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Published: 2006-04-07 07:43:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description
A brisk spring nightWith awakening trees,
Slowly blooming,
Slowly stretching
Their stiff and barren limbs.
A sea with waves
Gently lapping
Against a cool beach,
Washing away footsteps
Left by a small crab.
A forest with dew
Clinging to the grass
As the sun rises
Over a horizon unseen
In the thick and dense wood.
A single tear
Running down a smooth cheek,
Falling from a soft eye
On a girl whoes found
True love.
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Comments: 13
Om goodness that is wso frekaing good. I AM SO PRUD OF IT! ( u) it's awwww. Like hmmm... so beautiful, and symbolical, and it had alot of nature in it. Truly beautiful it all fell together so peacefully.
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i love this, this is very nice,it touched me.Wonderful job!
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Why thank you. I love to hear that! ^_^
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Nice. I like the cheerful message. It's nice to read something that's not depressing.
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Thank you. It feels weird to be writing something optomistic actually. lolz
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lol. I can imagine.
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It would be really weird if I tried to write something opptimistic. (I felt I needed to point out what I mean tso that you didn't take that as an insult.)
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Oh goodie, you're getting better with your descriptions. 
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If you read my other work, you'll see how I Never have any good descriptions. So I figured to just....picture pretty pictures till my heart bled. ^_^
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Thanks whoez. ^_^
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