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writertoad — So Obvious
Published: 2006-02-23 23:39:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Stories that I’ve never told are showing up in the headlines
I would never be so bold as to admit that they’re mine
But everybody knows
Because it really shows
In my eyes
Time flies by, without any warning
I woke up
This Tuesday morning
Thinking that it was
Still Saturday
But of course
It wasn’t that way
Why can’t anything be that way?
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Comments: 10

Schizoclam [2006-03-17 04:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Christ, Erin, you need to put these poems on more!

That first line...is...brilliant...*tries to do that laugh thing you do, but fails utterly*

I dunno, this poem overall is just excellent, like, a gem. You made it short but very sweet, so it does not get old, it gets its point across well, and it doesn't sound whiny. Yah. This is officially my favorite poem of yours.

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writertoad In reply to Schizoclam [2006-03-19 00:56:09 +0000 UTC]

are you serious? i just put this up so i could submit something. i don't really like it

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Schizoclam In reply to writertoad [2006-03-19 16:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh...well, do that more often. I like this poem.

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guymagnet [2006-02-27 23:28:02 +0000 UTC]

WOW. ...um...I don't know what to say!

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guymagnet In reply to guymagnet [2006-03-23 05:45:05 +0000 UTC]

well sorry.

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writertoad In reply to guymagnet [2006-03-13 17:33:04 +0000 UTC]

that bad, was it?

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guymagnet In reply to writertoad [2006-03-22 03:17:50 +0000 UTC]

just a tad.

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guymagnet In reply to guymagnet [2006-03-23 05:45:45 +0000 UTC]

well sorry!

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writertoad In reply to guymagnet [2006-03-22 20:56:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot.

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guymagnet In reply to writertoad [2006-03-23 05:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Well sorry!

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