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wonderstories32 — She Mask return of the green Final Chapter

Published: 2018-09-23 18:06:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 8415; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 27
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Description hey everyone you can read my review of this series/chapter in my journal. thanks for reading
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Mask Rebecca sucks up the pain and spins

(as she spins)

Mask: ok Rebecca I can sense you fears, please we need to focus, how can we beat her? Wait…I have an idea, but I need you to go to sleep for the next 5 minutes…please”

POOF!

 

As the dust clears Evil mask blows away the dust as she sees Mask Rebecca has transformed into… “HUH? YOUR STILL THE SAME?” wait? When did you get my….”

Suddenly Evil sees a pool of blood, she sees 4 bullet wounds in her chest. “whaa… you really going to have that in your conscious huh Rebecca? Your going to let that cursed mask control you? From where im standing your no badder than me? How many have you killed today? And for what? hahaha you failed from your mission to save her….UGH!”

suddenly the Evil mask begins to transform back to it’s wooden form. Releasing it’s host from its cursed prison. Mask Rebecca stand as she says. “I’m sorry… this was the only way…as tears come from Mask Rebecca.

Half an hour pass as Rebecca gets out of the building. Then she sees a tall gentleman stand in front of her as she looks up. “hey Loki, here is your stupid evil mask…also what’s this thing on my forehead?”

as Loki grabs the Evil mask from Mask Rebecca’s hand he leans forward as he examines the sign “eeeee im so sorry darling, it’s a bonding curse, you cannot remove my mask, its set for a random date, so you will just have to wait. Until it pops off. Rebecca, you’re going to have to live with this new self, I’m sorry. As Loki vanishes Rebecca lifts her head up.

“WHEW…OK REBECCA BABE, LETS GO HIT THE SHOWERS MAN WE STINK!” though that green smile, you can see tears running down her cheeks, but there not from the mask, it’s from Rebecca herself. And in the reflection in the mask eyes, you can see Rebecca beg for help…forced to wear the mask, unable to remove it, cursed to wear green.

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Comments: 17

CoolPonys [2018-10-03 03:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Great

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carcngreatt [2018-09-24 11:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Awesome..

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Knight-BIshop [2018-09-23 18:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Good work

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wonderstories32 In reply to Knight-BIshop [2018-09-23 22:54:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your support and hope you enjoyed it

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Knight-BIshop In reply to wonderstories32 [2018-09-23 23:36:59 +0000 UTC]

I did very much and I look forward to seeing more of your stuff

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bambucea09 [2018-09-23 18:19:56 +0000 UTC]

wow you really weren't kidding that was rushed...wow I feel like I saw The Last Jedi movie again and get no satisfaction in the end...I feel cheated I read it the whole series...any idea you promised you had in mind in the past was gone...wow and I was excited for that...yeah well if you new series doesn't involve female symbiote or mask or something awesome then this ending it was the worst decision you made...I feel like you could just abandoned this story were it was and will had been a much better ending than this one...at least we could imagine our self how it ends or what is going to come...I was expecting at least 10 more parts...

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stage2450 In reply to bambucea09 [2018-09-23 22:56:10 +0000 UTC]

Dude, Bambucea, shut up. Why you gotta be so rude all the time? Its not like you ever put out anything better. Btw, I quite liked the "careful what you wish for" storyline and it's your fault he hasn't revisited it in a while. You threw a tantrum cause it's not something you liked. Well guess what. It's not always about you. Some people like other stuff. Doesn't always have to appease "his highness Bambucea." So... Back off, man!

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bambucea09 In reply to stage2450 [2018-09-24 05:11:35 +0000 UTC]

ohh? so how is my fault he didn't continue it when I support and comment to his story and love it since the first pages!? I should had just ignore him no? You don't even know what was the idea he confirmed to me in the first place and how much better and good it was, so shut up! I bet you didn't even look up on my gallery if you comment like this! You have 7 years this account and post and done nothing about anything so don't you dare tell me that I did nothing! You are the one who is doing nothing and will do nothing!

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stage2450 In reply to bambucea09 [2018-09-24 05:44:13 +0000 UTC]

You get real emotional, don't ya? First, let me address your logical fallacy. I never claimed to have produced any work. The fact that I haven't is meaningless to any argument we have. You're grasping at straws and trying to attack me instead of my argument. Don't worry, it's a really common mistake. Lots of people do it. You're not alone there... As a follower of this fandom, I'm allowed to have an opinion of the work without contributing any. Now, contrary to your belief, I have indeed seen your work. I'm not impressed. That's why I've formed the opinion (based on my observations) that wonderstories' worst work is better than your best work any day of the week. It doesn't matter what wonderstories did or didn't do and whether or not it met your expectations. What does matter is how you react to things, and when a large part of your interactions are angry criticisms of other people's work, that is your fault and it is something you can change. Stop basing your opinions on your own hopes and expectations. You're setting yourself up for disappointment. Just relax and enjoy things for what they are rather than what you think they should be.

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bambucea09 In reply to stage2450 [2018-09-24 07:12:28 +0000 UTC]

is clearly to me you have no idea what are you talking about...you call my work weak...really? How so? Do you even know how much you need to work for the stuff I did like the comic one for example? You really have no idea because you have no work done so stop complaining about other people opinions and do your work and see how hard it is...I know how "hard" is to make a story with some images to show some context from a story and then slap some text because I've done many of them! Is not that really hard or takes you that much time as it takes motivation to go on with the story to see people commenting and not just add to favorite. What I think it should happen wasn't something that could never happen and wonderstories told me that he want to do that and was his plan but he decided to end up the story because he has no more interest so I told him that he could leave it without a ending and will had been better than a rushed ending that wasn't satisfying at all...

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stage2450 In reply to bambucea09 [2018-09-24 09:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Dude, again you're veering off onto tangents and unrelated arguments. Stop that. Learn to argue properly and try to stick to the main point. That main point being that you like to complain and criticize other people's work when it's not what you imagined it should be or it's not how you would have done it. Again, please stop trying to lead the conversation down pointless trails just because you can't argue the point at hand. Its exhausting trying to chase down each little false lead when really they don't matter to the argument and are only meant to distract. Just man up, admit the problem, and fix it. Stop criticizing others for not meeting your preconceptions and sit back and enjoy life as it is. You'll be happier and so will everyone around you too.

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bambucea09 In reply to stage2450 [2018-09-24 09:17:37 +0000 UTC]

then you are really dumb if you can't understand what I'm saying...end of discussion...the only thing that need to be fixed is this story not me! 

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stage2450 In reply to bambucea09 [2018-09-24 16:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Frustrated name calling and arbitrarily ending the conversation to make it seem like you're in control when the truth is you're backed into a corner and have no arguments left? That's an admission of defeat if I ever saw one! You may not see it that way, but people hate to admit defeat and so they use these frustration tactics to distance themselves from the conversation so they don't have to admit they've lost. I'll take my win and be on my way, thank you. You may be all pissed off and emotional right now, but think about what I said, ok? Work on yourself, better yourself. Be more considerate toward others and be a more pleasant person to be around. You, your friends, and everyone around you will notice life is a lot nicer when you consider other folks beyond yourself.

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bambucea09 In reply to stage2450 [2018-09-24 16:51:34 +0000 UTC]

okay you are are real retarded right now...I said end of conversation because I don't feel defeated but I can't talk with a dumb person such as you who can't understand what I wanted in the first place...so keep you dumb thoughts to you and bye! 

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stage2450 In reply to bambucea09 [2018-09-25 00:17:26 +0000 UTC]

1. You don't know me. How could you possibly know whether I'm stupid or not when all evidence thus far indicates the opposite? Let me ask: Which one of us is stupid? Is it me- the one using eloquent phrasing to communicate logic and reason? Or you- the one who can barely string a coherent sentence together to communicate his emotional outbursts? My goodness, its like arguing with a toddler!
2. I'm trying to build you up and help you be a better person. You're trying desperately to break me down and call me retarded. Food for thought.
3. You mentioned in your last comment that I can't understand what you wanted in the first place. Why does it matter what YOU wanted? It's not YOUR story! This is the same thing I've been saying from the beginning! It doesn't matter how YOU THINK things should be. The world is gonna keep on doing its thing regardless of your feelings and whether you like it or not. What matters is how YOU RESPOND to things when they go however they're gonna go.
4. You be proven to me through your arguments that you live in this you-centric bubble where everything should go your way all the time. That's why you think I'm stupid. Because in your little you-bubble, you're the smartest one there and so anyone who disagrees with anything you say is automatically stupid by default. Feeling angry right now? That's cause I hit the nail on the head, huh? And you don't want to admit it.

So lets see... That makes you rude, immature, inconsiderate, and selfish. Did I miss anything?

P.S. Yeah, actually, I did miss something. In your last couple of comments, you said "discussion over" and "bye." If you continue to comment and try to argue with me, doesn't that make you a liar as well?

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RayDark0 In reply to stage2450 [2018-09-24 00:44:03 +0000 UTC]

I do approve ^^ people all dream to do there best. So it's better respect how it end its funny from my point of view

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wonderstories32 In reply to bambucea09 [2018-09-23 22:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Sorry dude. It was my choice in the end

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