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writeaload — What You Do.
Published: 2009-06-07 00:00:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 34; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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One o'clock.Time has stopped.
Just me and you
Is it something you do?
You've got me wrapped,
my heart kidnapped
my brain's been zapped
my thoughts are apt
to drift your way,
for another day.
I'm not sure why,
I wonder and strive
to figure it out
why I want to shout
at the top of my voice,
I've got no other choice.
I'd stand in the rain,
run faster than a speeding train.
Do what for no one else I could.
Just because, for you alone I would.
I thank God every night
that you came into my sight.
You made me speak
all that I think.
Told me it was alright,
that you liked what I write.
I dunno what you've done,
this fair golden maiden,
found a way into my heart.
And it was yours from the start.
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Comments: 8
Not forced at all. It is perfect just as it is. It is sweet, thoughtful, and loving.
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*bows*
You are far to kind. Thank you.
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Yes and I speak the truth.
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love them kinds of poems.
i really do.
i think this is the best spurr of the moment poem i've ever layed my eyes on.
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Not forced AT ALL. Actually sounds very well thought out and planned. It was put together smoothly with flowing words. The choice of words you used were also excellent. The poem was indepth and detailed. They gave the reader a clear and focused view of how much the two characters cared for eachother. I think this poem was excellent and I wouldn't change a thing. You are very talented! Keep up the good work!
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Why thank you. *Bows*
You are far to kind.
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