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Published: 2012-01-17 02:24:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1928; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 9
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A dramatic scene from my fan fic. This marks Red-X's fist appearance since the episode "X". Since he lost the belt in that episode, I carried that over in my story. Here you can see that his belt has pouches and a buckle unlike his usual X-buckle belt with metal casings. Also the red 'x's on his chest and head are not glowing, indicating that the xenothium is depleted completely. But being Robin's double, he has prepared for this. And uses Batman-isk gear to appear and disappear in a flash.Here is the scene in the story:
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"Sister!" Starfire wasn't sure if she wanted to wrap her arms about her sister's body in an embrace or wrap her fingers around her sister's neck and wring it. Either way, she craved physical contact.
"Oh... ah haha..." Blackfire nervously laughed, "Sister... how, er, wonderful to see you again under much, ah, less threatening circumstances."
Starfire glared at her older sibling. "We have given you numerous chances at reform, sister dear, but you have scorned them all!" Starfire raised her hands and prepared her starbolts.
Instinctively, Robin readied his bird-a-rangs as Jinx readied her dark magic. With all the energy and strength still relatively sapped from her body, it was all Blackfire could do to raise one arm to cover her head. Suddenly a shadow dropped before her, separating her from the other three attackers.
Robin was wide-eyed and Starfire was just as shocked. Before them crouched Red-X.
"What are you doing here?" Robin snarled at his living mistake.
"I was in the neighborhood." was Red-X's only reply.
Jinx prepared a hex for the independent thief, "You eyein' my gem, 50 cent?" she called out threateningly. (NOTE: Blackfire stole a gem that the HIVE stole)
Red-X made no response. He threw his arm down and there was a flash of red light followed by billows of smoke and then an explosion. As soon as the debris and smoke cleared, Red-X and Blackfire were gone.
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Well, what do you think? Check out my gallery for the entire first chapter! And also go to Fanfiction.net to read the next few chapters!
A few things that I am disappointed with: Starfire's head is rather... manish lol, The detail on Blackfire's chest and hair and the detail on Red-X's chest is not very visible :/ but over all, I think I did a pretty good job!
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Comments: 24
fanficadict [2023-05-05 14:00:20 +0000 UTC]
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VioletHeartCruz [2012-12-05 01:30:26 +0000 UTC]
Omg LOVE the scene. I like the couple Red X and Blackfire. They're just like Robin and Starfire but in bad form! I really liked how you made this!
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Xaayer In reply to hadeswife [2012-01-25 00:39:39 +0000 UTC]
! :hugs: thank you! Glad you love love love it!
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yoyo78323 [2012-01-20 03:24:43 +0000 UTC]
Careful....you watched the video...overall. EXCELLENT JOB!!
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Xaayer In reply to yoyo78323 [2012-01-20 03:37:28 +0000 UTC]
A savior is simply someone who saves. Her, Red-X saved Blackfire, making him her savior. However, with a capital letter "Savior" losses the general meaning and refers to a God figure such as Christ or in classic mythology, Artemis. However, because it is a title, the word must be capitalized though it still only carries the general connotation of the word and not the more weighed religious connotation. I'm pretty careful about my art and thanks
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yoyo78323 In reply to Xaayer [2012-01-20 03:42:03 +0000 UTC]
I know, I'm just being extra careful now that I saw that video.
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Xaayer In reply to yoyo78323 [2012-01-20 03:43:19 +0000 UTC]
There is such a thing as being too careful don't over-do it and read to much into everything, Nearly everything means more than one thing. Temperance. BTW when is your next work of art?
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yoyo78323 In reply to Xaayer [2012-01-20 03:55:47 +0000 UTC]
Got it. Hmmmm, that's a good question. I have so many sketches done, but I haven't started "digitalizing" any of them yet.
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Xaayer In reply to yoyo78323 [2012-01-20 04:06:02 +0000 UTC]
Staaaaarrrrrrrttttttttttttt I want to see your artwork! I miss it :/
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yoyo78323 In reply to Xaayer [2012-01-20 04:08:23 +0000 UTC]
Lol K, hopefully I will get some free time tomorrow. ^^ I just have a lot of stuff going on with school! Say! Are you able to use a drawing tablet with Gimp?
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Xaayer In reply to yoyo78323 [2012-01-20 04:12:57 +0000 UTC]
Nope! All with a mouse! I'm not rich ._.
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yoyo78323 In reply to Xaayer [2012-01-20 04:15:09 +0000 UTC]
Ah, so your like me. Good, I hear it like learning to draw all over again. And I don't think that I have the time or patience for that. :/
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Xaayer In reply to yoyo78323 [2012-01-20 04:16:25 +0000 UTC]
I do want to try it sometime... but I think I will just stick with my mouse Have you seen the epic artist on here that uses MS Paint and a mouse?
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yoyo78323 In reply to Xaayer [2012-01-20 04:17:57 +0000 UTC]
No, But I will check him out later. I've tried one out. My gf's cousin has one. It's pretty awesome,..though I totally suck at it! xD
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Xaayer In reply to yoyo78323 [2012-01-20 04:21:37 +0000 UTC]
[link] check this chick out, too :3 she's awesome
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yoyo78323 In reply to Xaayer [2012-01-20 04:24:41 +0000 UTC]
That's Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazin!!!
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Xaayer In reply to yoyo78323 [2012-01-20 04:25:42 +0000 UTC]
I watched her... she's really good
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yoyo78323 In reply to Xaayer [2012-01-20 04:28:24 +0000 UTC]
I wish to do the same. That is ASTOUNDING work for using just a mouse!!
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