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Published: 2006-02-02 23:07:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 301; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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I hate the things you think you learned.Im here to tell you,
Nothings been earned.
Going to make something one day.
of myself that is.
you say you've learned,
i should listen.
That works fine....
if i want to be a failure.
Going to show you where you went wrong.
Ill point it out along the way.
So then you say one day,
im proud.
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Comments: 8
Blooded-Angel [2006-02-03 09:49:29 +0000 UTC]
the subtle rhyming works and I like the whole idea of it. I like the structure too. good work
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work-in-progress In reply to GerbilPoof [2006-02-03 19:03:03 +0000 UTC]
*points at duo* go get him girl!
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work-in-progress In reply to darkpurplesiren [2006-02-03 19:02:31 +0000 UTC]
me and my parents dont exactly see eye to eye on many things.
they want one thing for me...i want another.
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