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WolfPawDragonClaw — Character Poem 1 - Chess
Published: 2011-06-26 00:30:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 611; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
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Description I want you dead.
No wonder God has forsaken you!
You're always wrong.
You're always nothing.
I want you out of my sight.
You fail at everything.
You can't do anything.
I want you out of my life.
Even if I have to take you out myself.

You are such a pathetic little failure.
How could anyone love you?
The good deeds you do?
The little things that add up.
That add up to nothing.
Nothing compared to the pain you cause.
The evil in you far outweighs the ounce of good you possess.

What God in their right mind would love you?
Go ahead and change your religion all you want.
It won't matter; none of them will love you like I do.

You diseased disfigured little kitten.
You're disgusting, you know.
No one wants you to be happy.
Do us all a favor and disappear!
Die, you selfish piece of shit!!
You're a selfish, arrogant, terrible person, you bitch.
And we all know it!
And we all can't wait for you to die.


Don't keep us waiting.







- "Chess", to "Sophie".
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Comments: 32

RobotsWithCookies [2011-06-27 14:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. She's so much fun!
But yes, this is perfect for Chess. There's like that one line where she says she loves her. Even if it like... saying how little a god would love her, she still said it.
But yeah, very nice job, once again! I can perfectly tell these two voices apart!

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-06-27 15:08:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
I think that's my favorite line in this!
Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear it!

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RobotsWithCookies In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-27 15:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! It's awesome!

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Malusdraco [2011-06-26 18:38:02 +0000 UTC]

woah..
what's with all the hate??
Chess is really mean to Sophie

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Malusdraco [2011-06-26 23:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Chess has a demon.

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Malusdraco In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-28 20:24:48 +0000 UTC]

oh that makes sense!

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Malusdraco [2011-06-29 02:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah!
But without the demon, she really is a sweet little girl.

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Malusdraco In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-29 12:50:25 +0000 UTC]

¬¬ rly?

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Malusdraco [2011-06-29 15:41:30 +0000 UTC]

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Malusdraco In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-29 19:45:12 +0000 UTC]

i guess she would be cute if she wasn't so sadistic and mean to sophie...

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Malusdraco [2011-06-29 19:58:14 +0000 UTC]

She normally isn't, well, without the demon!
"Normal" Chess is nice, and the "worst" she does is tickle Sophie, but she stops when Sophie says "stop".

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Malusdraco In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-07-01 15:09:22 +0000 UTC]

aww...
i like normal chess!

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Malusdraco [2011-07-01 15:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Normal Chess likes you too!

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Malusdraco In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-07-01 19:05:02 +0000 UTC]

yay!

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Malusdraco [2011-07-03 22:59:40 +0000 UTC]

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Malusdraco In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-07-05 14:14:46 +0000 UTC]

wooh!

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shadow-hobo07 [2011-06-26 17:15:12 +0000 UTC]

amazing voice in this!

hmmm, i take it chess just looooves sophie so much

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to shadow-hobo07 [2011-06-26 23:14:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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shadow-hobo07 In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-26 23:25:43 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

^^

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Masanohashi [2011-06-26 06:48:16 +0000 UTC]

wow, such a strong evil piece
excellent expression, good job ^_^

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Masanohashi [2011-06-27 15:07:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Masanohashi In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-27 16:55:28 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome ^^
yeah, you can feel enormous amounts of darkness flowing from that ^^'

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CarusELumen [2011-06-26 04:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Sooooooo, how are they a couple? Unless Sophie's the most cheerful girl in the entire universe and can deflect that amount of depression easily, I don't see how they'd still be together!

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to CarusELumen [2011-06-26 05:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Sophie has very low self esteem. They didn't start out as abusive, though. They were good together before demons got involved and made Chess violent, and Sophie depressed.

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CarusELumen In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-26 05:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Ah. I see. Well, this certainly helps the romance, doesn't it?
Seriously, though, this is pretty creepy and stuff. Before I saw who she was talking to, I felt like she was ripping out my insides and filling it with God-knows-what-but-it's-something-really-depressing! And after reading it, I just had to feel sorry for the poor girl sitting through this! You are truly a dark genius - in my opinion, and everyone else's who reads this!
Oh, and crossing my fingers for a few sequels!

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to CarusELumen [2011-06-27 17:21:43 +0000 UTC]


Thanks!

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Colbatros [2011-06-26 00:50:49 +0000 UTC]

How lovely

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Colbatros [2011-06-26 01:07:31 +0000 UTC]

They're such a romantic couple. Candlelit dinners (usually end up with Chess burning Sophie), a nice movie (which are gory), kickskisses and thugs, and strangles snuggles all around!!

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Colbatros In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-26 01:09:37 +0000 UTC]

THEY BEE 2GETUR!!!! Oh, is that the lesbian couple you talked about? The one that was supposed to suffer? If it isn't, THEN I SOUND UTTERLY STUPID.

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Colbatros [2011-06-26 01:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Yep! Sophie's existent is pretty much just to suffer! There's another gay character, and another possible pairing, but since pretty much everyone dies, there's not much of a point!

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Colbatros In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-06-26 01:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh, what a cute couple

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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to Colbatros [2011-06-26 04:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Totally.

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