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Published: 2015-04-26 19:28:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 807; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 3
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Part 10 of Revelation Emerald!
FINALLY, THE END OF CHAPTER 2!!!!!1
As you can see, I've tried to spice things up a bit more with the artwork. Because this particular scene is unrelated to rest of chapter 2, I was initially going to make this a chapter 2.5. However, I realized that a lot of you guys may have brushed off a chapter 2.5 as it sounds like some optional bonus chapter, when in reality, It's necessary to read this part if you want to experience the comic in Its fullest! From this point onwards, you'll gradually begin to experience more and more of the originality I'm putting into this run.
Aaaaanyway, I hope you guys like it. I know It's been a while since I uploaded, but I did say I would be on hiatus for a couple of months, so here's the end of part 2 early! :3
Thanks for checking out my comic!
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Mentions of the horsemen (I'm assuming the four horsemen) Death was written on the prisoner's door, and I think Mr. Lemon was about to say they were sent by Master War. So the four horsemen of the Apocalypse are getting together eh? I assume Pestilence and Famine will show up too?
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More like Alcatraz. I love One Piece though, and admittedly, it was the Impel Down arc that made me want to throw this into the story. Hehe.
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mannn i love the Impel Down arc too
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...is Mr. Lemon the evil lemon that the Sunkern from Niall's past had to stop?!
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Actually, that's a great theory! The "evil lemon" that Sunkern was referring to is actually an inside joke between me and a few friends who read my comic. To the regular viewer, it probably just looks like some random comical line. I really like this theory, though, and this kind of foreshadowing is definitely the sort of thing that I would do! There's a slight chance that I might actually do something with this theory of yours!
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Haha, it did seem pretty random, but it is cool to see there is a meaning behind it. And it would be cool if you did that! Of course, though, don't let it get in the way of your storytelling.
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Haha, yep. I don't usually do things without a reason behind it. And don't worry about it, if I do in fact do it, I'll absolutely make sure that it won't damage the story in any way. I've got most of it planned out anyway. Some tweaking here and there shouldn't hurt.
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Haha, well, whether or not you decide to work that in, I'll be happy to see where the story goes.
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To be fair, I never did expect two characters called "Mr. Lemon" and "Mr. Lime" to live very long anyway
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True, but at least they both had one bad ass moment lol
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Soooo much blooooooddd *Retches and almost throws up*
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wWOOOOW
this chapter ends with some HunterXhunter level of shieeet here
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Heh, nice take on Alcatraz xD The prison looks really well-done!
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The art was amazing.
I can see Daredevil rubbing off on you when Lemon shot the guard lol, cannot wait for the next chapter.
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Thank you, my good friendo.
It means a lot to see you're enjoying it. <3
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After seeing this page I read through all of your comic. It's amazing! I love the unique plot that is going to unfold now. Can't wait to see more! Also, your art improved a lot during the time, keep that up!
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That means a lot! And trust me, this is just the beginning. You ain't seen nothin' yet, haha!
Seriously, thank you so much! And thanks for the watch! :3
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wow... I don't know what's going on, but i LOVE IT!
The characters are beautifully drawn and Forretraz looks sweet ^^
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This scene may seem like something out of the blue right now, but just you wait.
And thank you so much, man!
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This is amazing page! You really managed to create proper atmosphere for a prison scene. Now I have million questions in my head and wondering what will happen next. Can't wait to see moar!
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Wow, thank you! It looks like my practice is paying off! There'll be another scene like this at the end of chapter 3, so stay tuned for that. And don't worry, Absolutely EVERYTHING will be explained in time!!! I may do a Q&A thingy at some point as well.
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That prison is very well made! Really looking forward to more of this crazy nuzlocke!
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Thank you, man! That really means a lot! <3
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OHMYGOD that was intense
I literally grinned when I saw your comic in my inbox aaaa
Forretraz, I see what you did there *ayyy* for the first time I thought it's a really huge pokemon, but nnnope, a prison, okay, I can live with that I just imagined this pokemon THAT big oh god no
Questions are all around us. Who is this man, why did he killed them, but damn, his ponytail is amazing.
I just hope he won't do anything to Niall or his pokemon, that would be nasty...
Moving on! I really like how you did second panel - is it a mix between crayons and digital? If so, then holy YES, it looks really good!
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THANK YOU!!!1
I'm glad someone was able to get the Forretraz pun so quickly. Kudos to you, Akiria! And my brother actually suggested that I make it a massive sleeping Forretress or a robot, so I may in fact do something with that idea. I haven't decided yet. :3
And who knows!? 
And he most definitely WILL meet up with Niall, but I'm not going to say when.
The second panel was actually drawn and shaded in pencil. I then put it into photoshop, changed the levels, and coloured it. I think I'll have to use the same technique when drawing towns n' stuff.
Thanks again, Akiria. I'm so glad that I have regular readers!
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Oooh, nice idea with mixing pencil with photoshop, it looks really good! I think it might work very well with towns and stuff like this!
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Definitely. I gotta try it with Rustboro City.
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Dude, there was a huge improvement in your work! Damn, now I feel like phusing myself to work harder too.
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Thank you, dude! I'm working on hands at the moment. They're so bloody annoying, but It's about time I tackled them head-on. And ya gotta push yourself. It's the best way to improve!
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