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Published: 2005-02-15 03:43:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 435; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 83
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This is part of a manga that I am currently working on. YAY! It's not the Deus one but they do intertwine. He he he. I know that it looks REALLY crappy but it's a VERY rough preliminary sketch of the first page. I will hopefully get the chance to enter it into a contest and get it published! :crosses fingers: Anyway, please tell me what you think . I would like to improve this anyway that I can. Thank you!
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Ooh, you've started sketches for the manga! ^^ I can't wait to see the story...
And I missed you a lot, so I'm happy you're posting stuff again. ^__^ (hugs)
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Awww, thank you! :feels loved: This is actually a side manga so it won't be featuring Deus but it is still important to the one with Deus. Confusing enough for you? Sorry! Thankies!
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Wow, I really like the pannel design. I think it'll be really good for introducing the characters, allowing the reader to fully absorb them. 
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Yay, thank you sooo much! That boosted my confidence quite a bit! Yeah, that was the main reason I drew them fully. Thank you for noticing! 
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Yay! So many hearts! Thank you! 
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There. Many, many hearts for YOU!
(erg, sorry if I sent this multiple times)
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ooo. reminds me of chobits alot now. ^^ and chobits was awesome~ can' wait for the second page... or the manga! hahhahah
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It reminds you of chobits? Howso? Just wonderin'. I finished the second page. I'll put it up as soon as possible!
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S'nice. I likes it.
"I would rather not have that day hurry. After our reason is complete, what is there left to live for? That is when We lose everything we had when we were waiting."
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Yay, thanks!
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^_^ Just making predictions and/or giving suggestions.
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Hmm....Actually you kind of hit the ending right on the button with that quote. Cookie for you!! 
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Really? That fucking rocks.
Yay for cookie!
*shares cookie with j00* ^_^
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LOL! Cookies shall rule all! Yum...thankies!
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Lol not the cookies. Pac-man is going to rule us all. Proven fact.
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LOL! Really? I haven't heard of Pac-man ruling the world...That's new.
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Huh. Well, you should know than. Oh, and all VHS's will be destroyed in 2030.
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Yes, but they'll be destroyed. Meaning the authorities will come and stomp on them while you cry :3
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LOL! Yeah, that's a bit obvious. But I'm gonna keep my VHS's until no even knows what they are and they become antiques, sell them and become filthy rich! XD
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jus get it off the lined paper and ur good 2 go. i think its great.
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Yeah, i'm going to do that. This is just a preliminary sketch. I'm not actually goin to submit it on lined paper. Thank you!
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np i love ur stuff keep it up
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Ooh, the dialogue is really intriguing and makes me want to read more ^^ Plus you did a wonderful job with the profile shots, so beautiful! *-* Nya, good luck with the contest!
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Really?! OMG,yay! I thought that maybe the dialogue was lame, but thank you! I really appreciate it!
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Well I really like your drawings! I especially like the drawings on the bottom row.
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Thank you very much!
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i think it looks good! i can't wait til it comes out~
look at that wonderful side-face! XD <3
it really looks great. ^^
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Yay! Thank you! I already made some changes to that page. I kinda goofed up on their hairstyles. Te he...silly me! Thanks!
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their hair is not how it's supposed to be??? well, i'm sure changing it will only be good. ^^
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Yeah....the longer piece of hair was on the wrong side for one of them...hehehe. Silly me! I got too caught up in it and forgot to look at their designs. Whoops!
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whoa! that is pretty big. ^^
how this picture reminds me of chobits...??? how the side-way is drawn. ^^ it has soft face curves, and chobits does too, even though i don't think it's exactly same... and there's two people with pretty dress on~
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Yeah...your right. Heheh...it wasn't Chobits inspired though. I randomly drew pictures of these two girls in school and was like "Whoa...they look cool." So I incorporated them into my Deus manga! w00t!
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