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'It's too much blood.'That's what Roy thought when he saw Riza lying on the ground, her eyes closed and her abdomen bleeding profusely. Blood, her blood, was everywhere. It stained her uniform and the ground beneath her, streaking the dirt with a deep crimson color that would forever be imprinted in Roy's mind. This blood was worse than any blood he had ever had to see.
That was because this blood was supposed to be in the body of the person that he cared about the most in this world. It was supposed to be keeping her alive, not saturating the ground.
Roy found it impossible that one single person could have so much of that sickening red fluid in their body to spill. Yet, there was her's. It was her's alone that spilled and spread.
He kneeled down beside Riza and placed a hand on her check, ever so gently, like she was a fragile vase or a work of art. Roy found it ironic that his murderous hands could even be capable of being so gentle, even toward this woman that he loved so much. He thought, fleetingly, that maybe it was the law of equivalent exchange, or something similar to it, at work. Since his hands had hurt her in the past, even if it was with her consent, his hands could also be used to impart a tender gesture onto her.
"Lieutenant, you need to open your eyes! Please, show me that you're still here. That you can hear me. I'm not going to let you die, lieutenant! Riza," Roy added softly, the desperation that had been slowly creeping up his body finally overcoming him. "Please, Riza. I need you to open your eyes."
For a moment, Roy thought that is was too late. That Riza had already died and that he was begging to a corpse at that point. For a moment, his world- a world whose future had always included Riza- fell apart around him.
It was only for a moment, though. In the next moment, something happend that made Roy know that his pleas hadn't been in vain.
In the next moment, Riza Hawkeye opened her eyes.
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Comments: 23
RizaxRoy-chan [2012-10-17 18:57:44 +0000 UTC]
very nice!!! I was like: "No, not Riza too. Maes was bad enough, but if she dies, Roy won't get up again... "
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The--Enchantress [2012-10-16 00:57:12 +0000 UTC]
Very nice one-shot; I like it a lot! ^_^ I could have sworn I read it on Fanfiction.net or something...
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to The--Enchantress [2012-10-21 20:12:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh and it's not a one-shot. I'm actually working on chapter two of this story!
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The--Enchantress In reply to WriterNotAFighter [2012-10-21 20:25:01 +0000 UTC]
I totally knew that. XD
I can't wait to read chapter two!
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to The--Enchantress [2012-10-21 20:26:49 +0000 UTC]
Hehehehe! I can't wait to write it. Seriously, though, it's giving me SO MUCH HECK, it's not even funny. I'm gonna be as happy as a lark when I finally get chapter two written.
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The--Enchantress In reply to WriterNotAFighter [2012-10-21 20:28:58 +0000 UTC]
I know the feeling. XD I'm in the process of writing a series of Royai one-shots, and I always feel this great relief after finishing one. XD
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to The--Enchantress [2012-10-28 17:24:10 +0000 UTC]
Hehehehe! I finally finished chapter two. It's gonna be up on DA today!
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The--Enchantress In reply to WriterNotAFighter [2012-10-28 19:01:34 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I acutally just read it on Fanfiction.net. :3
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to The--Enchantress [2012-10-28 19:18:06 +0000 UTC]
And........what did you think?
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The--Enchantress In reply to WriterNotAFighter [2012-10-28 19:26:45 +0000 UTC]
It was really good! I can't wait for chapter three. The only thing I would suggest is making the chapters a bit longer.
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to The--Enchantress [2012-10-28 19:53:34 +0000 UTC]
I'm trying, I swear! It bugs me too, the fact that these chapters aren't longer. Like, just when I think it's gonna be longer, BAM, it's the exact same length as last time.
Like, for seriously.
BLUH.
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The--Enchantress In reply to WriterNotAFighter [2012-10-28 20:15:47 +0000 UTC]
It's fine! XD We all have different styles of writing, and that just might be yours. Just try to motivate yourself by adding more dialogue and details. Combining different events in chapters help too. :3
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to The--Enchantress [2012-10-28 20:30:42 +0000 UTC]
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to The--Enchantress [2012-10-21 01:19:16 +0000 UTC]
I actually did put it up on Fanfiction! Under HopelessAnimeFangirl? That's me!
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The--Enchantress In reply to WriterNotAFighter [2012-10-21 01:47:15 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the name sounds familiar!
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Cherimoya-chan [2012-10-15 20:36:15 +0000 UTC]
EEP~! It's so good!!
It makes a lot of sense how Roy's first thought -wouldn't- be imagining what a future without her might be like. Trust me, when you start to panic, that's not how it goes.
This would be great as a oneshot, but I personally can't wait to see how it turns out as a multichap! :3 Good luck~!
(Oh, and found one mistake: "Yet, there was her's." <-- there shouldn't be an apostrophe in "hers". Sorry, that was bugging me.) XD;
I just... gasdfghjkl; IT'S SO CUTE. I'm always so happy to find a good Royai writer. I can't wait for more ;w;
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to Cherimoya-chan [2012-10-21 01:18:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so very much!
In terms of the first thought, I wasn't even thinking about whether or not it was necessarily realistic. It was seriously the first thought that came into my mind when writing the story!
Thanks for the luck! I'm gonna need it. I'm having a bit of trouble with the second chapter (although I can tell you that it will be written in Riza's perspective)
AHHHHHH, GRAMMAR MISTAKE! I TRY SO HARD NOT TO MAKE THOSE. I shall NOT make that mistake again.
Thank you, thank you, thank you, THANK YOOOOOUUUUUU~.
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Cherimoya-chan In reply to WriterNotAFighter [2012-10-25 20:07:54 +0000 UTC]
Ah, no problem at all~! I'm happy to support ^^ I'll be looking forward to the next one!
Ridiculously late reply is late
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WriterNotAFighter In reply to Cherimoya-chan [2012-10-28 17:27:32 +0000 UTC]
It's OK that it's late! I don't get on the internet until I'm at a friend's house anyway (since my computer went to heaven back in March, XD) and then only, like, once a week anyway.
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