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wolfrulez — MLP: Origins of Discord Chapter 7
Published: 2017-11-18 17:00:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 975; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
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Okay, I wanted to get this thing out as fast as possible. Here's the LINK to the next chapter. I absolutely HATE how Deviantart makes you upload literature and it honestly would've taken me an hour to put it into the right format
This is the longest chapter so far BTW (Also!!! ATTENTION THIS IS IMPORTANT) Read the first part that says "SUPER IMPORTANT" It's super important :3www.fimfiction.net/story/23670…
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The music you put in there goes so well with the story... I was first reading this on a bus with super cruddy WiFi, and so the music wouldn't load. So I re-read it at home with the music going in the backround, and the contrast was huge! Can't wait for the next part!
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Hehe Thank you! :3 I'm really trying to get across that Discord don't mess around with no b!tch when he's full destroyer mode! Don't worry though, the next chapters gonna be Kawaii AF... with lots of dancing :3!
(Did I overdo corrupt Discord? 
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Lol, I think you got your point across. Can't wait for the next installment.
(I don't think you overdid it. It was very well written. Quiet descriptive. If I gave one recommendation, I would suggest making the massacre just a little bit shorter. It was a little long. Great job other wise. I was on edge the whole time.)
P.S. Congrats on the scholarship
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