be grateful because my Aunt was pushing me too hard. I was able to hurt her, but after what you did I realize you saved me before I made the biggest mistake.
He rubs his eyes.
CURTIS
I came here Ricky to ask for your forgiveness. Everyday when my Aunt wasn't looking I regret every horrible thing I've done including harming you.
He gets up.
CURTIS
Who am I kidding? Nobody will forgive me. To them I'm the meanest and horrible jerk that terrorizes them. I can understand that you don't want to accept my apology. I also came to forgive you for getting my Aunt arrested. I'm glad she's in jail and I hope she rots there.
He starts walking to the open window.
RICKY
Curtis wait.
Curtis stops and turns around.
RICKY
Yes it's true you were a jerk but after seeing what happened I knew everything is not your fault, but your relative who made you the way you are. So I accept your apology.
Curtis is surprised. He walks up to him.
CURTIS
You...forgive....me?
RICKY
Yes. I can see you want to make amends and I'm certain that everyone will find in their hearts to forgive you.
CURTIS
That's the kindest thing everyone said to me. Thanks buddy.
RICKY
No problem.
They shake hands. Curtis walks to the open window but stops and turns back around.
CURTIS
Before I forget I met this cute husky Sumatran tiger name Arachne. She's really cute. In fact I may ask her to marry me even though we just met.
RICKY
Well let me know when the wedding is.
CURTIS
I will.
He goes out the window.
Cut To
We are back at the cemetery with Ricky, Katie, and Clara walking out the gate.
KATIE
Hard to believe he came to ask for forgiveness.
CLARA
Sounds like he was a changed lion.
RICKY
He was. At least he and his new wife are in a better place.
The End
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Comments: 31
CoolCSD1986 [2014-10-06 18:59:43 +0000 UTC]
This story you've done is quite sad and touching, man.
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KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 22:06:46 +0000 UTC]
By the way, when I said, "I don't want to any trouble," what did I mean, "I don't want to cause any trouble," or was the "to" unneeded?
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 22:10:03 +0000 UTC]
I put down I don't want any trouble but sometimes my iPad adds in words in between and I hate it when it happens.
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KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 21:38:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for a wonderful story.
And thanks again for coming with me, Clara.
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 21:40:08 +0000 UTC]
No problem.
Clara: Ain't no problem.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 21:42:59 +0000 UTC]
And it was not just at all that he was orphaned; his own Aunt Winifred (that was the one) had poisoned his parents.
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 21:44:59 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Well I'm still glad you liked the story.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 21:49:15 +0000 UTC]
(About how Curtis was orphaned by his aunt poisoning his parents behind everyone's backs, including theirs)
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 21:56:11 +0000 UTC]
CLARA: That's just wrong.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 21:58:44 +0000 UTC]
I know! It turns out he had no more knowledge of it before she was arrested than did I. It wasn't until she was arrested that she revealed it to him, not to mention me, which she had no idea about.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 22:37:03 +0000 UTC]
You think that was crazy? What about marrying someone he just met? I personally find THAT crazy.
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 22:39:22 +0000 UTC]
CLARA: I know the feelin'.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 22:41:28 +0000 UTC]
KATIE: On the other hand, Arachne wasn't so bad.
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 23:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Clara: She sounded like a nice gal.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 23:08:35 +0000 UTC]
KATIE: She was. It was an honor being one of her bridesmaids.
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 23:13:12 +0000 UTC]
CLARA: Hard to believe the honeymoon ended tragically.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 23:14:29 +0000 UTC]
*about to cry* I know.
KATIE: Aww, don't cry... you'll make me cry too. *she does too*
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 23:20:37 +0000 UTC]
CLARA: Everythin' will be all right.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 23:21:28 +0000 UTC]
(Katie and I nuzzle in tears in Clara's arms) Does this make you cry too, Clara?
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Wolf492 In reply to KBAFourthtime [2014-10-04 23:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Clara: I know it's sad that they're gone, but we should be glad that they're in Heaven and they're happy together.
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 23:30:04 +0000 UTC]
(Much later...)
I'm afraid you'll have to be glad not to have to remove anything from my feet, and you know why, right, Clara?
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KBAFourthtime In reply to Wolf492 [2014-10-04 23:26:43 +0000 UTC]
I know, but their death means no parenthood for them.
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