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Published: 2004-02-08 00:18:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 47
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I'm tired of thinkingthis is my year
I'm tired of waking up
in constant fear
I'm tired of living
this same dreary life
I'm tired of laying
under the lowering knife
i'm tired of trying
to be someone I'm not
I'm tired of feeling
like I'll always be caught
I'm tired of desperation
and quite pleas
I'm tired of praying
on my worn out knees
I'm tired of wanting this
to all go away
I'm just tired
of not knowing what to say.
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Comments: 7
otakukitty [2004-02-08 21:37:30 +0000 UTC]
Oooooo, very nice. I gotta say, I really relate to this piece...it's exactly how I've been feeling the past long while.
My only issue is the last line of the third stanza...like the 'I'm Always' is a typo, maybe? Or something? I dunno...pay no attention to me.
More poetry, I say! Moooorrreeee! *flail*
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wolfdancer In reply to otakukitty [2004-02-08 21:40:43 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that was a typo and it's been corrected. Thank you for catching it.
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otakukitty In reply to wolfdancer [2004-02-08 21:43:08 +0000 UTC]
No problemo.
I guess the editor in me just doesn't wanna go away.
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