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How to write YaoiWriting a good Yaoi takes a lot of practice, but I hope this tutorial will help
( ) = additional information
{ } = my little thoughts and feelings ^_^
[Step 1] Understand your couple.
You need to know which one is the uke and which one is the seme
Seme: strong, usually taller, bigger build, dominant
Uke: shy, small, usually very thin and feminine
For example, if you are using Squall leonheart and Seifer almasy (final fantasy VIII) squall would be the uke and Seifer would be the seme, because Seifer is more violent and he is a lot stronger, he has a bigger build and he isn't a person who'd submit easily {but this is where you can use bondage ect.}
On harder couples like Light Yagami and L lawliet (death note) you can decide for yourself {fuuuuuuuuuun}
[Step 2] Choose your scene.
You need to choose your location carefully, sometimes the bedroom can be sexy but it gets a little boring for the audience.
If you are using a Naruto couple, you could use:
the hot springs
forest
You don't have to use the same old location every single time, it just stops your Yaoi story from being that little bit more original.
But remember that your location also has to be plausible, you can't do something like (middle of street) unless you want it to be very awkward and scarring for the two of them… but it doesn't make a very hot Yaoi…
[Step 3] Choose your positions carefully.
You can use some locations to your advantage for example…
different locations have different levels, such as in a hot spring the story could go something like
Sasuke bent the small blonde over the edge of the spring, his tanned skin pressed to the tiles
Or
Sasuke lifted the small uke so his legs could wrap around his waist, the blonde boy held the uchiha's neck for support as he pushed himself…{mwahaha}
But yeah, use everything to your advantage
[Step 4] remember the little details.
Every little detail counts
Is it night time or daytime?
Is it cold or hot?
Are they inside or outside?
What are they wearing?
All these little things make your story so much better
It's what makes your story stand out, use your sick little fan girl/boy imagination {Sasuke in a maid outfit… *licks lips* anywhoo…}
[Step 5] CONFIDENCE!
I cannot say this enough, you guys be confident, I started out struggling with kissing scenes... but I finnaly said {fuck you conscience!} and I went for it, and I have never gone back to that pussy, wimpy way of writing because it's just so slow… and boring… and it drangs on… but if you just think to yourself I CAN DO THIS!!! Then nothing can stop you
SO GET OUT THERE AND WRITE SOME YAOI!!!!
AND SEND ME YOUR WORK!!!
Hugs and kisses
XcrazybloodsuckerX
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to ??? [2013-01-05 15:26:53 +0000 UTC]
The height shouldn't matter.
I roleplay Johnlock now, Sherlock is taller but I still make him the submissive one.
If they're shy and act submissive, then that's usually enough.
Appearence is just a quick way for people to decide.
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BayntonObsession In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2013-01-05 23:46:44 +0000 UTC]
Ok c:
Thanks for your help ^u^
Thank chu!!! :3
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to BayntonObsession [2013-01-06 14:51:27 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
Any more questions, let me know.
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BayntonObsession In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2013-01-11 11:24:04 +0000 UTC]
Can I ask if you could maybe read one I wrote before looking finding this?
I'm just trying to improve, sorry >.<
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to BayntonObsession [2013-01-11 13:41:02 +0000 UTC]
Of course! I'd love to
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BayntonObsession In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2013-01-11 13:50:28 +0000 UTC]
Thankyousomuchx3
Pt 1 (It's just an intro, sooooo yeah ) [link]
Pt 2 (the r+ stuff)
[link]
Yeah theyre shifty I know.
But thanks so much for taking the time to read 'em!
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to BayntonObsession [2013-01-11 14:03:42 +0000 UTC]
Aw, it's not shitty.
First of all, you might want to get yourself a beta reader.
People online either charge or volunteer to proof read your work to fix any errors with your grammar/ punctuation.
You might also want to keep an eye on what tense you’re writing your story in and in what person (1st/3rd)
If you can’t find anyone or you just don’t want another person helping, there are things like Grammarly and Ginger it that are online apps you can use.
As for the all capitals for shouting, usually a ‘!’ or just saying that they’re screaming is enough.
You wouldn’t really see full capitals in books.
Another point is, you need to work on your vocabulary.
Words like ‘crushing’ isn’t that sexy, it shows aggression, but not really the right kind of aggression.
Again, there are online thesauruses that you can use to help you.
Apart from that, it’s pretty good
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BayntonObsession In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2013-01-11 14:08:02 +0000 UTC]
That's got to be the best feedback possible. Thanks so much!
<33
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to BayntonObsession [2013-01-11 17:50:20 +0000 UTC]
Glad to help
Let me know if you need anything else.
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BayntonObsession In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2013-01-12 23:32:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh I will c:
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KyokoSuki [2012-07-15 17:33:43 +0000 UTC]
here is the Half finished result [link] thanks for your help~!
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to KyokoSuki [2012-07-15 17:39:19 +0000 UTC]
it's brilliant so far well done, I'm glad i could be of assistance!
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eevee1767 [2011-07-06 02:56:22 +0000 UTC]
Nice guide, I think I'll ruin my writing virginity now.
Quick question, what if you have two seme guys? I kinda though of who's seme and uke in the relationship I was going for, but it seems kinda strange to have a seme as uke. Not to mention, I've seen it both ways.
But thanks for your help, I think this will help me in the long run; I've never even written a kiss scene, so we'll see how I'll turn out. Thanks again!
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to eevee1767 [2011-07-06 17:42:28 +0000 UTC]
Lol that's great, writing yaoi is an awesome thing ^^ and if you can do it well then you'll get loads of fans
as for the seme/uke thing... it's quite tricky sometimes... if they're both large and dominant and... manly? then it can be tough, maybe go by age? if they're about the same then why not try and write something involving bondage? maybe drugs? e.g. chloroform (it's a liquid that you put on a rag and it knocks them out for a while) <--- just in case...
anyway... try that or even do something as easy as flipping a coin? OR! have them take turns...
if you'd like any ideas or any more help then please don't hesitate to conact me, i'm usually fast to reply and i love to help have fun x
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eevee1767 In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2011-07-06 18:07:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I was planning on a piece for a while now, this should help C:
I thought about it for a bit and I think I know who is more dominant. It's RusAme/AmeRus from Hetalia if you wanted to know. Most people don't go for the latter and I think I know who's better in my opinion. Thanks for your help!
I couldn't help but giggle at chloroform. CX I feel immature.
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to eevee1767 [2011-07-06 18:15:59 +0000 UTC]
hmm... america would like to be top but russia is larger and i also have a theory that in hetalia teir **** length depends on the overall size of their country... so even though america would be big, russia would be fucking massive!
and i laugh an chloroform too ^^
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eevee1767 In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2011-07-06 18:47:43 +0000 UTC]
That is true, I have a lot to think about. You gave me some good ideas, actually. And good point. XD
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to eevee1767 [2011-07-06 19:11:43 +0000 UTC]
^^ thankyou i think, sleep and eat yaoi (yum)
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to x3tacox3 [2011-06-26 19:20:31 +0000 UTC]
you really should ^^ the world needs more yaoi ^^ if you have an problems, don't hesitate to message me and ask for help, i'm pretty much always online and i'm happy to help
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x3tacox3 In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2011-06-27 22:42:16 +0000 UTC]
alright I'l message you if I get lost xD Thanks!
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MATTIKINS52 [2011-03-10 23:15:06 +0000 UTC]
When i read your definition of uke i IMMEDIATELY thought of Mello (Death Note as im sure you know) which is EXACTLY what i want in the story the im writing at the moment uke-Mello is always nice lol But im being a coward at the moment..... When ever i write Mello's POV i always make him so OOC i like a scared feeble Mello opposed to a Harsh and bossy one so in this soon to be story there is SOOOO gonna be a rape scene with Mello obviously being the victim BUT IM TO SCARED TO WRITE IT!!!! (yes emoticon i know i am *sigh*) I'm gonna do it though I MUST. and this totally motivated me Thanks
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to MATTIKINS52 [2011-03-11 16:36:43 +0000 UTC]
it's fine, in most of my own yaoi's i usually use mello's behaviour as a front to hide his homosexuality but when matt steps int the walls break down and he actually is just a scared uke ^^
i'm so glad this has help and don't be scared ^^ belive me the longer you dwell on it the less time you'll have to write lovely lovely yaoi ^^everyone gets nervous when they write yaoi for the first time but belive me once you get over the shyness of it it's almost becomes a habbit ^^
if you have anything you need help with of even want to role play with me feel free to send me a note ^^
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MATTIKINS52 In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2011-03-11 19:23:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much ^_^
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to MATTIKINS52 [2011-03-11 20:54:53 +0000 UTC]
no problem ^^ (lol death hug)
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Celestial-moon-fire [2011-01-17 01:53:17 +0000 UTC]
I... Yea~ It IS hard to write it at first, hmm? *rembers first kiss scene* -w-
I wnat to wriet a good yaoi story now~ teh last oens are only for my little notebook xD *will type one up*
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to Celestial-moon-fire [2011-01-17 17:27:36 +0000 UTC]
aww, if you need any help, don't hesitate to ask, just send me a note ^^
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Celestial-moon-fire In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2011-01-17 21:38:23 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I think I can handle it. I wrote two before already, though tehy coudl be better :'D I'll keep it in mind if I do need help though xD
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to warriorfan001 [2011-01-12 16:46:23 +0000 UTC]
YAY! go my fellow yaoi writer
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warriorfan001 In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2011-01-14 01:06:20 +0000 UTC]
you will be the first to see it now i gotta come up with an idea
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to warriorfan001 [2011-01-14 18:03:09 +0000 UTC]
if you need any help just send me a note ^_^
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warriorfan001 In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2011-01-16 00:27:07 +0000 UTC]
thanks a bunch *3*
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foxy1359 [2010-12-29 06:37:42 +0000 UTC]
nice!!!!
hey i want to start writhing yaoi,but i don't know how to start!!!!!
can you help me????
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to foxy1359 [2010-12-29 19:47:54 +0000 UTC]
sure i can, what are you having trouble with?
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foxy1359 In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-12-29 21:00:27 +0000 UTC]
well, i don't know how to start
i have problems with the story
when i wright sex i do not have problems but when i try to wright a story (how do they get to have sex)i can't
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to foxy1359 [2010-12-29 22:55:55 +0000 UTC]
well erm... let's talk about this in note for okies? i can give you some examples there...
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to trottersman [2010-12-18 19:10:58 +0000 UTC]
hm... i guess my favourite pairing is chris redfield and albert wesker
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trottersman In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-12-18 22:12:48 +0000 UTC]
cool i love L and light cus thay make a vary cute cupl and i love them there soooo cute :3
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XcrazyBloodsuckerX In reply to trottersman [2010-12-19 13:39:21 +0000 UTC]
aww, i do like lightxl
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trottersman In reply to XcrazyBloodsuckerX [2010-12-19 16:16:14 +0000 UTC]
yay well you be my Lxlight friend? :3
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