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Published: 2005-11-21 13:01:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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TiredTired.
Thats me.
It feels good though.
At least thats what i tell myself.
Then i look at my accomplishments of the day.
worthless pieces of literature i fling around the room.
What happened?
Wheres that endless inspiration i once had?
My pens and pencil say im tired, just take a nap.
Can't i say, ive got work to do.
Not enough time for the things i enjoy.
Friends wonder where i am,
and as a reply,
Im tired.
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You know, I can really relate to this. I've felt the same for the past year. =3
Very direct and to the point, which conveys the "tired" feeling well. I like. *nods*
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much thanks^ ^
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This is like, you're so frustrated that you're writing for the sake of writing something. And you've abandoned all inspiration and gotten down to the core of what you really feel..
Which is that you're tired.
Sigh... You should just take a day off and do whatever you want to do, no obligations allowed. Stay in bed all day if you have to.
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cant, i have work todayXD
i do have some time of soon though so ill take it easy then.
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Feeling better yet?
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I really like this because you use short sentences and it goes with the sense that you're "tired".. Like maybe you don't have the energy. It really creates that sortof tone.
You know, working too hard is bad. Go easy on yourself..
XxX
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