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Published: 2013-01-23 04:27:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 2147; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 16
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A commission for [link] on furaffinity
My first anthros XD I think it turned out well, for my first time C: This took . . . forever lol.
Sorry if I haven't been on top of your messages! I'm on that now XD
Commissions open, by the way! Both points and cash: [link]
Hope you like!
God Bless,
-RainFlame
Character (c) Hoskikanji on Furaffinity
Art (c) Me
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Comments: 25
It's very pretty! Love the idea and colours. And for drawing first time anthros, their anatomy is very well made!
I love the little detail of their prints in the sand actually, that gives it a nice punch. Many people forget these tiny details but they really make the pictures jump out.
Only problem for me is the tree trunk. It sticks to the background sand too much, it looks like he has been dragging her through sand (which was actually my first thought) .D Just afterwards I realised it's a tree trunk, that there is palm tree and they are sitting on it.
My personal fix would be making the shadow on the tree more deep and somehow emphasise the tree bark (do palms even have bark? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/eā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Second thing I'd make the lighting impact the wolves' fur colour more, but that's the thing with black, how to colour it properly in different lights .. it's one nasty colour!
Last thing, the vegetation in the right bottom corner is kinda funny. As a thing closest to the viewer it would be prettier with some more detail on it ^^
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful critique! I really appreciate it, especially since they're my first C:
Yeah, I was trying something new with the shading which didn't really go quite as planned XD So maybe the effect wasn't strong enough. And I agree about the vegetation, I should have caught that earlier x_X
Thank you again! I really appreciate you taking the time for this!
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No problem at all, I am just trying to help
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It's very much appreciated C:
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You sure did a very beautiful job on this romantic couple and scenery!
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Thank you so much! Yeah, it was fun to do C:
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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awwww i want to be held in his arms like that.
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Lol glad it gives you warm fuzzies
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Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it!
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Aww, thanks! Glad you like it!
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ahh you are such a great artist!!
this anatomy and anthros!!amg Perfect<3
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Aww, I'm flattered XD Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it! For my first anthros, it means a lot for you to say that C: Thank you!
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Your anthros
Are amazing. I am like- speechless.
Beautiful work <3
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Oh my gosh, thank you so much! That means a lot, since it was my first :'D
Thank you, dear <3
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Oh pfffff-
You're welcome <3
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