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wrzosowata-Iro — haiku 102

Published: 2010-04-11 14:21:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 619; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 32
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Description haiku-collage nr 102

I listen for sound
of yours footsteps on the steps
– nothing only rooks

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scraps of papers, illustrations from newspaper and old book, playing cards

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Comments: 15

IntimateAneurysm [2010-04-12 17:12:44 +0000 UTC]

I love how well all of the elements work together! It's cool how the implied window brings attention to the foreground and what's outside the window. C: Also, your haiku is so heartfelt, as usual! <3

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wrzosowata-Iro In reply to IntimateAneurysm [2010-05-01 12:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Ha! Thank you, my dear I glad you like this, especially this window with birds.

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magicbut3rfly [2010-04-12 14:28:01 +0000 UTC]

this is very nice. good work The combination is well done

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wrzosowata-Iro In reply to magicbut3rfly [2010-05-01 12:55:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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somnomollior [2010-04-12 12:53:47 +0000 UTC]

The tens of spades make a great table-cloth, and, as tinkwig already said, the combination with the black rooks makes a pleasing visual experience. I like the haiku too.

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wrzosowata-Iro In reply to somnomollior [2010-05-01 12:55:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Aqua-rat I'm happy for this.

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gally-black [2010-04-12 11:59:15 +0000 UTC]

chodźmy na "kawkę"
ładnie!

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wrzosowata-Iro In reply to gally-black [2010-05-01 12:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Ha, widzę że mamy podobne skojarzenie
(gawronem nie dysponowałam - skończyły się Trza będzie dodrukować następnym razem.)

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steve2727 [2010-04-11 22:39:24 +0000 UTC]

great sharp image!

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wrzosowata-Iro In reply to steve2727 [2010-05-01 12:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Steve!

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steve2727 In reply to wrzosowata-Iro [2010-05-05 00:48:43 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!

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RichardLeach [2010-04-11 15:41:58 +0000 UTC]

I really like this. The spades on the playing cards are like upside-down hearts, and are black like the rooks - everything visual works together with the haiku.

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wrzosowata-Iro In reply to RichardLeach [2010-05-01 12:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. To be honest, I very like this one but I think, it's little to much sad for me (mayby because I feal like that a lot lately). Isn't it ironic?

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RichardLeach In reply to wrzosowata-Iro [2010-05-01 14:53:49 +0000 UTC]

I hear you - sometimes our best pieces don't have our most enjoyable feelings in them.

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wrzosowata-Iro In reply to RichardLeach [2010-05-11 20:02:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm agree.

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