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Published: 2003-09-01 13:53:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 192; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 32
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Why weren't you honest?Why didn't you care?
Did it hurt you that much?
Was it too much to bear?
Why didn't you tell me
you had met someone new?
That I was no longer wanted
or of any use.
How could you think
that I would not understand?
After hours and months
of holding your hand.
When did you know
my love was a threat?
After you killed me
did you have some regret?
Do you still think about me
of what we once were?
Or have you purged your mind
into one big blur?
Unanswered questions
have a crippling effect.
You've completely moved on
but I haven't yet.
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Comments: 11
wolfdancer In reply to adrenalinerush [2004-05-04 03:25:59 +0000 UTC]
I write whenever I have the inspiration but thanks. *hug*
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rainangel [2004-01-20 03:27:07 +0000 UTC]
When did you know
my love was a threat?
After you killed me
did you have some regret?
this is great. i absolutely LOVE that stanza. I've been there on both sides and i would rather stay away from both. Love Sucks but your expressions are amazing.
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adrenalinerush [2003-09-02 19:44:24 +0000 UTC]
Its been so long since ive heard any of your work, this is awsome, truely beautiful. The flow is great and so is the emotion, keep it up i love your pieces!
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urban-gem2 [2003-09-01 20:09:36 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I;m in the other boat I think, even tho I never went off with someone I've properly broken 2 peoples hearts
but this is a really good poem, you express your feelings well. n its good to see you back
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rudepunkgurly [2003-09-01 18:10:30 +0000 UTC]
I really hate how love works. It just breaks hearts. A well expressed poem. I hope you get your questions answered.
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otakukitty [2003-09-01 18:09:14 +0000 UTC]
Dude, I'm in the same boat as you. The EXACT same boat. If you have AIM, contact me sometime (or you could just use the PMs on ASF), and we can compare experiences.
It's nice to see you submitting stuff again, though. =^^=
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wolfdancer In reply to otakukitty [2003-09-02 02:54:32 +0000 UTC]
OtakuKitty: Go to my main DA page, my AIM screen name is on there. Send me an IM if you see me on. I'd be up for talking.
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rangarig-dragon [2003-09-01 13:57:22 +0000 UTC]
Losing a love to another hurts. But always keep in mind that she is lucky and if you really love her you don't wanna see anything else than seeing her happy.
~Ran~
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wolfdancer In reply to rangarig-dragon [2003-09-01 14:04:51 +0000 UTC]
Never said I didn't want anything but for her to be happy, I just wouldn't mind a few questions answered.
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rangarig-dragon In reply to wolfdancer [2003-09-01 15:06:30 +0000 UTC]
Love tends to become difficult...
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