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How to write YaoiWriting a good Yaoi takes a lot of practice, but I hope this tutorial will help
( ) = additional information
{ } = my little thoughts and feelings ^_^
[Step 1] Understand your couple.
You need to know which one is the uke and which one is the seme
Seme: strong, usually taller, bigger build, dominant
Uke: shy, small, usually very thin and feminine
For example, if you are using Squall leonheart and Seifer almasy (final fantasy VIII) squall would be the uke and Seifer would be the seme, because Seifer is more violent and he is a lot stronger, he has a bigger build and he isn't a person who'd submit easily {but this is where you can use bondage ect.}
On harder couples like Light Yagami and L lawliet (death note) you can decide for yourself {fuuuuuuuuuun}
[Step 2] Choose your scene.
You need to choose your location carefully, sometimes the bedroom can be sexy but it gets a little boring for the audience.
If you are using a Naruto couple, you could use:
the hot springs
forest
You don't have to use the same old location every single time, it just stops your Yaoi story from being that little bit more original.
But remember that your location also has to be plausible, you can't do something like (middle of street) unless you want it to be very awkward and scarring for the two of them… but it doesn't make a very hot Yaoi…
[Step 3] Choose your positions carefully.
You can use some locations to your advantage for example…
different locations have different levels, such as in a hot spring the story could go something like
Sasuke bent the small blonde over the edge of the spring, his tanned skin pressed to the tiles
Or
Sasuke lifted the small uke so his legs could wrap around his waist, the blonde boy held the uchiha's neck for support as he pushed himself…{mwahaha}
But yeah, use everything to your advantage
[Step 4] remember the little details.
Every little detail counts
Is it night time or daytime?
Is it cold or hot?
Are they inside or outside?
What are they wearing?
All these little things make your story so much better
It's what makes your story stand out, use your sick little fan girl/boy imagination {Sasuke in a maid outfit… *licks lips* anywhoo…}
[Step 5] CONFIDENCE!
I cannot say this enough, you guys be confident, I started out struggling with kissing scenes... but I finnaly said {fuck you conscience!} and I went for it, and I have never gone back to that pussy, wimpy way of writing because it's just so slow… and boring… and it drangs on… but if you just think to yourself I CAN DO THIS!!! Then nothing can stop you
SO GET OUT THERE AND WRITE SOME YAOI!!!!
AND SEND ME YOUR WORK!!!
Hugs and kisses
XcrazybloodsuckerX
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Comments: 83
trottersman In reply to ??? [2010-12-19 22:48:00 +0000 UTC]
YAY :3 your me now friend are you a fan girl?
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to trottersman [2010-12-20 19:24:29 +0000 UTC]
as fangirl as i can be... i don't get out much...
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trottersman In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-12-20 21:03:07 +0000 UTC]
oo sorry im a fan girl to sooo same here
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kawaiiokama In reply to ??? [2010-12-12 11:21:42 +0000 UTC]
oh my god.
a medal for you. heres to a future full of top notch yaoi where none was before.
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to kawaiiokama [2010-12-12 20:35:30 +0000 UTC]
aww ^_^ thankyou so much ^_^
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yaoi-chaaaan In reply to ??? [2010-11-26 09:32:21 +0000 UTC]
i just jot an idea of the akatsuki ukes (itachi,hidan,deidara,tobi)pole dancin' o.o
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to yaoi-chaaaan [2010-11-26 13:10:47 +0000 UTC]
seeeeeeeeeeeeexy
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yaoi-chaaaan In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-11-27 23:29:09 +0000 UTC]
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to RoseFox101 [2010-11-26 13:11:03 +0000 UTC]
glad to be of help
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RoseFox101 In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-11-27 04:52:52 +0000 UTC]
thanks. this will help, i plan to write a yaoi soon.
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to kiyotoap [2010-11-10 15:36:19 +0000 UTC]
aww i'm so glad ^_^ if you need any more help then on't hesitate to ask
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kiyotoap In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-11-12 10:46:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks alot! Um I do have a question though ^w^; should I just start off with a sex scene or something with a little beginning to it? Have any examples that would be great ^w^
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to kiyotoap [2010-11-12 13:47:13 +0000 UTC]
erm... starting with a full blown sex scene can be quite confusing, if you read some of my work you'll see you need to build up a bit of the story
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kiyotoap In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-11-13 07:22:06 +0000 UTC]
Ok thank you very much! ^w^
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kiyotoap In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-11-15 05:13:53 +0000 UTC]
One more question where is your material I didn't find any on this account ^w^;
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to kiyotoap [2010-11-15 08:19:39 +0000 UTC]
yeah becuase DA is a homophobic shithead so i made my own websites, just search up left4yaoi or go to this one[link]
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kiyotoap In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-11-16 11:53:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much and I wish the DA bastards would stop that, they have naked pics of women whores but gay is all of a sudden bad fucking bastards DX
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luv-SASUHINA In reply to ??? [2010-10-01 00:45:18 +0000 UTC]
do you have any suggestions on how to write KakashixItachi it's my first time writing yaoi
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to luv-SASUHINA [2010-10-01 17:53:12 +0000 UTC]
aww, well... when it comes to uke/seme problems i'd usually go for kakashi bacause he's older but like i said if you're doing a bondage twist then you can use itachi, but his feminine features can be a bit annoying sometimes... so erm... yeah... write out a draft and send it to me in a note, i'll proof read it okaies?
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luv-SASUHINA In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-10-01 21:33:11 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty i'll be sure to send it to you! thanks again
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to luv-SASUHINA [2010-10-03 18:22:19 +0000 UTC]
you're very welcome
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to deathnotefan2222 [2010-09-18 17:15:19 +0000 UTC]
thankyou ^_^
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