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Published: 2012-06-26 05:21:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 586; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description i remember
the day her breath expired

that was the day the earth turned
burned
the words
of my soul.

the day that the no birds flew
or sang

and the day the ground beneath me
made my very bones shake.

did you know
that even when you think the fire's out,
it still rages within?


Β© Xcetera Photography

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Comments: 15

wwwwwmoonsad [2013-08-17 18:57:09 +0000 UTC]

wooooow Β so so so beautifulΒ 

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Nilanja [2012-10-02 09:08:30 +0000 UTC]

this is really cool
a burning book...wow...I wanna do that too

there is only one thing which I would change: I would prefer it if the model had closed her eyes..
but all in all: great!

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Xcetera In reply to Nilanja [2012-10-03 02:54:49 +0000 UTC]

*ahem, [link]

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Xcetera In reply to Nilanja [2012-10-03 02:54:33 +0000 UTC]

It was such a fun shoot, I totally recommend it.

Perhaps this one would be more to you're liking? (I took like 15 different versions of this ) :thumb310747773:

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Nilanja In reply to Xcetera [2012-10-03 09:41:03 +0000 UTC]

^^
hehe yeh I have seen that
I like the coloured version more...even when the eyes are open^^

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ShesABromide [2012-07-01 15:45:06 +0000 UTC]

The focus in this piece is really quite lovely, and does well to emphasize her stunning blue eyes.
Wonderful piece, and quite an interesting set up with the book

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Xcetera In reply to ShesABromide [2012-07-02 02:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ms-laika [2012-06-27 21:49:20 +0000 UTC]

I like the composition very much! may i use it as a reference for a drawing?

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Xcetera In reply to ms-laika [2012-06-28 05:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely I just want to see it when it's done!

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Sakura-in-the-rain [2012-06-27 08:08:46 +0000 UTC]

I kinda like how one side of the book is black while the other still burns. I don't know if it was intentional, but it's really symbolic to me.

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Xcetera In reply to Sakura-in-the-rain [2012-06-27 18:25:09 +0000 UTC]

You know, I hadn't noticed that So it definatly wasn't intentional, but a great accident. They do sort of have an order to them, so it fits in pretty great.

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Sakura-in-the-rain In reply to Xcetera [2012-06-30 04:51:46 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty awesome XD One great accident!

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pearwood [2012-06-26 11:13:15 +0000 UTC]

The pyre.

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CrystalEnceladus [2012-06-26 05:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous composition, and the fire being out of focus means the eye goes to her face first.

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Xcetera In reply to CrystalEnceladus [2012-06-26 05:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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