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I am the photographer, not the model.-ers
I'd love your opinion on this piece. The main the I am wondering about is her arms. Do they work well as a "frame" for her face or not? What about her skin tone verses the background? Does it pale her out?
As you can tell, I tend to over think things, so I'd love any feedback you have to give.
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wzrdofozfan In reply to ??? [2009-11-21 00:37:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for the comment. I like that you have a different view on this.
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foamazoid In reply to ??? [2009-11-20 21:15:04 +0000 UTC]
The color of her eyes and hair stands out nicely against the background. I like how her hair looks kind of windblown instead of perfectly curled. It makes the model look tougher.
As for her arms, they would look much better doing something instead of hanging in the hair (like resting on her head, for example). And next time, try having the model wear a long-sleeved t-shirt, so that there's not too much skin showing. I think her skin looks fine but there's so much of in the picture that it's overwhelming.
I really hope that's not too harsh.
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wzrdofozfan In reply to foamazoid [2009-11-21 00:36:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh no - not harsh at all! I appreciate your honesty. I like your idea of her hands on her head. Thanks!
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MissMorticia In reply to ??? [2009-11-20 21:11:24 +0000 UTC]
I think this would have looked better as a portrait instead of landscape shot.
Her eyes truly are the thing that pulls you into this picture, get rid of her arms and focus more on the eyes
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CSnyder [2009-11-20 15:11:02 +0000 UTC]
love her eyes, they do frame it pretty good, i think its kinda confined but thats not a bad thing, nice portrait my friend
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wzrdofozfan In reply to CSnyder [2009-11-20 15:15:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Yeah, like I've said, I've been a little worried about her arms.
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ButterflyAnaes In reply to ??? [2009-11-19 22:49:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm not a fan of the arms as a frame for her face, but her face is beautiful, and those eyes are STUNNING! Are they really that vibrant, or did you photoshop them a little?
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wzrdofozfan In reply to ButterflyAnaes [2009-11-20 02:40:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your comment...and they are contacts.
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ButterflyAnaes In reply to wzrdofozfan [2009-11-20 02:53:09 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. They're contacts? Well, still stunning!
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ForbiddenButterflies In reply to ??? [2009-11-19 21:38:32 +0000 UTC]
I definitely think that her arms are the perfect frame for her face in this shot. And her skin tone vs. the background is brilliant. It pales her out just the right amount, and she looks stunning. And with the background making her skin tone slightly paler, her eyes stand out from her face tremendously well! Great job!
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wzrdofozfan In reply to ForbiddenButterflies [2009-11-20 02:40:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
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ForbiddenButterflies In reply to wzrdofozfan [2009-11-20 22:15:08 +0000 UTC]
You are most certainly welcome!
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iakdag In reply to ??? [2009-11-19 16:51:51 +0000 UTC]
arms made a good window for your models face
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wzrdofozfan In reply to iakdag [2009-11-19 16:56:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I was worried about her arms.
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Britspear6 In reply to ??? [2009-11-19 16:34:49 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful photograph, this model favors Taryn Manning. Love her eyes and the pose.
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wzrdofozfan In reply to Britspear6 [2009-11-19 16:39:39 +0000 UTC]
I never really noticed that til now.
Thanks for the comment.
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Massacred-Daughter In reply to ??? [2009-11-19 16:33:38 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful. The eyes are just amazing. Awesome picture.
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wzrdofozfan In reply to Massacred-Daughter [2009-11-19 16:34:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your comment!
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