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Published: 2017-03-27 06:27:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 416; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Welcome to my inner room, a cold placeA jail housing a tired, battered will,
where it is never calm, quiet or still
Dare conjure a dream and shadows give chase
to claw it down, I can't outrun their pace
Here, long ago, pride was ground through the mill,
and rotten lie buried hope, love and thrill
Here, thoughts scream, against the vastness of space
The harsh light of day burns my tired eyes
and in the night I face my faults alone
With all these grey thoughts so hard to resist,
locked in this room of loss and heavy sighs
With the pain one thought has steadily grown:
How peaceful it would be not to exist
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Comments: 5
Delta-Fokkusu [2017-04-06 22:43:02 +0000 UTC]
Another well written piece could feel the emotion from this and the sense on what it was about.. Absolutely wonderful.
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Wormfodder In reply to Delta-Fokkusu [2017-04-06 23:01:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. This one's pretty personal, it's nice to hear someone relate to it.
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Delta-Fokkusu In reply to Wormfodder [2017-04-06 23:06:19 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome, anytime. And yeah I did relate to it a bit. :3
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Ava-Arvest [2017-04-05 05:04:20 +0000 UTC]
These feelings I feel in common with some days... and I am balancing so much that I feel I cannot reveal them, and they eat me up inside. Its good to express such depth, because if you don't it will find a way to express itself...
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Wormfodder In reply to Ava-Arvest [2017-04-05 12:22:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you again for your continued readership and commenting. It's always appreciated. These feelings are pretty run-of-the-mill for me nowadays. What's worrying is maybe that sharing and revealing them don't really help, what with the "eat me up inside"-part. They've found other ways to come out, including scars.
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