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You are not the eye-erasing beautyof the sun splitting open the sea with morning,
but you are the green and purple glint
on a wave crest as sun ducks away into night.
You are not the electric-splash shock of
ice water in meltingpot summer,
but you could be the cool, smooth
surface of a palm.
You are not a fire, ravaging, devouring,
chewing and churning and spitting out black,
but you are a shawl, touching my shoulders tenderly.
You are not a symphony of drumroll clouds and thunder,
but you are the sound of rain.
You do not laugh like falling snowflakes.
Your words do not resonate like age-old wisdom stones.
You do not move with the grace of an almost-landing butterfly.
When you look at me, I know my eyes are opaque,
providing no windows.
But you are the lighthouse standing through the storm,
the summer breeze that lifts the flowers just a little
brighter.
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Comments: 19
kittykittyhunter [2011-03-26 17:21:28 +0000 UTC]
Hi. You’ve been featured here .
Please fave the article and check out the other pieces to spread the literature love.
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aprilwednesday [2010-12-31 19:08:55 +0000 UTC]
I've featured this in a journal of inspirational artwork: [link]
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Rhubaton [2010-10-06 23:56:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow this is very nice. I could see everything that you were describing in it as well!
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peridot-magelette [2010-07-18 05:41:13 +0000 UTC]
gaaaaaahhhh. this is soft and beautiful and wonderfully written. it reminds me of ~Corina90 's work, which is a high compliment!
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write-it-out In reply to KneelingGlory [2010-05-05 17:39:52 +0000 UTC]
thank you I'm honored
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choirsoftheheavens [2010-03-12 11:16:10 +0000 UTC]
positively wonderful.
this is uplifting in a very rare and awesome way.
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write-it-out In reply to choirsoftheheavens [2010-03-12 16:25:10 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!
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kulapti [2010-01-15 03:51:45 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful. I love your imagery and how you put the title into the piece. Great job.
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Maybe-Im-Dreaming [2010-01-15 03:41:58 +0000 UTC]
"My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun.."
Very nice. I like it a lot.
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KneelingGlory [2010-01-06 09:34:29 +0000 UTC]
I love that all of the "you are" images are quite muted in comparison to the "you are not" images - and yet I'm left with the afterthought of and that's good enough. People don't have to be spectacular to be loved.
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Sweetnsexy33 [2009-12-27 17:57:16 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Visually stimulating. Your writing generates the images so vividly in my mind.
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