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Published: 2010-06-14 14:28:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1903; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 0
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Here's the "variant" edition of this (again with masterful lines by ) for all the Magnus haters and Prime lovers!Rather than just the same story again I wrote a completely different story to go along with this - the lettered version of which is up here [link]
Hope you enjoy.
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Really nice colouring! I love the "softness" of the colors even if fire is bright. Don't know if you understand what I mean... lol When I color my fire, it often lost his "colors" by being too bright. (Fudge! Wish english was my language today!) I should try something more like this... Good work!
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your welcome dude
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I loved the Mosaic(s) this was used for. Great smoke and flame work. The detail on Optimus and HotRod in the last panel is also epic. Nice scuffy damage.
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Thanks! I agonised over the right amount of scuffing for ages, so it's good to know I got it right!
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I just like seeing Optimus carry Hot Rod. Its kind of...metaphorical, I guess. ^_^
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It's kind of what inspired me to write a dual story actually, because their destinies are closely linked and it goes with the other Mosaic where Magnus knows he's not a leader. They all join up...
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Awesome! ^_^ You know, I think you should have something from Roddi's POV too. You know, for the full circle effect or whatever.
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If there were a few more panels with him in I'd give it a go! I'm mulling over a Rodimus Mosaic to capture the essence of why he had such an inferiority complex. I've also got another idea for a 2 version story, but taking it to the next level...
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Dooo eeeet. ^_^ I'd love seeing something like either of those suggestions! And I just have to say, 'cause I think I forgot with my first comment, that I love it when authors/writers/whatever "get into characters heads". Strength and explosions are awesome, but introspection and motive makes things that much more intense. Thanks for doing that!
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It's the only way I can write so I'm very pleased you like it. When I write these I tend to pick characters that haven't been explored much or where things have never been explained. I hope you enjoy the next few!
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I don't hate Ultra Magnus.
but I think this is better.
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