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Wrenzephyr2 β Commission: Race Changed
Published: 2011-07-12 06:17:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 143749; Favourites: 1322; Downloads: 7580
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Okay this is my first draft of 's commission, I'm not sure if it looks good so I'm submitting it here for some critiques and reviewsPlease Comment!!
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Comments: 68
love the sequance, love the outcome, and brilliant work on the detail and I hope to see more of these becuase this aswell as the comics are a great piece of art the only thing I have to ask is why bimbo's? everyone does bimbo and it is kind of a constant thing and it has lost it's touch but other than that I couldnt find anything wrong with this, keep up the good work Wren mate you are doing a brilliant job and have a happy DA day
I know I am being cheeky but can I suggest one where you make something like jocks in to female nerds it kind of seems like a funny form of karma being a bitch e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Well technically they aren't bimbos they are merely wearing sexy clubwear
as for the request, that may take some time. After I finish catching up on commissions and things I plan on working on just a lot of practice art and pinups
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I wasnt requesting I was suggesting mate 
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i like how they pulled down their pants just to make sure they were feeling what they thought they were......
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Gorgeous work as always. Looks great to me!
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I prefer the cloths not changing ... they start nit fitting and eather poping off or sagging and falling off the race change was done nicely as a spreading change you might also try tanning deeper and deeper shades
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Well I dont have a subscription right now.. so I cant critique from the option.
But, the second set doesnt look right to me. If your pants are just breaking apart your not going to have your focus on someones hand. It might add more expression if they actually reacted to their pants going 'poofy' on them since they dont start to have a cultural change till the 4th set.
Thats just my opinion....
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I like your style but greatly that you show the process! Between the two "gals" I like the one on the right.
Very well done and I enjoy your works very much!
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love this sooooo much, very very nice change *claps*
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is the clap one of those slow evil bad guy ones? You know, like when they swivel the chair around to face the protagonist?
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" I'm not sure if it looks good so I'm submitting it here for some critiques and reviews."
Wren what the heck are u talking about ur work is always great and this is jest another example of that!
Keep posting!
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Good~!!!!
MOTIVATION!!!
-goes to sleep due t lack of motivaton-
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I love the face of the second to last picture of the phat transformation! Makes me think of a cat's fur coloration. :3
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Yeah! That one eye that's still white with some white skin around it, and the rest black skinned!
Or maybe I'm thinking of dogs....
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Awesome! The one in the left is my favorite. Great Work!
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I'm guessing the one on the left is Japanese.
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I liked the picture, plus i think that the girl on the left has some really cute looking panties. It was a good race TG.
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Welcome back Wren
I really like the right girl a lot.
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Nicely done my friend. Love the change as a whole!
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sorry but I loved the double panty shot
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lol don't be sorry 
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agreed old friend
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Great work. I love their reactions throughout!
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Is Guy On The Left supposed to be turning into an Asian girl? If so, she's kind of...well, Caucasian. (The big anime eyes don't help the effect, either, even if they look nice.) There's more to oriental physiology than short round faces and vaguely yellowish skin-tint.
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Hmmm, yeah I can see what you mean. I have a difficulty changing up the design of a character enough to show they are of a different race, especially with the Asian community. I am going to start looking into some reference guides to help better that
Thank you for the critique
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BTW, you may want to dig through =cluedog 's gallery - he's good at drawing girls who distinctly Asian while retaining comic-art stylization. (The preponderance of TG stuff doesn't hurt, either ;D)
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I do have most of his gallery buried in my hardrive already xD
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Looks good to me, the changes side by side led me to wonder what their mental state is towards each other and themselves now, and what happens next.
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Well my thought would be an eventual attraction to each other, then again the commissioner has another idea that I may or may not posy here
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Mmm, well I'll be interested if it does see a follow-up then.
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