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Published: 2011-12-31 03:10:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 639; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 11
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There was nothing left, rain felt like fire on her skin and she was running from demons, withdrawing into her head, she felt her body began to shake, things grew dark the fire...she could still feel the fire. Anger rose inside of her chest, unexplained anger poured from her...her inner God was seeping out her mouth with each breath the white innocence ran from her chin into the darkness as she rose her hackles and let everything go her markings blared wildly around her and a snarl like no other left her maw.-Edit- Finished it over all, i felt like i needed to add all the symbols that would appear it didn't seem right without them. This makes me feel better...and now...sleep
Phantom at her finest...or well least fine. There were some changes to her design and i really wanted to draw her when i was talking about HeroWolves today. Good times. Last piece of art before the new year most likely.
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Ahh no crit box here? Oh well, let's get down to busyness.
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First impressions are that is has potential to look great! But what it lacks is refining.
The lineart is sloppy- and that ruins the overall feel of the piece. Aside from the lineart being sloppy, it being all one colour also disrupts the flow of the piece, especially where you show the light of the letters to be.
If I may, I would suggest to paint the image, or at least change the colour of the lines so that is doesn't disrupt the flow, but following on, more attention to the shading would improve the piece. If there is light coming from the letters, you would expect there to be sharp shading and lighting in the areas the letters pass over.
Looking at it, there doesn't seem to be any shading- it seems to be your just placed the light around the letters, and left it be.
So in conclusion to what i've said, I would suggest paying more attention to the light sources, the letters, and it would look simply fabulous! <:
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holy gmpwirneigmwagqeg!!!!>?!.. this iss amazigns.. i loveews evertuhing about this.. the synhols are fuckiing awrsome..
happy new yreas.. itslike 4.30 am here... AHHH!
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Happy new years eve~ its 2:32 pm here xDD
I'm glad you like it! Her design had changed so much i wanted to give her a better picture then just a average head shot soooo this is it~ xoxox
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holy crap my writing went to the shit house.. finely had sleep after 3 days... no more drinking for me :\
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fucking? yes yes it is~ shes a wonderful old character of mine
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Idk why I love this picture so much... It's the amazing detail put into things like the markings and how wild she looks... Hard to believe she's a good guy in this one XD
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Shes not only the good guy shes the leader of all the good guys in the world
but yeah she has some inner demons shes fighting so this is explaining them
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