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Xcetera β€” The Pop

Published: 2010-07-04 23:09:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1163; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description I was so happy I caught that!
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OldSchoolHipster [2012-10-16 23:44:08 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Like children, bubbles are not the easiest to freeze in time, ergo children with bubbles being original, are quite the nightmare without thinking ahead to bring a rabbit’s foot, or 4 leaf clover with you.

Starting with vision, it is a tad bit hard to neither confirm nor deny not only where the artist was going, or where the viewer should go here. 2 panels here leave the viewer hungry for more of the story, which will affect the impact here as well, so a 3 Β½ is quite generous, seeing as the timing of the shot with the breaking of the bubble is impossible to contrive, so an extra half point is warranted for having good luck! 2 panels are just not enough, 2+ more would have brought this as high as 4 1/2 .

Is this original? Well yes and no… This model, this venue, this light source, the surrounding environment makes this a sturdy 4 in originality. Most times we see boring children or adult females blowing bubbles in an indoor/outdoor setting, which this breaks free from, and gives the image the respect due for being able to β€œdo its own thing”, without even the fear for the standard mediocrity of bubble blowing β€œdime-a-dozen” images to affect it with its jaded place in the community.

4 stars for technique were arrived at after a battle of half-pointers. The watermark taking away some of the focus cost a half-point when the image was enlarged, but the fact that a larger image was available for viewing returned the half-point. The luck of catching the burst, the angle of the shot, catching the various reflections from anywhere to everywhere in the bubble, the trusting of the existing light source to keep the image β€œreal” and β€œengageable”, and the overall trusting of the artist to allow the human subject, and the camera itself reinforces the validity of the 4 stars. 2 or more panels added could have raised this to a 4 Β½ - 5

3 Β½ for impact is indeed expect from the vision. 4 panels here would have given the viewer a much more fulfilling story to digest, but alas, as I stated earlier, the artist has no guarantees as to what a bubble will or will not do, but… A little preparation could have been done, and several shots in rapid succession could have been done, hoping for the best as the shutter lets loose. Like the vision, 3 stars is earned, and a half-point bonus for luck.

Overall the image is loaded with 5 star potential, but in need of further backstory, which may or may not had been realistic at the time of the shot, but in my opinion is a sturdy 3 ΒΎ star average piece. I saw a revamp of this image, using only the one β€œburst” panel, and I prefer the before and after here, as opposed to the 1 star vision and impact of the updated single panel submission.

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Xcetera In reply to OldSchoolHipster [2012-10-17 02:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique!

And I very much agree about the diptych. I've never liked the photos split and only did because I had it requested about three times.

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coloringlight [2012-10-17 00:30:59 +0000 UTC]

BUBBLES!

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Xcetera In reply to coloringlight [2012-10-17 02:38:52 +0000 UTC]

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otakufevah [2011-09-28 03:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Now I wanna go play with bubbles......... D:<

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Xcetera In reply to otakufevah [2011-09-28 03:54:58 +0000 UTC]

DO IT! I'll bring my camera!

Seriously, though, this was so much fun.

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otakufevah In reply to Xcetera [2011-09-28 04:00:33 +0000 UTC]

Lol okayyy! I gotta buy bubbles first O_O

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Xcetera In reply to otakufevah [2011-09-28 04:03:36 +0000 UTC]

And lots of them XD

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otakufevah In reply to Xcetera [2011-09-28 04:05:49 +0000 UTC]

I remember getting those little bubble guns and i'd go nuts over them. It was like omg world of amazement

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Xcetera In reply to otakufevah [2011-09-28 04:08:46 +0000 UTC]

I never had one! It was always a childhood dream of mine to have one of those giant rings D: I'm going to buy one for my child one day in the future when I decide to have one!

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otakufevah In reply to Xcetera [2011-09-28 04:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Go for it!! They'll have a blast with it. Who knows you might have to go back and buy you one or just play wiht theirs when they aren't lookin

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Lenaleez [2011-09-28 01:59:20 +0000 UTC]

O:

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Xcetera In reply to Lenaleez [2011-09-28 02:16:48 +0000 UTC]

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Lenaleez In reply to Xcetera [2011-09-28 23:03:57 +0000 UTC]

ish a wonderful photograph

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ThatKidWithAPassion [2010-07-31 04:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful colours~!

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Xcetera In reply to ThatKidWithAPassion [2010-07-31 04:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks muchly! ^____^

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ThatKidWithAPassion In reply to Xcetera [2010-07-31 04:59:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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mystic0pal [2010-07-06 22:21:25 +0000 UTC]

I love bubbles!

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Xcetera In reply to mystic0pal [2010-07-07 02:04:00 +0000 UTC]

So do I

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ponyfan101 [2010-07-06 17:21:53 +0000 UTC]

oo! you should try to crop it or something..

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Xcetera In reply to ponyfan101 [2010-07-07 02:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Well I could post an image thats not a double image Would make things easier to see

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ponyfan101 In reply to Xcetera [2010-07-07 15:07:41 +0000 UTC]

still really coll though '0'

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Xcetera In reply to ponyfan101 [2010-07-08 00:41:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks =]

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Tyros [2010-07-06 17:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow! Speaking of catching things when they're popping... XD This is awesome! You can see it still in the process of disintegrating!
Excellent catch~

- Tyros

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Xcetera In reply to Tyros [2010-07-07 02:00:24 +0000 UTC]

I was so fricken excited when I clicked on the view button XD Srsly.

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Tyros In reply to Xcetera [2010-07-16 18:53:51 +0000 UTC]

I bet you were! I'd be freaking out in the best way possible. XD

- Tyros

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