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Xavienna [2012-11-22 01:15:45 +0000 UTC]

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hasdsakdhjas, you've gotten so much better in such little time! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> I'm so jealous of your progress!
It looks like she's actually walking on real ground, and there's a definite horizon. I feel like you've improved enough for me to throw some more stuff at you to try. And if you don't wanna try them you don't have to, again, they're just suggestions.
When you draw you want to make things seem 3D, and one way you can do that is with positioning. I know when you first try this, it might look dumb or not quite right, but as I always (and annoyingly XD) say, practice makes perfect. Objects closer to the bottom of the page are seen as closer to you and bigger, object farther from the bottom, or closer to the horizon are seen as farther away or smaller. So when you put your character halfway to the horizon, but draw her big, we imagine her a huge if she was closer. And since she's so close to the trees, which we all know from experience are pretty big, she looks kinda as big as a tree.
So my suggestion is, when drawing, if you want a character to seem small, draw them closer to the bottom of the page and smaller with a little bigger objects closer to the horizon.
I hope this makes sense, it does to me but I know I explain things weird, cuz that's how my mind is.
And again I just have to say how much you've improved and I really feel you're ready to move onto bigger and better things. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww"/> keep up the great work, soon I'll be looking up to you and asking you for critiques! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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fire-wolves67 [2012-11-22 21:49:41 +0000 UTC]

omigawsh it amazing asdfghjkl <3

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Cgartist18 [2012-11-21 20:58:51 +0000 UTC]

*dead*

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xXTearOfAnAngelXx [2012-11-20 19:52:40 +0000 UTC]

*dead* X3 (btw. really awesome work Catzy)

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