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WritingKeepsMeSane — Help Me When I Fall
Published: 2006-03-18 04:32:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Please,
Help me when I fall.

I know I tumble a lot,
But it’s when I’m falling,
When I’m really going down;
That’s when I need you the most.
I need you to catch me
Then hold me close.
The sensation of being in your arms
Is enough to save me in itself.
But knowing your there to save me
That’s when I’ll be at my happiest.

Please,
Help me when I fall.

So why are you never there?
Many times you’ve set yourself up
Just to fail.
And I’ve always been there
To rescue you
From anxiety and depression.

Now, where are you?
I can’t be alone.
I need you.
I always told you that,
But for some reason,
You never believed me.

Please,
Help me when I fall.

I need your arms around me,
Smoothing out all the goose bumps
The cold from my heart brings me.
I need your comforting voice,
Telling me how everything will work out
Even when its been promised to stay bad.
I miss your lustrously smile,
That brightens my day, my future,
When I see nothing but darkness ahead.

I very plainly need you.
You very plainly
Don’t need me.

Please,
Just help me.
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Comments: 13

kjhbones [2006-05-04 23:15:50 +0000 UTC]

Good poem, I have a girlfriend and i am there when she falls, i don't like to see her fall either

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WritingKeepsMeSane In reply to kjhbones [2006-05-04 23:59:32 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww..thats so sweet!! thank u for the comment

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Rockonteddy [2006-03-23 22:04:00 +0000 UTC]

.......... a lovely poem ........ I have read it before ............ some kind person posted it in my journal as one of their favourit poems ......... wonder who that could be ..........
Rockon

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WritingKeepsMeSane In reply to Rockonteddy [2006-03-24 01:04:13 +0000 UTC]

oh and thank you for the comment!

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Rockonteddy In reply to WritingKeepsMeSane [2006-03-24 08:48:24 +0000 UTC]

....... pleasures all mine! ..........
Rockon

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WritingKeepsMeSane In reply to Rockonteddy [2006-03-24 01:03:58 +0000 UTC]

lma0! Don't ya love her though?? ^_^

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Rockonteddy In reply to WritingKeepsMeSane [2006-03-24 08:43:58 +0000 UTC]

......... ......... your are so right, impossible not to ..........
Rockon

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Pmpgrlsrox [2006-03-19 17:48:23 +0000 UTC]

I have mentaly screamed this. But why is it in scraps? Hello it needs to be shown! It is amazing!

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WritingKeepsMeSane In reply to Pmpgrlsrox [2006-03-20 02:04:28 +0000 UTC]

I love u!

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Pmpgrlsrox In reply to WritingKeepsMeSane [2006-03-22 03:17:37 +0000 UTC]

nu uhh I LOVE U MORE!!!


<3 :-* <#

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bloodyteardrop08 [2006-03-18 04:34:39 +0000 UTC]

I can't tell you how many times I've mentally shouted this at someone. Only not quite so well worded. Wonderful job.

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WritingKeepsMeSane In reply to bloodyteardrop08 [2006-03-18 05:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Yea, to many people have mentally screamed this to others. lolz.

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bloodyteardrop08 In reply to WritingKeepsMeSane [2006-03-19 07:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Dang it!! Why can't people read our freakin' minds? It would be so much easier.

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