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Did this in about Three hours...and I'm so proud of myself! I think I've taken the next step in coloring! What do you guys think, eh?This picture represents a part of Jonas that gnaws at him: His true identity. Just trying to remember frustrates him. Will he ever find out his true identity?
C&C well appreciated! ^_^
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Comments: 47
Kitsune29 [2007-01-08 05:02:30 +0000 UTC]
I love stories like these! Please think about turning this into a story, or at least let me. I'm an ameture writer.
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Kitsune29 [2007-01-08 06:43:39 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, I hate to break it to you, but a webcomic centered around this character already exists. lol! Do you want the link?
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Kitsune29 In reply to Wrathofautumn [2007-01-08 22:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Yea! thanks. I'm glad you told me. I'm dissapointed, but if you get any ideas for a fic-if you don't write yourself-let me know.
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Kitsune29 [2007-01-09 07:18:02 +0000 UTC]
[link] Here you go. Enjoy it!
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Kitsune29 [2007-01-09 21:58:10 +0000 UTC]
Doh! Double posting. >.<
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Kitsune29 In reply to Wrathofautumn [2007-01-10 02:08:40 +0000 UTC]
yea! my laptop adaptor is broken, so i didn't finish the 9th chapter
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Kitsune29 [2007-01-10 07:03:00 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Already through all of that? XD
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Kitsune29 In reply to Wrathofautumn [2007-01-10 22:33:38 +0000 UTC]
I'm a fast reader. I take in things pretty quickly
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Keeshanic-Fox [2006-02-22 06:11:43 +0000 UTC]
Very awesome coloring! I really need to learn how to do that.
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Keeshanic-Fox [2006-02-22 06:28:22 +0000 UTC]
Who did your avatar then?
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Keeshanic-Fox In reply to Wrathofautumn [2006-02-22 06:55:17 +0000 UTC]
I did the avatar, colored it in MS paint. I didn't do any shading on it, though. Haven't really learned how to properly shade yet.
You have some really nice shading contrasts like in the red part of the tail (4 reds, softly meshed into each other) or the white tip. All I have been able to do so far is make them all one solid color, all white sections or all red-orange, etc. I can shade in pencil, but just can't seem to do it good enough on MS yet. Sorry 'bout the confusion, I guess I should be a little more specific .
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Keeshanic-Fox [2006-02-22 07:09:05 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I see. Wish I could say my painting skills were as good as my other colored pics after it.
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Keeshanic-Fox In reply to Wrathofautumn [2006-02-22 07:16:55 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean? They look awesome to me.
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Keeshanic-Fox [2006-02-22 07:44:01 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...well, I'm glad you like them as they are. ^_^
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CuiasodoSharpedge [2006-01-30 01:12:54 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Angst-y emotion-ness to the max here. Excellent job of capturing the emotion in the piece. It actually has me desturbed (but in a good way). Now I actually wanna know more about this character. Great touch by putting the eye in the upper right corner by the way. Also, the shading on the tail as well as his clothing looks great. Shading is really something I wish I were better at.
Anyway, onto the critiques. Now, his lower leggs look a bit short at first, but on closer inspection it seems that that was intended with this kind of anthro style, so I don't know wheather to give you advice to fix that or not. The only other thing is I think his hands, or hand as it were, should be closer to his face and eyes, in that he's having an emotional moment and therefore cupping his face. But again, I don't know what you were going for in the pose, so I don't know if that counts as a critique. Anyways, really great work on capturing the sense of pannic and dispair. The tears dropping from his eyes to the ground are another good touch...
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Wrathofautumn In reply to CuiasodoSharpedge [2006-01-30 21:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I think that helps a bit. Thanks.
So do you truly want to know more about this character?
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katt315 [2006-01-24 22:11:14 +0000 UTC]
Awww,cool! this really great but a bid sad too,the colouring is awesome! i must add to favourites
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Wrathofautumn In reply to katt315 [2006-01-25 19:45:47 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry. He's a clown too. Not literally, though.
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Yo-Cosplay [2006-01-23 20:16:14 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmmnnnn... That eye looks so much like my avatar's...
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Yo-Cosplay [2006-01-24 17:35:47 +0000 UTC]
I didn't steal it if that's what you mean.
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Wrathofautumn In reply to Yo-Cosplay [2006-01-24 05:27:01 +0000 UTC]
Does it now? Well, yes, I just noticed it myself. XD
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galitb [2006-01-23 15:38:11 +0000 UTC]
Why he cant remember his true identity? Oo....
Nice job by the way! ^^u
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galitb [2006-01-23 15:36:50 +0000 UTC]
Why he cant remember his true identity? Oo....
Nice job by the way! ^^u
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Wrathofautumn In reply to galitb [2006-01-24 05:26:38 +0000 UTC]
It's a side effect from the cryo freezing. It's explained here. [link]
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imagnee [2006-01-10 03:27:31 +0000 UTC]
i lvey the coloring. cept it seems a bit blurred in some places. ...i'unno. don't kill me. xD
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Wrathofautumn In reply to imagnee [2006-01-17 19:12:25 +0000 UTC]
No, you're right. That was an accident, that blurring. ^_^;
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HongAnime [2006-01-10 01:09:37 +0000 UTC]
Woow now that is really huge piece of work you made excellent work "Wrathofautumn"-san
That colors are amazing i like it man
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RollingEye [2006-01-09 23:16:07 +0000 UTC]
Wowzers. Here in today's age, the word most used to describe this would be "colorific".
Quite.
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Wrathofautumn In reply to RollingEye [2006-01-17 19:19:08 +0000 UTC]
Yes, isn't it just colorific? XD
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templarkitsune [2006-01-09 23:00:44 +0000 UTC]
poor guy feel sorry for him. o well great work
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Wrathofautumn In reply to templarkitsune [2006-01-17 19:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Glad you liked it! ^_^
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vertMB [2006-01-09 21:48:52 +0000 UTC]
Has he tried hitting his head with a bowling ball???
This is a pretty cool drawing, well I think you've done pretty good on the colouring. ^^
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Wrathofautumn In reply to vertMB [2006-01-09 21:53:01 +0000 UTC]
Ah, he didn't lose his memories by a mere bludgeoning to the head.
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