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work-in-progress — little earned nothing learned.
Published: 2006-02-02 23:07:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 301; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description I hate the things you think you learned.
Im here to tell you,
Nothings been earned.

Going to make something one day.
of myself that is.

you say you've learned,
i should listen.

That works fine....
if i want to be a failure.

Going to show you where you went wrong.
Ill point it out along the way.

So then you say one day,
im proud.
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Comments: 8

Blooded-Angel [2006-02-03 09:49:29 +0000 UTC]

the subtle rhyming works and I like the whole idea of it. I like the structure too. good work

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work-in-progress In reply to Blooded-Angel [2006-02-03 19:03:20 +0000 UTC]

much thankies^ ^

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GerbilPoof [2006-02-03 04:21:55 +0000 UTC]

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work-in-progress In reply to GerbilPoof [2006-02-03 19:03:03 +0000 UTC]

*points at duo* go get him girl!

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GerbilPoof In reply to work-in-progress [2006-02-03 21:59:09 +0000 UTC]

>_> *fwoosh*

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darkpurplesiren [2006-02-03 03:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. What's this one about?

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darkpurplesiren [2006-02-03 03:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. What's this one about?

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work-in-progress In reply to darkpurplesiren [2006-02-03 19:02:31 +0000 UTC]

me and my parents dont exactly see eye to eye on many things.
they want one thing for me...i want another.

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