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Published: 2011-05-27 02:32:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 5128; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 16
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lllyander 's(FA user) Orc character. What a better way to end a good slaying than to take the sword of the knight who thought he was man enough to stand against you? Not only that, killing him with his own blade seemed sweeter than ringing his neck.Thank you Llyander for helping me with my cats surgery and being very patient :3
Character©: llyander llyander
Art©Murikami
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Comments: 5
Nice one. The details on her are simply great., though there are a few tiny little mistakes.
Her legs seem a bit off to me, especially the one in the background. Well... further away. The part where the knee would bend is too high.
The... harness that goes across her chest wouldn´t really fall between the breasts like that, unless it´s going around each one individually.
And the part where the sword has a hole in it wouldn´t really connect. As in... if you pull the like from the tip of the sword where the hole starts, it wouldn´t connect to the rest of it, unless the sword was crooked.
I love the coloring on her and the way you managed to define the muscles. Also, good job on not making her seem truly.... orcish... not too skinny and rather bulky as orcs should be.
The blood splatters compliment the rough exterior nicely.
The detail on the sword is great, especially the bloody part.
Her face is awesome, you got that part by the ass (methaphorically). Great detail and great expression.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to actually give me crit(I tend to have to threaten brutal maiming from my friends to get it ;<). I can see what you mean about the harness and her leg, as for the sword thats sadly the first sword that wasn't your normal two handed bastard sword ive actually drawn. Note to self, research weapons.
My troubles, mainly with..ahem certain parts is because the person who owns this orc mentioned to me that she has womanly curves, and manly curves, and I tried to add both..and failed ><
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I´d imagine all orc women to be manly.. so you actually did a GOOD job, since that´s how she´s supposed to be. The only thing about the anatomy is the leg as I mentioned before, but if you just move the bend a bit lower it will be fixed,
When drawing a woman that´s "manly" you just add more muscles and a male waist and it´s more or less done
And it´s not a problem, with the critique. I try to be as constructive as possible when I actually find a pic I like and want to help
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Always good to see more orc women! I think they're on the rise these days!
Great picture with great anatomy and incredible colouring. Well done!
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