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Published: 2005-07-25 20:45:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 25001; Favourites: 703; Downloads: 279
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so sorry had to post this:WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mentalΒ
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up aSPECIALROOM to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death.
Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if u copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if u break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or imSORRY
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I own a Manga I really like you style and like talk doing some business with you. Come to my page and click Links.
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Wow very colorful! I really like this! Good job that awesome!
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Your use of colors are great 
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wow, i really love the colouring and the blending of the picture, i love the pose, its centres the picture greatly,
how long did this take?
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omg that is very pretty! I love the details and the colors. It is just beautifully done. I would say you deserve a 15 out of 10. ^_^
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omg i LUV the out fit!!!!! its so cute! X3 how u make it all see through-ish 
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omg i luv this
im puttin it in favs
thanksssssssss lol
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I like it, the colors are pretty. Although the picture looks kinda odd because your lineart doesn't mach, some of them are light lines while some are dark. Plus the legs position seem kinda awkward and her right arm too. Well, all in all the picture is good 
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thx for comment = ) any suggestions on improving my line art?
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nothing much really, you're still better than me, but I think improving proportions would be great though, I mean, some people think that unproportioned drawing would still look great but for me, proportioned drawings are way nicer
PS.
I suck at proportions
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HOLY.
There's so much detail in this. I love it!
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Lovely contrasting of colors. Great job with that.
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Great color use,amazing detail girl you blow me away!
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Pretty piece and nice use of color but I'm seeing little mishaps. So to help out I'm going to explain what's bothering me with the picture and maybe ways that might fix it. So... On her right arm is a bubble of some sort that is really distracting. I'm not sure if you were trying to make another refraction of light or if you were trying to give her some kind of glow but just remove that one.
On the area where her legs are it seems...odd. I can't really explain it. I think what it is that the parts of the dress on either side of her leg seem solid even though there is the see through portions and then when we get to the legs it was like added on as an afterthought. The two sections of the dress don't match the dress portion covering her legs. That's what it is.
Also her left leg seems oddly positioned. I think if you moved her left ankle in and made less of an obtuse angle it would feel more natural however I leave this one totally up to your discretion.
Her right hand feels uncomfortable...my suggestion is move her hand over so that we see the back of her hand instead. That will make it feel less awkard.
As for her head...there is no need for a tilt unless you really want to keep that then...try and move her chin a little in the direction of the tilt to make it feel more natural and less strained.
Lastly the reason why it feels arkward between her upper body and the dress and legs is because you have stark lines and soft lines below. Try and soften the lines on that v shaped belt attached to the dress and soften the lines going up. You don't have to soften them too much but between the belt and the dress you should soften it quite a bit. To lessen the starkness versus soft feel.
I hope I have been helpful instead of that one person who said there was a mess of color. That is not true! You just need to soften her upper body and definately fix the dress over her legs and then it won't be as arkward. Please don't feel discouraged or disgruntled with me in any way.
Awesome ur Chinese Canadian by the way! I'm Irish and Italian and I married a Chinese and German guy. LOL! Talk about mix and match.
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I don't see what the big deal is. Its just a mass of horrible color on top of a below average image. American right? I can tell.
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Well everyone has their opinions and i thank u for being frank with ur comments. It keeps me grounded = )
I'm a Chinese Canadian if you're wondering... and though not the best I can try = P If you have any constructive ideas id be glad to take them into consideration. thx = )
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I'm freakin' jealous, hehe. The coloring/shading/lighting is awesome, and I like the scheme that you chose for her. The transparent material used for her legs are also very impressive (it's overall pretty good though it looks a bit sloppy on that segment by her right - your left - leg. It doesn't take away from the picture horribly, but I can't quite imagine fabric waving like that on its own - I can't help but feel it should be straighter, is what I'm getting at, I guess.) The form seems to be really smooth too, gives a good feeling of grace. Looking at this makes me realize once again how much of a difference the coloring can make in a picture (and I suck at coloring so my pictures always come out as crap)
Perhaps the part that I like the most is actually the detail on the flowers in the back. Don't know why, but the shading and color are just insane. Beautiful little things.
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Woooow! She's beautiful! And the dress is absolutely gorgeous
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Extraordinary use of colors! I love the feel of this picture :3
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